In Different World with Naruto System

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At Divine Wind Continent, there is cultivation system—douqi, illusion and magic.

Ren Tian You was a fan of Naruto, and a single moment of carelessness caused him to arrive in different world.

Unexpectedly, only to discover that his body possessed Naruto system!

What? You will use douqi! I, your father’s taijutsu is also not weak! Look at my shadow dance!

What? You will use illusions! I, your father however have every illusions’ ancestor, Sharingan! Look at my Tsukuyomi!

What? You are a magician! I, your father am a ninja! Look at my fire style——– grand fireball!

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Bringing the Hokage System to Another World
Dai zhe huo ying xi tong dao yi jie
IDWWNS
带着火影系统到异界
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LoliconAkuma
LoliconAkuma
July 14, 2019
Status: Completed
Okay I am going to make this quick, I understand why the author made a LOT of things like the system points and sh*t like that.

The novel to me looks like a regular fanfic so I will not rage much.

But the problem that this novel faces, a critical one is the relationships of the MC.

... more>> The MC is insanely handsome ok normal after all its chinese and we should know how addicted chinese are to these tropes.

Its simply a fantasy so just live with it. But the developement is simply nonexistent. Romance whatever it is due to rushing the story plot dev just disappeared.

Now to the naruto powers:

(I will keep quiet about mistakes in naruto ability information)

The MC is able to show the awesomeness of naruto powers in a different world but the author simply rushes too much.

Power scaling is kinda there and the worlds system is fairly stable but, the author, to me simply wanted to create a character of sasuke who does not go batsh*t emo and has some naruto qualities. Well just imagine sasuke and naruto are one person.

Basically what I want to point out is that the fanfic has three main problems:

1. Rushed to the extreme

2. Poor character dev

3. Powers and everything are all self service of the author (But if the author never planned to make this something for othees then this problem is not that important)

Note:

If you want to read it then it should be for the OPness of the naruto powers in another world.

DO NOT in any way get draan in to the world building or attempts at character dev it would just land you in a dead end. <<less
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Steam Bun
Steam Bun
July 26, 2018
Status: Completed
Steam Bun here~

I like this novel, I like it a lot because it basically different from other CHINESE Novel where almost have 4/5 bulsh*t and 1/5 plot.

But I just don't get it, the system like can alive and murmured in chap 50-150 I forget where is it.

But why it suddenly disapear without trace and just like that boom!!!! The novel chapter completed!!

Where that system administrator go?

#Hope more chinese novel have plot like this
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Cortizelic
Cortizelic rated it
June 6, 2018
Status: --
Its bad, half of the time there's cringy lines such as "I your uncle or father" if you don't like lines such as this I don't recommend you read this novel as it appears quite frequently. I also notice that the author over hypes characters and the ending is tr*sh, it says the main character will shock the continent for using gedo rebirth but it actually never happens. There's tons of bullsh*t and move spam, lack of character development and doesn't make sense in general.
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ceeglenn1994
ceeglenn1994 rated it
January 7, 2018
Status: --
I'm rating this quite low just for objectivitys sake.

But hey, it's a fun read. I'm personally not a fan of naruto but I like the power system it has. I just hate that naruto the manga turned ninjas into corny beings and the pathetic attempt of drama. Well the music was cool though.

Anyways, regarding this novel. I admit that when it comes to the criteria of a good novel, this novel doesnt really mean fart but if you just change your perspective, then it's a fun read. The author is... more>> obviously either immature our just not that smart so if you expect some thought provoking stuff, then read some Patterson books. If you expect exceptional narrative and plot, read tolkien.

If you want toa read something just for aughs, then I recommend this. <<less
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I Said What I Said
I Said What I Said rated it
November 21, 2017
Status: Completed
So i'll just lay some stuff out.

This is basically a self-insert wish-fulfillment fanfic. Only he isn't in Naruto's world, it's a different cultivator world.

He has access to a system that lets him exchange points (earned by killing) for any and everything Naruto. Jutsus, Fighting Styles, Items, Seals, Summons (including the tailed beasts), special techniques, ETC.

He was revived into the body of a 'tr*sh' clan-member that'd been killed by his clan's assassin's after he was excommunicated. So one of his goals is to repay the debt to his new body's old... more>> owner and wipe out his clan.

He was revived with Lvl 1 Sharingan, which he spends points to eventually upgrade to Mangekyo. Though his ultimate goal is Rinnengan so that he can become the 10 tails jinchuriki and use that power to return to his own world. But that costs a monumental amount of points so it seems it's quite far off.

The 'system' Removes a lot of the drawbacks on things. His Mangekyo will eventually make him go blind if he doesn't unlock the 'Eternal Mangekyo' but at the same time, the system removes any discomfort and pain he would experience by using the Mangekyo's abilities, and he can even spend points to reverse the blindness. So... It's OP and there's no reason not to use it all the time.

He's eventually becomes a Sasuke Cosplayer. (Hilarious)

He's... Very arrogant... which you should pretty much expect. He runs into his sister from his former clan and some noble 2nd in line kid or something and she explains to the kid and his guards that MC was tr*sh and booted from the clan. MC threatens if she calls him tr*sh again he'll kill her. 2nd inline Kid says "This tr*sh...!" and it leads to MC killing all the guards in broad daylight in the middle of the street in the middle of the city. City guards show up and ask what happens, MC says "I killed them because I don't want trouble" or some such nonsense that would never be excused.

He bumps into a group of 'Noble' kids that are his age (there's even a prince and princess among them) and instantly becomes friends with them after asking for directions. Three of them happen to be peerless beauties so you can imagine where that's going. They become such good friends they invite him to the elite school they go to, which he can enter after fighting a guard as a test. The battle was basically a carbon copy of the Lee v Gaara fight in the chuunin exams with MC taking the place of Lee, only this time it's an overwhelming victory for MC. After his acceptance he's given a room in the 3rd dorm which was and all boy's dorm but it was converted to an all girls dorm and he's going to be the only male living there... so there's that.

and this is all within the first 35 chapters.

In summary, This isn't that good. If you step into this trying to take it seriously you're only setting yourself up for disappointment. Just do as I do: turn off your critic's eye and sit back and watch a car crash.

Edit: After having read through the entire story completely I can only say: The ending was super rushed and that made it quite unsatisfying.

EVERYTHING IN THIS REVIEW AFTER THIS IS A SPOILER (for the 'romance' in this story)

Spoiler

The [Romantic Subplot] tag is on this for a reason. It's a sub-subplot. He has no time for ladies. Until he does have time for one. Even then once 'it' happens it's like "That was it?" and boom some odd chapters later MC up and says he has a wife to another character. Their wedding must have happened off-screen I guess.

He has a teacher at one point that literally falls in love with him, instantly, for no reason, and without warning. There was literally no sub-text. It was straight out of left field. Nearly all of the comments on the chapter it was revealed in were people saying "WTF?". It's even weirder than that. When he's leaving the school for something and tells her he doesn't have time for women, she straight-up cries. A full grown adult woman breaks down into tears over some kid she has literally shown no interest in.

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Cornrows627
Cornrows627 rated it
September 3, 2017
Status: c381
One of my Guilty Pleasures.

I will be honest this novel is definitely not for most people. However, for those who are open to a Naruto fanfiction, this one is pretty alright¯\_ (ツ) _/¯. Just do know if you're looking for something with great plot then look elsewhere. This novel is more about the coolness and fangasm of having a Naruto System where you can get all of the Naruto-verse jutsu's, bloodlines, and all that good stuff.
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lightmage5
lightmage5 rated it
July 21, 2017
Status: c381
A rushed ending with a lot of plot holes that aren't explained. Only read if you like the Naruto fanfic. Bad romance, half the fight scene is just *snorting*. Really there is almost no pros to this story whatsoever.
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wizardjian
wizardjian rated it
June 12, 2017
Status: c328
Short Summary: A college student that loves Naruto (yes the manga/anime naruto), falls asleep in front of his PC one day and is transported to a world, in a different body. The body he took over is very weak when taking into consideration of the way of cultivation in this world. Better yet he is in a extremely dangerous place, however, god knows why, he now has what is basically a gaming system that gives him all the powers of the Naruto world.

Pros:
Lots of explaining: (being the Naruto fanboy... more>> he is, he explains about every Naruto based thing hes doing)
Decent cast of side characters: (decent side characters that interacts with the MC allowing him to show different sides of himself besides just being arrogant)
OP MC Naruto style: (the MC grows s*upid fast with the help of the system and uses lots of Naruto based stuff to beat things into oblivion)
See the Akatsuki in a different world: (MC rebuilds his version of the Akatsuki and become even more OP)
It's a Naruto fanfic: (it's a naruto fanfic by (probably) a naruto fan for naruto fans. so expect lots of naruto stuff)

Cons:
Too many abilities: (with the system, the MC can get basically ANY power in the naruto world. So the majority are just used once or twice then forgotten until god knows when and then poof, oh ya he has that too...)
Too many deus ex machinas: (whenever a actual problem appears the MC just HAPPENS to stumble into something to fix or resolve it. So not much suspense there when that happens all the time)
It's a Naruto fanfic: (panders to naruto fans HEAVILY so people who don't like Naruto may not enjoy it much. Also starts diverging off Naruto lore into legit fanfic stuff may anger some Naruto fans.)

Conclusion:
In a Different World with the Naruto System is a hella fun read if you like Naruto and can stand all the fanboying this LN has. The MC isn't just angry or sad, but rather has all the emotions a normal person has so it's rather relatable at many points. Plenty of funny moments to break up the action (and fanboy) filled battles making it less likely to get sick of the fanboying. There is also enough original ideas and such so that it isn't just purely Naruto Naruto Naruto over and over. However, the biggest problem I have with this LN is the deus ex machinas, IT'S EVERYWHERE. Oh enemy too strong? KAMUI to the rescue! Fighting dragon gods? Just happens to gotten enough points for a few tailed beasts! So basically this LN has zero moment of suspense where you will wonder if the MC is gonna make it and how, since you know if something goes bad, poof the answer just pops out of thin air.
If you can get over the fanboy nature of this fanfic and also the absurd amounts of deus ex machinas, you will enjoy this LN a lot since it does what it does extremely well. <<less
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Whatif
Whatif rated it
June 6, 2017
Status: c381
This story starts off very good, but the last couple of chapters were horrible. The ending was simply rushed and many mysteries were left unsolved. I feel giving it a 4 star is generous, but a 3 star is too harsh when most of the story was excellent. I originally rated it 5 stars (at the time I was around chapter 300), and the reason it still displays 5 stars is I am not sure how to change it)
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SoundTramp
SoundTramp rated it
June 2, 2017
Status: c300
As you can probably tell by the reviews; this is a very polarizing LN. There are people like me who enjoy the fresh twist on the typical xuanhuan story, and there are those who find it too filled with tropes and a weak plot to like it.

In other words, you need to read it yourself to see if you'll really like it or not. I certainly did, but I'm not you. I'd recommend reading to chapter 12 to give the novel a chance (it's a light read, so 12 chapters... more>> go by quite fast even if you're a slow reader).

Happy reading! <<less
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Daniel14541
Daniel14541 rated it
February 13, 2017
Status: c200
I tried to power through and ignore all of the horrible qualities... couldn't do it. It just got worse and worse and worse. If your hypped about naruto then this is a story you will potentially enjoy, if you can just stand naruto though I don't recommend it. The writer had issues with consistency. He placed limits on the system... and then just ignored them for his self insert. The guy can probably punch the planet and explode it and then sneeze to bring it back by this point.
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darich
darich rated it
September 26, 2016
Status: --
Pretty fun read if you're a naruto fan, u'll probably hate it if not. You'll start fangirling when he uses naruto jutsus and sharingans and stuff.

Again if you're bored and you love naruto this is the thing for you, if not just pick another novel, you might felt your time was wasted.
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WindyWind
WindyWind rated it
September 19, 2016
Status: c84
A surprising read.

The first time I only managed to reach chapter 2, before dropping this, thinking I would never read this again. But I was wrong. Somehow I decided to read it again a couple of weeks later, and I actually read it till the end of current translation.

A novel with as bland of characters as they get. Every single character is empty, without a personality. But strangely I wasn't bothered by it... too much. Till now it was better than most of the generic Japanese novels. Then there is... more>> the descriptions. Be it either training (except some rare occasions), fights or just the overall situation, it is all very vague or rushed.

Spoiler

Literally the first 5 or so chapters show that, where author just sums up the beginning arc, 2 years of training, in those few chapters. After that there will also be a few more time skips, during which nothing happens besides MC gaining a new ability.

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But still it was kinda interesting seeing a MC with totally different skill set compared to the others. It might also be the sole reason I enjoyed this novel.

Would I recommend this novel for others to read? No.

But if you are bored like I was, with almost nothing else to read, then you might as well give this a try. At least imo it's better than some other generic stories.

A small tip tho: skip the beginning. I myself started reading at c2 or c3 at my second try, and it definitely helped me to stick to the story and not outright drop it. <<less
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marchex
marchex rated it
September 14, 2016
Status: --
It's akin to the numerous gaming fic that are popular nowadays. A guy is transported in a xianxia world wherein he possessed the naruto gaming system. He needs points to acquire skills. The first chapter was rough, snd the constant "I, your father..." quips were a tad annoying. Nevertheless, it was enjoyable reading about the MC using the various op skills in Naruto in this kind of xianxia setting. The fights are enjoyable. This is not a deep reading, but a fun romp if your a fan of both.
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rikuolin623
rikuolin623 rated it
July 19, 2016
Status: c23
Let me be clear, I'm totally cool with the story but not the translation. My main gripes is the incorrect translation in Jutsu and Kekkai Genkai. For example Madara's famous fire elemental Jutsu, Great Fire Annihlation (game) /Majestic Destroyer Flame (anime) is horribly translated to Great Inferno. Likewise the famous plot relevant Rinnegan is spelt Rennegan throughout the translation. The story is cool but the translator is not knowledgable enough to be translating a Naruto fanfic if he couldn't even get these two right. Did the translator even watch the... more>> anime... <<less
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CrispyNoodle
CrispyNoodle rated it
July 18, 2016
Status: c32
Holy sh*t storm this series is reeking with Fandom with every damn sentences... Personally I ashamed of reading this but as Asian novel, I think it's actually pretty interesting. The characters growth (not mentally/emotionally) is too damn fast paced, it's like all of a sudden, he becomes OP with no step by step challenges along the way. There is just a sudden time skip and BAM he's one of the top experts that can bully people already. Also my biggest pet peeve... the term *I your father* is used too... more>> damn much... like come on its like it's there only there for chapter length. And again.... I am ashamed of reading this even though I'm giving it a 4/5 in ratings. You should give it a try too. Plus there's always the option of not adding this to your reading list if this series shames you like it does to me. <<less
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Gadget
Gadget rated it
July 12, 2016
Status: c22
A disappointing start but it becomes a little more interesting after 10 chapters

It's full of flaws, yes. The characters are 2 dimensional, the world building is average at best, the style is average as well. But it's not the kind of story that should be taken too seriously. It's for people who love Naruto-verse ninjutsu and other techniques. People who want to see abilities from the Naruto-verse being used in a different setting.

It's something to read when waiting for the updates of your favourite works, too relax a little.
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nazarick
nazarick rated it
July 10, 2016
Status: c19
I think that this series has a lot of potential for growth. Granted it is not perfect and I might be a little bit biased as I am a fan of the naruto series. I found it to be an enjoyable read although there really aren't enough chapters out yet to tell if the story is good or not. If you like naruto, you'll probably like this.
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delf20k
delf20k rated it
July 1, 2016
Status: c7 part2
It not the copyright that this is breaching but the trademark and as a parody type story that might be let go. This story just seems like nice light entertainment. To take it too seriously is to miss the whole point. If you wish to read this just relax and enjoy it. Even if the elements are not original the mix is still more original than most of the lite and web novels of this type.
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Soma
Soma rated it
June 27, 2016
Status: c6
Hey, it's unique story based on Naruto but in cultivation world. So far, it's interesting idea. Try it if you are bored with typical xianxia story with typical cultivation.
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