Super Card System

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In a world where human and monsters relied on mystical fruits and their inner power to fight for dominance, a lost soul was thrown, given the powers from all the other worlds he’s known. But there was a catch; he had no control over what power he would get! With knowledge beyond that of most, he sails his path to the top of the one piece world!

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SCS
超级卡牌系统
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berserksloth
berserksloth rated it
October 10, 2019
Status: --
Slow-paced slice of life type, kinda. But the main point, it is damn funny
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DubiousPhoenix
DubiousPhoenix rated it
December 1, 2023
Status: c436
One of the first Fanfictions I've ever read, and I'm kinda baffled at how good it is. If you're a fan of those Novels where our MC Isekais into a game or book they are intimately familiar with, then this should click well for you.

Our MC is a "Swordsman" with a Gacha system based around cards. I've never played a Gacha like this but the comparison I'm using in my head is the MMORPG Lost Ark. You draw cards of characters that inhabit the world and you get a fraction... more>> of their power. You can upgrade those cards with duplicates. The difference here is the cards aren't just a fraction. They are the whole damn kit. There are cards for many well known franchises like King of Fighters and Inuyasha, but this is NOT a multiverse story. If you aren't familiar with those franchises, your eyes will absolutely glaze over trying to make sense of why we can shoot purple flames now.

This system I think isn't just our MCs greatest flaw but also the story's greatest flaw. To draw cards, our MC needs to convert cold hard cash. I'm talking millions and millions of Beli. And naturally our MC works towards that goal. That itself isn't really the problem. The problem is why I called our MC a "swordsman". After a certain point in the story (and for the record, the MC IS conscious of this) our MC treats his system as a Devil Fruit. And instead of his blade being his main form of attack, now it's really more about his cards pulling out batsh*t abilities. It's not bad per say our MC doesn't feel too overpowered and he can get stomped out like a light by many stronger forces. But it's obvious that the card system, despite being the hardest part of the novel to grasp plays the biggest role in any and all action. The action sequences written before the MC secures enough money to upgrade his system and relies on his swordplay and wits is written A LOT better imo. The fights end up far more interesting, intense, and witty.

Otherwise, the story is engaging and well paced (if a bit fast at times), our MC has the intelligence of some of One Piece's smarter characters, the impulsiveness of people like Luffy and Ace, and the heart of a good natured pragmatist. It makes for a unique spice that pairs well with any dish. By that I mean he feels like he belongs in the world. He's not just existing along-side it. And this translator or editor brings this story to life. Seriously.

Give it a shot. Even if you think you hate fanfiction or you hate Chinese Isekai, I think you can find something special here without much digging at all. <<less
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Mahesvara_
Mahesvara_ rated it
October 29, 2023
Status: c7
I really want to read this, it seems interesting. But the actual translation is too ret*rded, so I tried Google Translate on sj. Uukanshu and it's grammar is actually Perfect I hardly find mistakes, no kidding. The only problem in Google Translation is that the names become chinese which makes it hard to read. So without a choice I had to suck it up and choose the cursed translation but I had to go to Google translated site every paragraph to understand what was said in actual translation which is... more>> not worth it at all. I might pick this up if an editor fix this shit. <<less
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MintMintTob
MintMintTob rated it
August 20, 2023
Status: c327
Well, Im liking this novel the only thing I didn't like is some things like Kuina suddenly seems to be at the MC level but is just she doesnt have haki yet, or that the cards the MC is mostly from games but this one is just something I have against because I was expecting more anime cards I repeat there is nothing wrong with this is just for me.

But that is not enough to be 4 stars instead of 5, the reason I give this novel 4 stars instead... more>> of 5 is because the inconsistency <<less
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LoliconAkuma
LoliconAkuma rated it
May 1, 2023
Status: Completed
I hate people talking bad about fics without even finishing 50% or completing it but honestly for this fic I wish I stopped earlier and wrote this review then.

So to start a lot of people comment on this fic being "original" and the author being good at weaving his story into the one piece story. To those claims I say BS, the scenes, plot points and various other character personalities and character arcs are basically cardboard cut-outs of the straw hat crew with different names and abilities.

Biggest one is the... more>> MC who is basically an edgier version of Luffy, but one that barely put in effort for his own powers. Yes, we have a slow start but after he began sailing he basically got powerups ever other chapter because of the system using money instead of some hard to come by resource or original currency. So story arcs are basically, "MC is losing but finds mountains of cash, uses it to whale and gets OP- MC wins".

If that was not bad enough the arcs were all basically rephrased versions of Luffy's own journey, yes, a lot of the stories occurred in different islands, yes, the characters are somewhat different, but if you are a one piece fan you'd get the weird feeling that the feels so like one piece then you recall a scene from the actual one piece anime then it hits, "Author basically redid Luffy's story but with different characters and a different setting". Of course since the MC has a different personality things go a little bit differently but the emotional scenes and many of the "original" story arcs of the fic become predictable and boring since you could already see what is going to happen since it has a parallel from one piece, its like reading the Dressrosa Arc and superimposing it with the Alabasta Arc but this time it does not have Oda's creativity and ingenuity to make the arc its own thing. But the worst is when the author uses Oda's humor not by understanding Oda's formula but by copy and pasting said formula and reenacting comedic scenes with different characters.

This problem gets even more obvious when the story reaches the later arcs fighting against the yonko and world government which has parallels to both Luffy's battles and you could only see just how bad the author is at creating his own story when you read his original final battle. After all One Piece has yet to have an ending so the author is basically forced to make up his own at that point.

But that is not the only problems this fic has, a lot of opportunity was lost simply because the author probably got too lazy to keep track of all the systems capabilities and the abilities the MC got from the system. There were a lot of things he could have done but they were all tr*shed probably due to laziness as the story gets worse the farther along you get.

But the worse thing I got from this fic is that despite all its problems, the way it was written was quite good. Yes, the writing was obviously done by a seasoned writer, the flaws were all on the fact that it was not original and plot holes continued to increase in number as the story progressed.

Simply put the biggest sin of this fic was that unlike a standard fic with bad writing and self-insert type storytelling. This fic was done more to earn money from fans than a true fanfic, it lacks the true love of the series we could see from other fan fics. This is made evident when you see how characters are treated, female characters which many probably love are treated with more care than male characters who few care about.

Honestly, I had high hopes for this as the author was the same one who wrote custom made demon king but I honestly think he should stick with Terror Infinity like stories as he did good, in fact a lot better when writing about an MC invading a certain fictional world and messing it up than he did writing about an isekai into a fictional world.

Overall, this story is not a fanfic written by a fan but a possible cashgrab by professional writer under a different name.

P.S. I did not want to show any examples as they would contain spoilers and that would only make this review longer than it already is. <<less
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Daniel Potter
Daniel Potter rated it
January 1, 2021
Status: c212
I'm really enjoying this right now. Of all the One Piece fanfictions I have read so far, this one comes 2nd place (1st place God of Soul System obviously). The plot is exciting, and I very much like the fact that he's affiliated with Zoro and Ace so far. The relationship he has with those two is so good, I find myself giggling whenever they interact. He's not OP to the point where you're just at ease thinking it's obvious he'll win whenever he's fighting strong opponents, nope, instead you... more>> get anxious, thinking, "how is he gonna survive this one?". Though his system is a money grubber, and trust me, sometimes it gets irritating, but he has luck on his side. He doesn't want to rely too much on it, so he tries to combine his current skills to create powerful ones. He just to get stronger his own way, with the system as a catalyst, since it's a money pit, but he gets stronger by the day, to the point where he's called a "monster". Overall, I love it. I rated it low by accident, but it's getting an UP🆙 <<less
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po-po
po-po rated it
November 21, 2020
Status: c479
butterfly effect BAD.

the story was fun until the main storyline started and when the events of the main storyline started getting messed up. I lost interest.

all the key moments of character building were lost and even
Spoiler

robin got poached, Zoro never met hawk eyes, Arlong park event never happened & next Enel and his cronies were defeated by m.c. Even before Luffy's crew had a chance to meet any of them. And Luffy being rubber guy became pointless

[collapse]
and @ that point, I decided to drop it.
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ChaoticMind
ChaoticMind rated it
April 26, 2020
Status: c13
Translation & Edits:

Needs good editor since translation is wack! Wrong choices of words make the flow of the story awkward. It's readable but irritating for me. If you're okay with machine translation and do not care about grammar then you're good to go since the translation is better than the mtls one.

Story:

So for the story, I don't know if it's good or bad.
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