YI BYUL or 'Boss'

I remember in the story, the MC (Hajin) once told Yoo Seung-Ah (Kim Suho's love interest) that she doesn't need to worry because Kim Suho only likes older women. It wasn't written exactly like this but on the same context.

He's the author so I assumed it is the setting that he made for the character. And sometimes authors reflect themselves to the characters, right?

• • Yoo Yeonha, because she is ambitious and a hard-worker. Although she started of a little b*tch-y, her character is really cute, caring and hard-working. She's really a very good friend to the MC. I even wished that she is the FL but sadly, that didn't happen.

• • Evandel, because she's a cinnamon roll and I really like her father-and-daughter bonding with the MC.

Yes, I only like the 2 of them.

There is also 'Akatrina', the world where Kim Suho originated from

Who am I kidding? I bawled my eyes out reading this. The journey of an author into his own unfinished novel, and with the worlds within worlds concept, the levels, abilities, etc. AJFLKKSGA Hajin just makes me really sad and proud with his character development.

The MC (Hajin) is an author who lost passion for his novel, left unfinished, and decides to allow a "co-author" to redo the novel and finish it. However is then forced into this redone version of the novel. (Kind of like tr*sh of the Count's Family except the MC only has the first draft instead of knowing the definite facts up to a certain point like Cain does, which I also liked).

The main ability is to modify things using 'story points' (gained by how significant he is to the world) which in itself is op. However he can also create 'gifts' - the unique abilities of this world using story points even having the ability to create a gift worth 10, 000 SP for free as his first one. This gift he creates which the one time 10k sp is understandable, as it allows him to use any ranged weapon more easily which makes sense for someone from Earth, however after that he hardly uses this ability even though there are quite a few abilities that would be helpful. It also feels like he hardly tries to gain sp, instead just taking whatever he would have to do to move the plot forward more openly instead of doing something for the purpose of it.

The example I think of is NEET with a dating system or whatever it is called where even if its only mentioned we at least know the MC is active in gained points for his similar abilities

Only failing once and even then he uses a skill to rewind which also triggers a special luck boost which has been there from near the start of the novel, but hardly does anything with this gained luck which hard been accumulating through 300 ish chapters.

The ending was VERY empty. Some things are just completely forgotten and leaves a horrible aftertaste. The biggest offender being the fact that it literally ends with the original-villain/rival-turned-good Jin Songhak (Im bad at remembering these names and Im not going to check) who is from another world which is completely destroyed returning to the place even though the MC in the arc based around the two gets an item which can recreate a version of that world which they saved in that arc but just doesn't use it. In fact out of the 3 main female characters for the MC, whilst my favourite is the one the MC eventually is with, Jin Songhak is completely neglected by the end by almost everyone and the first main FL is implied MAYBE of regressed back in an attempt to be with the MC or not, we have no idea and it seems kind of random.

If anything would lower the score it would probably be that the ending feels like there was at least 5-10 chapters missing

is creating misunderstandings by hiding his real thoughts

Chae Nayan. Acted like a complete as*hole in the beginning, forced herself onto the MC despite the MC purposely avoiding and treating her like sh*t and took years for character developement

final route was unpredictable until the later half (thank god for no harem) and the final shipping was my favorite.

Chae Nayun's brother's death and when she found out that the man, she loves was the mu*derer or when we found out more about Kim Hajin's or rather Kim Chundong's and the connection to the Chameleon Troupe and especially how the relationship with Boss played out.

harem story eventually, because that really wouldn't have fit into the story imo and would've been a reason to drop the novel instantly.

when chae Nayun brother die, it really hit the spot. MC has to make an extreme decision and carry the burden alone without others know about it.

I hate and like Chae Nayun character, she is so irritating but so pitiful at the same time. At first she is like a b*itch, but as time pass, she is so pitiful that I can't just hate her entirely. Still, the drama between she and MC a bit annoying because it is delayed for too long.

The ending is a bit lacking though, the MC focus is rather lacking. It focus too much to other characters and not ended by the MC or the aftermath of his decision. It's like he become an extra.

the minigame DP where the knight girl not mentioned anymore.