Lmao he's so st#pid. Idk why he can't be mature.

Tf

Just don't If you can't stand st¢pidi1y.

It's fun and worthy to read though warning:

there are times I don't understand why MC did this or that. Sometimes his actions make the situations more likely to go bad or like inefficient which is annoying so if you want to continue reading think like the MC and forget about it lol. MC makes it seem like it doesn't matter since it already happened and anyway the ending is what he kinda wanted.

Also, this fanfiction is kinda sad knowing people around you eventually dies.

Anyway, I had fun reading it... more>> and now waiting for more updates and excited to find out what happens next especially Toneri 😍😍 <<less

Since others have already said what I've thought about this novel. I'll just say that it's a well made fan fic. Some minor flaws in the translation but it doesn't bother me too much and since our translator over here seems very dedicated, I guess you'll easily forgive him lol. Thank you very much for the translations Mr. OtakuKage <3

Suprisingly good

It being a naruto novel made me never want to pick it up in the first place, but it really avoids the annoying cliches that plague this sort of novel (young masters, arrogant idiots, etc)

It's funny, sometimes smart, sometimes sad. It does the "never age, but see everyone around you die of old age" trope really well

... more>> Worth reading, but not a masterpiece or anything of the sort. This is coming from someone who doesn't like Naruto. If you do, it might be 5 stars for you.

I also like the translator. He makes a lot of typos and minor mistakes, but he translates the jokes well, explains the references and is charming <<less

Is that Lavi bookman from D. Gray-man on the cover?

Anyways uh this novel. Uh I dont know how to feel about it. Theres this inward cringe but at the same time if you dont think about it I guess its ok as a transmigration/reincarnation/isekai story

it's well writen, it goes well with the world background of the naruto verse, but the author manage to give some unique spin on it, while I'm not against using time skip as a way to keep the reade engaged, I wish for him to describe some of the event during the so called skip, maybe use them as a way to set up future events. As for the main character, his decision making seem coherent and doesn't insult the reader intellegence, in summary, I give a 4 out... more>> of 5 for now cuz the real challenge will come when the story touch the main story line of naruto and naruto shippuden.

out of all the naruto fan fics I have seen on the internet this is one of the very few that has me reading beyond chapter 10.

i heartfully congratulate the author on doing a great job on getting this story interesting. One more thing thou, the fight scenes could use some more work, and the way masahiko get the point for the system are getting a bit to easy, gotta balance power levels otherwhise he will becomo too powerfull to have any meaningfull fight. <<less

It's a very well translated and well written novel. I will give a warning that it's not finished and it seems like it was dropped. My only real problem with it is the main character. Despite being born into the world and living in it for 50 years before the novel even begins, he never really became a part of the world. For all the chapters I've read, it's almost like he's still the otaku that watched the series on repeat over and over again that he used to be.... more>> He keeps saying how he wants to get strong so he doesn't die, etc. Somehow he still treats the entire as a tv show. I guess for some people, it might be something that draws them in. For me, it was a big detraction in the story. I've read some other novels that take place in anime worlds, but this was the only one where the MC doesn't integrate into the world he's tossed into. <<less

I only read to chapter 30

The events aren't bad honestly, it's just the characters that I couldn't like with the MC being first. The world is at 3rd ninja war, with clans fighting to death. Again not everything is bad, but the drawbacks are really big

So, the MC is an adult chinese that was reincarnated in the Uzumaki clan and lived to late 40. He reached Jonin by that time and was one of the eldest people (people die quite young there). A recap on what I saw :

-He almost... more>> never participated in battles except if patriarch insisted on that. A minus for me, it's been 40years and still can't get attached to his clan or what? He sees people keep dying still doesn't want to fight

-Never tried to birth children (again it's war time, not having children is a problem in those clans) that's a minus for me. Even more since he doesn't want to fight

-He's so silly it's disgusting as an adult in first life + 40years there.

-Still seeing the world as a manga/game or whatever it is. That's annoying

That's before the start of the novel.

After the novel :

This world is a game for him. He's still silly. Behaves like a 20yo that just transmigrated in some other novel.

Worst of worst, the system makes him able to get younger (literally, his body rejuvenate) with no limit in sight. His system is very powerful, I mean really very powerful. After a first power-up where he can contend with patriarch what does he do? AFK for 5 years.

I just don't understand why the author used a reincarnated adult man and old person only for him to be as silly as a child

A bit of a spoil :

Spoiler

He first rejuvenated 10years, then "FORGOT" he could transform and shown himself to the overlord of the zone!!

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How silly can he be??? <<less