The Second Coming of Gluttony

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“The son of god Gula has returned.”

I was lost in the world of gambling.

I turned my back on my family and even betrayed my lover.

I wasted every day of my life.

It was a life of tr*sh.

The reality told me thus:

That I would amount to nothing no matter what I did.

In order to change my pathetic life, I chose fantasy, instead.

Even then, it was the same story.

I wondered if salvation would come at the end of the long road.

But, I was forced to kneel down in defeat in front of a powerful entity.

The tower I built up with my own hands crumbled into nothingness.

Just for once, I dearly wished to know the truth about myself.

“Come closer, my child…”

I will not hold back this time.

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SCOG
탐식의 재림
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pastlover
pastlover rated it
December 18, 2018
Status: --
My first review.. This novel is so good for me right now!

Super impressed that the MC isn't swooping everything like a maniac, he still has conscience, but still he's annoyingly lucky in some sort, but reading this novel feels like watching a korean drama. A Story of a second chance.
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Killor
Killor rated it
March 16, 2021
Status: c224
Listen, anybody that’s rating this novel anything above a 3.0 is actually brain dead. There’s a difference between finding something enjoyable/entertaining vs. A good story. At best this novel is a 3.5 for various reasons. But, I’ll give a couple to save you from the lengthy reading. 1) The Author introduces a character with two concepts that conflict with each other. Seol Jihu (MC) is “Clever” and at the same time “Dense”. It doesn’t make any sense. MC has the ability to come up with complicated strategies and appear as... more>> a genius. Yet, when female leads begin to BLUNTLY throw themselves at MC and express their love for MC. He’s confused as to why the they’re acting the way that they are. 2) The author then gives us a MC at the age of 26 with the mind of a pre-teen. MC’s age is 26 which is pretty high for his age group. Yet, majority of his interactions with surrounding characters call him “the youth”as well as pamper MC. It’s actually mind boggling. It would be acceptable if MC’s age was 16. Honestly, continuing to read this actually hurts my brain. Other than MC problems everything else the Author does is “okay-good” job at. <<less
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stuffings
stuffings rated it
January 2, 2021
Status: Completed
The Second Coming of Gluttony is a great novel. It is to say, for me, I would reread this novel. I looked at the reviews for SCoG and wanted to do some justice and clarify more on why people would think this is 'bad' or 'good' or make clear on some mistaken things. Also, a lot of the reviews are outdated so I would like give more of an updated review of the novel since the novel is now finished on my take. Most of the things that is written... more>> will be generalized, and I will 'spoil' tag if necessary. A lot of the things that are known in the beginning are explained as you read on. It can be explained in the middle or near end of the series. I wouldn't dare to say it's a perfect novel or even the best. I just love it for what it is.

    1. (MC Does Not Have Character Development) This is probably the most mistaken thing about the novel. The MC is introduced as a young-adult Korean man. He excelled well in education but became addicted to gambling because he obtained some kind of supernatural powers with his eyes that can foresight 'generally', not directly. Because of this, he fell into "a pit" and could not get out until he was given an opportunity to change his ways which was to go to another world called Paradise. However, the MC actually develops into a gambling addict and that was it. You are introduced to what he have become instead of what he actually is or to be more upfront, what he used to be. The more you read, the more you'll understand his character, personality, and how he views the world. He is more afraid of his life choices which is why people could also consider him a 'wimp' or someone that can't make his own decisions. You'll come to know what he was before becoming a gambling addict. He did not have any character development but just turned back to his self before gambling.

    2. (MC Can See Danger, Not Sense It, and it's not OP) His eyes contains an ability to 'see' but not sense. If he was able to sense, he would know danger on many occasions. And yes, it's ability that has to be activated, so the AUTHOR-nim spares us the annoyance of a possible game breaking mechanic or to say "just use your eye-ability". The way the MC uses his eyes is not overtuned nor is it necessarily game breaking. He just has plot armor... The reason why the ability is not a game breaking is because of *spoiler*
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      black seol jihu. If you do not understand what that means, then you haven't read enough or understood the meaning behind the character.

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      The eyes indicates the uniqueness of the scenario the MC is in. Later in the novel, the ability is rarely used and becomes less "OP" but becomes more significant for the story to tell.
    3. (MC is NOT Dumb. He Just Never Socialized Well) To clarify, the MC graduated from one of the top schools in Korea and was supposed to be intelligent in the sense of work (of course fictional for the character). Reading the negative reviews for the novel, saying that the MC is dense and dumb clarifies that they have not read enough. But I am not shunning on the haters. I'm just saying they haven't read enough or had the patience to even try to understand the MC. I never disliked the MC, but he can just be culturally disliked because his view as a Korean or even as a person. Anyways, the MC, only to say, was a loner. As in... he had no friends besides a few. For sure, he is not anti-social from the interactions with other characters. He was "very close" to his family and also treated his few friends like family. The novel never clarified that he had any other friends. As introduced in the beginning, the MC supported a friend with money that he worked for. Of course, everything went down hill because of gambling. And because of gambling, he lost his family's trust and his closest friend. He basically lost everything where we, as readers, don't know that in the beginning. To say he is dumb and dense? No... he just never socialized well. More of his character to be explained are spoilers.
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      His childhood friend (a female) "shaped" the MC to understand her rather than the norm of society. This is probably the annoying factor for most people.

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      There was not much information regarding the MC's social understandings/background. Rather, the novel generalizes the information about the MC to show that he is nothing but tr*sh. I do not know why readers get mad for the MC not understanding s*xual connotations. AUTHOR-nim does not specify that he is a virg*n, but we all know that he is, obviously. A lot of the interactions that can possibly be "sexual" are used as jokes... until a certain point... [People who finished the novel should know what I mean.]

    4. (MC is THE MC) Everything revolves around the MC. You'll understand this if you read the first 100 chapters or a little more. That is why everything around the MC is significant as well as important. He is THE MC to say. The novel derives this more directly because of how the AUTHOR-nim portrays the plots. That is why the novel's 'plot armor' can be annoying to others, but honestly, I like how it's done. The way the MC makes history is what makes a linear story great. No random BS or luck. Events will happen one after the other and indicate a step forward for the MC for each. The MC does not build character but realizes his situation as a person and works his way back to what he originally was as we readers learn about him.
    5. (This is a Realist Isekai) In the sense that isekai is a genre that pertains to going to another world and would EVER be thought to be so real, this novel portrays the brightest as well as the darkest side of current humanity. Or should I say, the possible scenarios. The MC goes to another world as introduced early. People from Earth are called Earthlings, and people from Paradise are called Paradisians and later introduced, the Federation. With the interactions of different people, SCoG portrays the darkest side of Earth put into another world. Fight for wealth, politics, s*x, s*avery, greed. To live for a brighter future or to runaway from Earth. To find a meaning in life... Although, sad to say of the way the world is today, it is more obvious to understand the meaning behind the AUTHOR-nim's point on this. You might assume that there is no reason for this to be put into the novel, but AUTHOR-nim makes a world that a lot of people would be enticed to live for. Even in the beginning of the novel, even the slightest punks can point out that no one will even care what happens to you in another world on Earth. But that is to say, finding a meaning on Paradise can mean things on Earth. That is why the novel is great because of the MC's interaction between Earth and Paradise. The worlds can directly influence each other, and a sense of realism is portrayed well through the characters and scenarios.
    6. (Side Characters and Plot) Honestly, the characters are not over-the-top. Some characters are cliche while some may be unique or just basic. There are only 2 old aged characters in importance and most are around the age of the MC. The MC interacts with each character which can make them noticeably cliche but likeable because of the interactions. 90% of the characters introduced with a name will be important and be used in accordance to the novel. The story itself flows pretty well with the back-to-back events, but sometimes can feel rushed. Some places in the novel feels better than others. Even then, most of this is common in general. SCoG does not take time to make relationship with other characters on the side, but makes the relationship during the events of the novel. There will be characters you will find 'meh', 'average', 'underwhelming', or 'overwhelming' because of how the progression/time is done with each character with the MC. AUTHOR-nim tries to make every significant character as likeable as possible which could be a downside to the novel. But the great thing the AUTHOR-nim does is make the comrades understand the MC and be there to find his way out of "the pit" to find himself back.
    7. (Comic Relief) The MC is a person who just loves to joke and mess around. You come across this side of the MC that is unique to him alone. Once he slowly made his way out of "the pit", this new side of him showed what he was and is. He is a prankster. Even from the worst or best scenarios to throw jokes, the MC makes a prank for an unconditional comic relief. From a dark sadness or the brightest victory, the MC just proceeds to be a prankster because that's just what he is. Although SCoG is not tagged as as comedy, I agree that it isn't. Here and there, you can get some laughs, but I feel that the comedy side of SCoG is just to create a comic relief for all the hardships that the journey is conveyed. I guess this is one of the things people could not like the MC for which is understandable.
This novel is great for sure. There are flaws and some questionable things here and there. Even AUTHOR-nim questions a some of things he wrote. I believe this is his second novel (at least according to novelupdates). He is learning and on his journey to write more amazing content for us readers, and I am looking forward to it.

I thank AUTHOR Ro Yu-Jin, WuxiaWorld, and the TRANSLATOR FudgeNouget for the amazing translation and content.

TLDR:

Just read more of the novel. <<less
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Celes
Celes rated it
November 16, 2020
Status: epilogue
First of all the title shouldn't "The Second Coming of Gluttony" it should be "The Second life? or The Second Paradise? etce etc"

Why? The MC's Goddess is Gula (Gluttony) and the MC is not a even affected much of being a gluton even he become higher level meaning much closer to the Goddess Gula (NOT THE SIDE STORY). [This novel consist of 7 Deadly Sin the higher the level you are the closer you are to your own Goddess. for ex: Your Goddess is Gula (Gluttony) then YOU become more... more>> glutton, you cant SATISFY. If your Goddess is Avaritia (Greed) then you'll be affected by her greed.]

Main Character Seol Jihu
I dont even get the Traits that author make. a Glutton person with a self command traits (which supress emotions, greed and impluses) IT DOESN'T EVEN MAKE A SENSE! remember his Goddess is Gula (GLUTTONY)

He is ADULT and already survive a war, expedition and banquet in paradise and AUTHOR forgot that he should be capable so he stay being IDIOT and why the heck is his sudden Power up where he will be unapproachable and cunning but after that he will become IDIOT again?

He has "Future Vision" and "Nine Eyes" he doesn't even USE it well. Its more like hey look its a "MAIN QUEST I GONNA USE MY SKILL THIS TIME.. JUST THIS TIME!"

He always avoid female approach (I know he is not a LUST.. but he is still a Gluttony why avoid if the female are the one making the move they aren't even a parasite? but it is okay if its Seo Yuhui..)

There is more, HE IS MORE LIKE HAVING MULTIPLE PERSONALITY! HE IS SERVING GULA (GLUTTONY) SO HE SHOULD SUPPOSED TO BE NOT SATIFIED OF HAVING WHAT HE HAVE! HE SHOULD WANTS MORE... yet he RETIRED in epilogue.. a Glutton person quitted so why he become a glutton if he knew when to stop or quit because of his self command traits? then the author shouldn't use the 7 deadly sin if that is the ending. It just to make something cooler name but failed in background development, see? its a waste of time!
Moving to Maria Yeriel.
Dont get me wrong I LIKE HER VERY MUCH (being silly/cursing and queen of stocks) but c'mon she is a PRIEST and what is her Goddess? Its Luxuria (LUST) She supposed to be LUST for MONEY but the author mention she is GREEDY for MONEY. How do I know why Luxuria (LUST) is her Goddess and not Invidia (Envy) because she chant the name of Luxuria when using a skill so her Goddess is Luxuria! Serving Luxuria she should supposed to be LUST for everything not just MONEY!

Every Goddess know what the earthlings thinking. The thing I dont get is about Gula, She knew her naming class sucks, one of the minor reason why Sung Shihyun betrayed them due to her. She already knew it yet keep naming a class sucks makes other earthlings to betray o leave her. She knew MC's past life too. I know she is like that for the sake of COMEDY.

To summarize

I don't recommend this novel. MC Character development sucks, because he look like having multiple personality due to plot armor (sudden power up) then becoming idiot again after the plot armor. I didn't stop reading this novel because I'm already half-way and now I finish reading it still this is my review 3/5.

and No, I'll not re-read this novel ever again. I don't hate the Author or his works. It just a waste of time for me. <<less
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slik
slik rated it
October 13, 2020
Status: c90
I would have rated this at least 4 stars but for 1 glaring problem, the MC, honestly doesn't behave like a grown man, especially when relating with the female characters, he behaves more like some shota 10 year old playing with his older sister. The author is female so I understand that she's just projecting what her ideal guy should be, but honestly I don't expect any normal guy to have rated this more than 3 stars. The story has so much potential too, what a waste
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ksnh
ksnh rated it
July 20, 2020
Status: c350
Stopped a long time ago but just wanted to write a review. This is more of just a list of complaints though.

Complaints:

-MC doesn't use his powers.
Spoiler

Such as the status window, which I remember being very useful in the early chapters but eventually forgotten. Very annoying.

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-The harem. It's not really as intrusive as in anime but you can see that it's there since MC only interacts with females. There's no real fan service per se but the interactions feel superficial/for the sake of a harem.

-Neutral Zone.
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You can get broken items from the neutral zone but not really from Paradise? Just why. I recall one character receiving a certain OP item from MC that he got from Neutral Zone. Like why would the Neutral Zone aka Tutorial have broken items.

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-Paradise concept.
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The whole Paradise concept in itself. You just lose your memories if you die so you should spend time on Earth to even things out. I don't know the whole concept is just strange. I'd rather Paradise just be another place/universe.

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-Sudden power ups.
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Also HunterxHunter spoiler

Spoiler

MC essentially becomes Gon during Chimera Ant Arc and powers up tremendously only for it to ultimately not matter that much iirc. He rests for months but that's about it. I guess it's supposed to be a badass moment but I found it sort of weird. He was already really strong but basically become one of if not the strongest character in an instant? Like wth.

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-It becomes hard to read. With later names like,

Spoiler

Abhorrent Charity and Exploding Patience

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, I don't know it's just weird. The story itself just feels like it's dragging on as well. I can't exactly explain this.

It was probably actually interesting at first but the new things introduced just made everything worse as the story went along. The only good thing I can recall is Ghost Waifu

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bloo-eagle
bloo-eagle rated it
July 4, 2020
Status: c361
I'd like to rate this higher, but I have a major problem with how the MC is treated.

While the novel focuses the MC's wrongdoings towards other characters, it does little to address how other characters mistreat the protagonist.

That just left a poor taste in my mouth. I don't appreciate how abuse is brushed off as a recurrent gag and how no matter what happens, the MC is always the one in the wrong.

Other than that, it's pretty good.
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xikigaix
xikigaix rated it
June 17, 2020
Status: c351
To be honest I would have preferred to read about when Seol was a red marked s*ave than his current situation. The MC is like a pubescent sixteen years old who was homeschooled and never had any interaction with the real world. This twenty-six-year-old man who graduated from the best college in South Korea, majored in (I think it was mathematics) top of his class, is such a dumbass? Like how does he lack common sense like this? When he went into debt undoubtedly he met some unsavory characters in... more>> the casinos, you'd think that he would notice people with bad intentions easier BUT NO he still sucks.

Everything he's accomplished and done after he leaves the neutral zone is complete luck and plot armor. Whenever a mishap occurs conveniently there is someone stronger or smarter than him that gives him an option that he just goes with. I feel that the majority of this novel is just others giving him these plans.

The villain on the other hand is so strong, that even the gods acknowledge that she has the ultimate cheats BUT SHE SUCKS TOO! The side characters are the only good characters imo. For someone who experienced failure in conquering a world before you'd think she'd plot better.

The harem? Absolute garbage. That's it. This novel would have functioned 100x better if the entire harem was excluded. There was only two and a half viable love interest in this story imo
Spoiler

Kim Hannah, Seo Yuhui, and kinda Claire Agnes.

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The rest were unneeded or simply forced onto the MC

The author forgets about the powers that he gave the MC CONSTANTLY, which is Seol's biggest handicap. To be honest it doesn't even really matter if he uses his powers at all because of plot armor. The author also doesn't make sense regarding
Spoiler

Yoo Seonhwa being Baek and everything

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Essentially, this story was only good up to the defense of Arden Valley afterward it just went to shit. <<less
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Daoist CtrlF Quotation Mark
Daoist CtrlF Quotation Mark rated it
March 12, 2020
Status: c259
The story and characters are interesting and enjoyable to read, and I never saw any blatant filler, however there are several flaws.
    • Minor spoiler.
      Spoiler

      Why would the gods decide to grab reinforcements from earth? It's not like they're even bringing earth technology. With MC's tutorial test finishing with ~30 people from his area (one of seven-nine areas) and with the whole of earth doing this test once an earth year we can figure that somewhere around 210-290 new earthlings are brought over every year. So the gods can't be doing this for numbers, in fact these numbers can't even account the saturation of living earthlings. Seems like it'd be a far better outcome for the gods to assist the original inhabitants of the world.

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    • The family drama isn't entertaining, and in my opinion doesn't add any character development to anyone. I dread return to Earth arcs, because I know the only thing I'm in for are overreactions and hamfisted MC pity points.
    • Characters can be very hypocritical with "Paradise addiction". On one hand they'll think it's terrible that Earthings treat Paradise as a video game and NPCs, on the other someone liking Paradise more than Earth is double plus bad and you have to go and fix your family relationships now! Of course the place is going to turn into a dump if all the Earthlings treat the place as a tourist destination, there's a reason everyone hates tourists.
    • Interactions with female characters are odd and vague. MC tends to get into a schoolyard relationship with a good chunk of female characters which never goes anywhere. Each budding relationship stops out of nowhere to start anew with another, often right in front of the other women.
Overall, I'd give it a 3.4.
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LordKade
LordKade rated it
December 2, 2019
Status: c148
Characters feel alive since they are acting on their own motivations, whether that be for personal reasons or money. Arcs are great with each having their own charm. Characters don't randomly get forgotten after being heavily involved in one arc (though the past is never mentioned in the future chapters except as a quick one liner).

Main character is great to follow since he thinks a lot and has issues to deal with. He reevaluates his values and how he sees things, and I love that for him.

Highly recommended! Story hasn't... more>> disappointed yet lol.

*Will update review when finished* <<less
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kuroAnsatsu
kuroAnsatsu rated it
August 25, 2019
Status: c124
One word, Great!

The pacing, Character development, Interaction between characters, almost everything is good. After going through some walls, MC realized that he got lucky and try to prepare for the worst possible outcome in case that luck is no more coming for him, by putting some effort in getting stronger and training to the limit (maybe even past his limit).

He used to be a tr*sh, but he's trying his best to change for the better and try to fix the mess that he had made in the past by trying... more>> to reconcile with anyone related while facing his fear of rejection.

The only complain that I have is that there's only a few more 100 chapters so far while I got this hunger for more chapters! To the point that daily update one chapter per day is not enough for me!! <<less
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unseen_hz
unseen_hz rated it
August 3, 2019
Status: c164
An excellent novel adept at balancing moments of levity and serious heart pounding moments. MC's powers feel earned with long tough training arcs and character change believable. Despite it sometimes having Korean drama like interactions, the reasons for such scenarios to occur is clear or implied. A novel with amazing character development and epic arcs along with fun povs.
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GenoFour
GenoFour rated it
July 17, 2019
Status: c90
This is probably one of the best if not the very best Novel I've read on this site so far, and even if the quality plummets from this point (Which I highly doubt) just reading these chapters will be worth it.

The story starts with a long but extremely good arc that not only gives us an understanding of the world, but develops the characters (Especially the Main Character), is full of action and sets up some of the stakes. The only weak point of this arc is the action, which... more>> is somewhat poorly described, but this problem is quickly solved when the training/preparation arc ends and we are thrown in the real story. From that point on the action scene feel tense, and even if the MC isn't that different from the usual OP protagonist we get at first, every fight has high stakes and you truly feel like he will not be able to win on his own. Every character has value to them, and so far even the slight hints of romance feel natural.

But, like every story, this novel isn't perfect. So far the biggest downfalls of this story are how the "Real World" parts are treated, and how the MC power is somewhat poorly explained and inconsistent, pertaining to both his "Unique" power and his overall combat abilty. The latter is more of a nit-pick that I can only make because the rest of the system is very well designed and thought-out, but the former is something that worries me in the long run. Still, I'm hopeful, and I'm waiting anxiously for the new translator to catch up. <<less
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amanv96
amanv96
February 20, 2019
Status: c68
Genuinely a good story for as much has been translated. Actual character development instead of the monotone personalities.
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Arkeus
Arkeus rated it
January 19, 2019
Status: c12
I had to give up on this. The writing is kind of really damn awful, but beyond this the characterisation is just taking the readers for idiots.

It's the usual thing where you get a character that starts at rock bottom and then get a minimum character development that's actually pretty much nothing but is just enough for the reader to 'feel he has earned progress' and then it goes all the way to the other sideinto pure wish fulfilment.

The combination of this wanking of a pretty atrocious main character and... more>> just a really bad way to write (constant slow down of action where it tries to get into people's mind but instead just make everyone look dumb) means this is a firm derec for me. <<less
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BigFallingRocket
BigFallingRocket rated it
December 22, 2018
Status: c56
Weird/bad/vague novel description/summary in comparison to how the novel is. I, for example, had discovered the novel early, but set it aside after reading the description, cause I thought the protagonist would have the 7. Grader syndrome. Sorted by rating first and decided I had to bcs of the high ratings. The novel gives off a feel like The Novel's Extra.
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Julveury
Julveury rated it
September 5, 2018
Status: c56
Edit: 11/29/2018
The pace of the story is a bit slow. But I think it's the Author's way of laying down the foundations properly which really helps and keeps you on wanting to read the next chapter. Chapters are also long and details are pretty clear.
Spoiler

Also in this universe, people who contributed largely can be granted a wish by a God. Therefore, even though MC is a scum at first round, for some reason he contributed greatly before he died to be given a second chance at life. And yes, this story is about how he changes and rise once again.

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Old review: 9/5/2018
MC is unique from the start due to his ability of kinda like All-seeing-eyes but lost its functionality when he abused its power.

The novel started with an event in the future where MC died in another world. The princess of that place acknowledged his wish and let the God of that world grant it. It's kinda offed me a little when MC got such cheats like the Gold stamp but thinking about it, if he didn't try to negotiate with the woman that woman wouldn't acknowledge him as worthy to get that invitation. We can't say for sure how these stamps were given in each individual. One thing is for sure,
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the s*ave contracts got their compensation in some form (money, etc.) and some invited must have approached someone who knows what is in the new world, had the privilege of having a companion and some other bonuses.

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kokekoo
kokekoo rated it
October 12, 2022
Status: --
OVERRATED!!

I had so much expectations with all the high reviews so I postponed it for like a year yet what do I get? a shit-ty MC and a shit-ty plot.

First of all the MC is supposed to be a tr*shy person who steals from his family and girlfriend, he abused her in the very first chapter yet dunno how it happened he became a 9 year old Japanese MC with high estrogen and low testosterone even tho he is supposedly a 26 year grown ass man. He cries like a... more>> baby in front of everyone he acts childish and extremely naïve. How can they be so evil? well, you used to be more evil than them but dunno how you became a ret*rd mister MC. He is in an "open" sex-ually world yet he acts like he is a virg*n. He is such a bad MC really I despise him. He even tried to kneel before a king as if its normal absolutely spineless and just a bad MC with zero self dignity.

Lets talk about the world. He gets invited by a woman who made him into a s*ave until his death in his first life yet he "will protect her with everything he got" for no reason at all in this life. People are supposedly body transferred into the other world yet when they die there its not a true death dont ask how.

The world starts with someone getting a blowie from a random girl he jusr saw and this is "normal" wtf right? the only explanation we are given is that its boring because there are no computer etc so to relieve themselves everyone is a whore. Throughout human histories and societies promiscuity was IMMORAL and ILLEGAL and FROWNED upon and they had no computers and as many distractions as we have in the modern world so the argument the author made makes no sense at all!! But dont worry our MC is not like that he is very moral he is a 9 year old remember.

He has the s*upid useless ability to see danger yet walks into every danger for ABSOLUTELY NO REASON and will survive because of plot armor.

The s*upid fake "gods" who want to save paradise yet give power to earthlings who give no fck about the world and openly betrayed the original inhabitants, it just makes no sense so what do they do? they make a game to kill them off as if they cant just kill them without the game...

These are just few sht stuff that I can remember off the top of my head. <<less
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DidYunCheGoddamnDieAgain
DidYunCheGoddamnDieAgain rated it
March 10, 2022
Status: c354
First of all, for the time being I came here to complain mid-reading because I'm annoyed about some recurring meh parts of the novel

Second of all, this is a great novel and what I'm complaining about is a small part of the whole that happens very rarely. Read it.

So.. There are two things that annoy me to no end when they happen in this story:

  1. The whole Earth thing. To everyone around the MC, it's apparently a big deal that he's "addicted" to being in Paradise. All it means is that he would rather be in Paradise and do meaningful things rather than sit in his room on Earth and chain smoke.. Because that's what he does when he goes back.. Paradise is in the sort of situation where every moment counts, they're trying their best to save the planet, but for some reason everyone insists that spending months on Earth doing nothing is something that needs to be done. The reason why I'm writing this while reading chapter 354 is because the MCs master said something very smart in this chapter: "You can't live on Paradise because it's dangerous and if you die, people back on Earth are going to be inconvenienced (if you die, you wake up on Earth without memories of Paradise) "... What that means is essentially that during the safe times, you should go waste time to Earth where you have nothing to do and time flows three times faster (day on Earth=3 days on Paradise), and when there's trouble, you go back and risk your life anyways, but you're weaker because you sat and chain smoked instead of training or doing anything useful... Am I missing something? IRL, people move overseas all the time and it doesn't matter, but if you don't want to go back to Earth because you have stuff to do people immediately go full intervention mode? People genuinely treat him not wanting to waste time like he's addicted to black tar heroin... This chapter is right after many people died finally winning humanity some precious time, and literally everyone is like "Nah man, doing stuff is bad. Go back and do nothing.. The enemies will wait.." and treat him like some sort of idot.
  2. The way he never uses his ability. In the beginning he used it too little, but he gradually uses it less and less and right now he probably forgot he has it. Nothing much to say about it. It's the occasional "What do you mean you don't know! Use your goddamn ability, idiot!" while you're reading...
  3. Not really a full complaint, but he does "pranks". But sometimes they're the kind of pranks that would immediately get him ejected out of a friend group. But I suppose it makes sense, because every single one of his companions tortured someone to death, sometimes for their own enjoyment at some point in the story.
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Accore
Accore rated it
November 12, 2021
Status: --
Let me be frank it has too much s*upidity, too much v**ginity, too much contradiction, too much positivity, too much plot Armor, too much B.S.

Those who want to know why click the spoiler

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Spoiler

When an MC becomes a gone case he will come to respect his elder after starting to redeem himself, In childhood, he was wrong so he used his power till exhaustion and become a crippled die-hard gambler.

Miraculously GOD can reverse time and send his feeling back when he starts and he becomes super straight within an hour. A man who left his little sister in the middle of nowhere where her faith would be questionable he become clean with his love interest cry (though when he gamble he gave up on her he never cared about her even she cry before but suddenly he become clean).

His Brother who bullied him becomes a good brother for redemption. His mother and father still loved him even after crossing the line of morals like drinking water. They forgave him so easily as they forgive like "a child who has broken something but got hurt, s you gonna scold him his crying made you waver and you forgive him.

The Romance in this novel is Crap. A woman is ready to die for him, he knows her true feelings but he doesn't what to hurt her but somewhere loves her, so he plays with her feelings and then a bang here comes the main heroine which made MC forget his soul as he falls in love with her. And the woman he was building good chemistry goes down in a drain like some harem heroine who comes late, literally, Author had totally ignored ber on later Stages effectively when the main heroine entered the play.

He jumps to save every female character but ignore all the male character (they can do their arrangement).

And what is striking is that every strong Entity that is loyal to their kingdom are woman, and every villain is a man except the main villain

The personality of MC is like a manchild which is good but getting teased by every woman? He is a wimp total M. He hasn't attained his maturity. If some woman stomps on him he would be a goner for good with a hard-on.

MC has seen what happens to earth Humans when they die, they become seriously defective but according to our Author they are treatable for f*ck sake they are goners. So I was saying MC knows what happens when 1 dies in an alternate world but he still chooses to kill his hated all the fellow earthlings and make them mentally disabled for Alternate world sake and it's funny every MC shitty underlings accept this. And you know what when MC becomes OP he becomes dictator like the North Korean one who they totally hate. I have seen this in all authors MC they are all followers of NK in the shape of lamb brainwashing people.

Well as he attained his goal to kill all earthing cause he knew his underlings will not die he made all earthling cannon fodder in war and all the Veteran are like Godfathers who turned into the underling and are now moving on MC illogical plan.

No one of the big bosses comes forward when MC slams all the earthling as cannon fodder.

According to him earthing has decided on their own will to come to an alternate world but they never mention what offer they were given or to be exactly what scheme those f*cking alternate world has played to coax earthling to become cannon fodder and then mentally ill after their death. This is the thing they never show at the time of admission f*cking losers.

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Literally in this Novel Author has added all the content which made it 5 stars at the start, 4 stars in the middle 2 stars at the main story development, and 1-star when we start to reach from main plot development till the end <<less
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