it felt so good when Luo Bing finally snapped and told Harry to leave her alone and f*ck off. Seriously dude, get a clue, she doesn't like you that way.

It's highly possible several MLs. For now the men who have interest in her are: Harry (annoying, shameless and clingy), Raffles (cute and smart but he is in the friendzone), and the prince of silver moon city Xing Chuan (he is a bastard and double faced, thankfully he doesn't know Luo Bing is a female, also she hates him)

this is a big spoiler, I've warned you.

It's slightly Mary Sue - she never takes a loss. On the very rare off chance she can't defend herself, someone will come and save the day. Honestly the side characters progress more than her.
It's also kind of childish. I don't know how they have 16-17 year old children running around and playing military leaders that can't give or take orders from each other. It's pretty messy and would never work in real life.

And the religion, can I just say ugh, it really hasn't been relevant so far. But they keep randomly bringing up 'god this' and 'god that'. It sounds like they're taking a story and putting it into another.

It's also sexist towards males. Really enforcing the stereotypical image of men and making fun of daintier ones like they're weak. Also while it's open towards gay couples, it's only male ones - there has only been one mention of girls iirc (on a movie screen) and the MC retched as she passed on it.

The story also repeatedly changes its mind. For example, she dresses like a guy when she's 'outside'. Then after a certain incident, she decides to not dress like a guy. But when she arrives to the location, she dresses like a guy afterall. Only to have a night go by, and she goes out to dress like a girl. Then guys around her say "you should probably dress as a guy" and she instantly dresses like a guy again.
Or when they went to another base to barter, it's mentioned that they won't mention each other's real name. Then literally in the same chapter or the one right after, the author has forgotten completely about it and during the whole trip they just use real names.

Then it has flawed logic comments. She starts idolizing some guy who's the brother of someone she hates. Then it turns out this hateful guy is scared of the person she's idolizing, so she decides she better GTFO because this idol must really be crazy then.

the betrayal! A certain someone leaked info of Luo Bing, and it left me shook and angry. Never thought such a thing would happen when they usually don't like to traumatize the MC. It would have been nice if it had a longer impact, but other than that I really liked it on.