Long Live The Hokage

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After Reincarnating into Naruto World at the Warring State Era as an Uzumaki, Masahiko thought that he got a useless System. He lived for 48 years as a normal, below average Uzumaki Shinobi.

That changed when he finally knew how the system works the day of his 49th Birthday!

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LLH
火影之活久见
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Draakon
Draakon rated it
April 20, 2020
Status: c84
Ha, when you think you will never able to see something unique in Naruto fanfic...

This is, probably, the only indisputable succesful attempt in making someone obsessed with Naruto-verse a MC of Naruto fic.

The MC is formerly chinese, who loves Naruto to the point of remembering bunch of opennings word to word AND also remembers some Chinese classic. Sadly, love of Water Margin will not turn you into genius by itself. He is utter dork. Althought he is lovable utter dork.

The story uses another chinese variation of Gamer system. By... more>> witnessing major historical events MC becomes stronger. Or more skilled. It's even better, although risky, if he changes the events. But because he is an utter dork, he isn't bothered much by the system and doesn't allow it to control his life, well, at least when he isn't utterly bored. There is also no quests generation and that's a plus. He still OP. But not like common Chinese protagonist, more like senile old master of unimaginable power, despite how he looks without henge.

He is also a bit shameless (playfully shameless) but probably less shameless than translator, who asks for review of this fic in comments for every chapter.

Anyway, while a first it seems like way too much stuff is skipped between the chapters with how many timeskips early on (5 years went a gone in the blink of the eye... Is just one of such timeskips), considering that by chapter 84 (several years after Tsunade birth), I must say it's pleasantly paced for Chinese novel... fic... whatever.

And sometimes it's so funny, that I almost dying from laughter. <<less
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sodofo8564
sodofo8564 rated it
March 29, 2020
Status: c74
Well, I think this one is one of the best naruto fan-fictions out there.

Nothing much to review. It is just that the MC reborns into the Naruto World around 15 years before the 1st hokage was born; he is equipped with a late discovered system. How late? It's just 48 years after the MC was born. Will he become old? Well, it is yes and no. Will he change the canons?Also, I have to say yes and no. Why? Because....... Thus, the story begins. ?
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dndeath
dndeath rated it
March 21, 2020
Status: c69
This story is an interesting take on the genre, where we follow the old man instead of a young MC. Combine the quick progression (that you expect from a "system" novel) with a truly intriguing story (mainly because it actually touches on some uncommon themes that at least I have never explored before) and then sprinkle some comic relief on top of that, all set in the Naruto universe, and you get Long Live The Hokage.

Story aside, the translation is great and new chapters are being translated at a solid... more>> pace. Don't let the fact that it is a fanfic scare you away. <<less
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Bucj
Bucj rated it
March 18, 2020
Status: c67
A good and light-hearted fanfiction that does not take itself too seriously.

It helps that the work follow the original plot closely from a different perspective instead of trying to make its own plot
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Ilo
Ilo rated it
March 17, 2020
Status: v2c66
How do I say this ?

I'm curently under the genjetsu of the otaku-kage and can' write anything bad about the novel

It's pretty funny at time and serious at times as well

... more>> The MC couldn't care less about the plot, contrary to what he constantly says and is always in the wise grandpa getup

You just can't hate him ! How could you ?! When he wrote a bl book about madara/hashirama/izuna, I can't... though that might be a secondary minor genjetsu !

Ps this is waddah yana, a loyal shinoby follower of our bulsh*t kage masahiko ! <<less
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Pandora Actor 691
Pandora Actor 691 rated it
May 20, 2020
Status: c97
In my opinion, This is the only naruto fanfic deserving of 5 stars as of lately! The other fanfic, The MC is either transmigrated into an existing body (or naruto) or reborn during or close to the start of the show! This one, starts with a 49 year old MC (can you believe it? A f*ckin elder already.. Heck he's a senior elder of the uzamaki clan at the start of the story.. Already a high rank). So this MC won't be like the other MCs that'd be getting into... more>> romantic relations with any of the original casts (he's too old XD), instead he'll be like a senior figure, a respectable elder, an old master!!

Spoiler

Important and Spoiler!!

The Novel starts waaayyy before the show.. Like before hashirama and madara era. It started when hashirama just got married. So from here, you can see how much potential, how much tidbits the author can put in here before the naruto era start! From this you can tell that MC will be a legend comparable to hashirama and madara!! Plus !!SPOILER!!.. The MC can live long enough to witness or experience the naruto era because his system can reduce his age! But he does keep up his elderly visage! Case in point, This is a great novel with a lot of potential! Atleast at the chapter I'm currently at, everything is good!

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funkymonk
funkymonk rated it
May 11, 2020
Status: c93
I would say its solid 3 star novel. Definetely not something with any kind of deepness or storytelling, it feels more like parody with personality of MC. But if you have nothing to do this novel could atleast kill your time.
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beardedmonkey
beardedmonkey rated it
April 22, 2020
Status: c84
For a fanfic novel this one is as good as you'll get. The MC is likeable and not generic and the characters feel pretty close to their canon selves, although they do have some slight chinese behaviors occasionally but it is easily forgivable.
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Rizon13
Rizon13
April 12, 2020
Status: --
The best naruto fanfic I have read, there might be better ones out there but this is considerably better than most stories that got jumbled plot.. I highly recommend reading it for a change of pace cuz the system doesnt for him to kill or do something impossible its pretty fun to read
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PLSnoharem79
PLSnoharem79 rated it
April 7, 2020
Status: c76
Probably the best fanfiction on novel updates. The spelling/grammar is suspect at times but it's made up by comedy/thrill the novel exudes. I like fast paced novels the most and more than 20 years have passed in 70 chapters. Give it a try.
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MagicPill
MagicPill rated it
March 24, 2020
Status: c70
It is what it is. A powertrip fanfiction story set in Naruto universe. The author is reveling in it. If you don't take the story seriously it's pretty enjoyable. At first the translation is pretty unreadable but I compensated by skipping large chunks of the text and just used my imagination like I always do.
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Jabadad
Jabadad rated it
March 8, 2020
Status: c62
i really like the background of this world and how the author implemented the main character into this. Its a funny story about some normal guy without the shinobi mind like his comrades and. Its just a funny and worldseeing fanfiction about naruto, which no one ever was. Its well written. You get enough information about the background and the world and im just waiting how much the char is gonna change and what kind of impact he has. If he uses many personalities and infiltrates everything just so he... more>> can see it and get stronger. If you want drama and tragedy I dont think this is the novel for you. But who knows the naruto plotline is still years away. 5 out of 5 of a fanfiction <<less
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Kain of Nosgoth
Kain of Nosgoth rated it
February 23, 2020
Status: c58
What can I say but GO READ IT NOW!!!!

For a fanfic this is a MASTERPIECE.

The twist with making him get his cheat only after 45 years is hilarious.

... more>> The MC is funny and likable.

And the way the author start the story on a timeline that the original source material didnt dive too much in give him alot of space of creativty but he still include all the OVA and fillers and movies to the story is awesome!!

The best part (and most shocking considring this is a fanfic) of this novel like everyone who reviwed it before said is the translation quality is to the roof easy to read and griping you wont stop till you catched up with the release

Conclusion

Story 4 out 5

Translation 7 out of 5

if you want a fun easy going story this is the one for you and the translation wont disappoint enjoy ? <<less
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JesusFreakk
JesusFreakk rated it
February 17, 2020
Status: c55
MY GOD, WHAT AN AMAZING FANFIC!

Read this already damnit! I'm not lying here, it's a really good fanfic! Not those shitty not well written stories! It has consistency and a good rythm!

And well, the translation? AMAZING!

You're gotta love the translator! Such an amazing guy with an amazing talent with translation!

Read it now!
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halfpot
halfpot rated it
February 14, 2020
Status: c53
First review. I Originally read this due to curiosity for its high rating as a fanfic on this site. Keep in mind that I've never read or watched material on Naruto. However, aside from having to do some research on the characters and power system I say that this fanfic can stand on its own feet and be entertaining to read, despite not knowing references and events of the original plot.

The main character really grew on me, being reckless but fun to watch as he interacts and messes around with... more>> the other characters. The translation as of this review by translatin_Otaku is fantastic and is the main reason why I'm rating this so highly. <<less
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N8tivepride666
N8tivepride666 rated it
February 11, 2020
Status: c51
It's good so far, chapters a little too short for me but I know it can be a pain writing as well. Hope the chapters keep coming, I find myself self looking forward to next chapters.
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LewdBoi
LewdBoi rated it
January 28, 2020
Status: c46
This is the first fanfic novel I've started to read. I didn't have any hope for it at first because its hardly got any attention but its really underrated. The translation is very good and the story line is amazing.
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skylars
skylars rated it
August 18, 2023
Status: c300
4 stars in my book for a fanfic is a huge compliment

Despite having a system, which is almost a read killer for me.

Author managed to make it interesting. He awards more points the more the original plot is changed. But if he changes too much he won't get point since he can't change Naruto it here is no Naruto sorta.

That only make it readable. Why is it so good? Because there are characters aside the MC. Normally in fanfic everything revolves around the MC. Because authors are masturbating about how... more>> they could power up their characters without bothering making a story.

Here MC's actions have an impact on every characters he meet. Train a young shinobi. Meet him years later having disciples on his own.

If I have a complaint it's that the author ctrl+z his actions sometimes. MC as an elder choose name for some babies and switch the name of two characters.

I didn't reach the end yet but I feel a lack of direction, a goal. We stay interested because we want to know how different the shinobi world by the end of the manga we know. But then what?

In the end if you want to read a fanfic with some depth and a different side of the shinobi world we don't often see. I recommend this novel. It's not perfect bat at least it has some soul. <<less
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yugmodnar
yugmodnar rated it
October 5, 2022
Status: c4
The personality of the protagonist is annoying. This cannot be understated. He treats the world as a joke, thinks s*upid things out loud, and is generally an idiot that no one respects. I haven't read far but with a protagonist like this in a slice of life novel I'm not reading further.

Reading through the rest of the reviews it's obvious that he only gets worse.
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Gsichtselfmeter
Gsichtselfmeter rated it
January 26, 2022
Status: c230
This novel is very hard to get into, as the author assumes deep knowledge of the Naruto world. Furthermore the author struggles with writing for the first 50 to 100 chapters. But if you make it through that, you will be rewarded with a nice and sweet throwback through the Naruto history. You will meet your favorite characters, wonder how the MC will mess up things this time, and overall have a very light and amusing read.

This novel made me pick up the Naruto manga again! 4*
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