• Why was the second world a novel? Who read it? Why did Ye Fan have knowledge of it. Did the other Transmigrator also have memories? Implications seem to indicate not, so was their method different? If so, why? Was the first world also a novel?
• Why did He Han never meet Ye Fan in their first life and stick to the secret admirer route? I feel like there is more to this story.

• How the second Ye Fan actually did get pregnant with Dudu by He Han (the story only really talked about the cover story of ex-boyfriend for the media) ? The description made me think that she had gotten pregnant during filming of an intimate scene, but the first intimate scene the two had was when the child was already 2 or 3 years old. The ‘scheme’ is never mentioned in detail and there is no obvious person who instigated it. This would have been a good opportunity to develop a villain who hates He Han.

• Did Ye Li do well overseas?

• Why did Ye Fan never attempt to make a statement to protect Ye Li from the gossip?

• Do the main character’s competent assistants not have lives?

• Any other relatives for some of the side characters or even main characters. Everyone seems to have a neatly pruned family tree.

• Dudu older or as a villain

• More development of the friendly characters. Ie What were Chang Su’s ‘vicissitudes?’ Where did Qi Shu (?) go?

• Why does everyone work so hard? Dudu and the original Ye Fan of the second world have backgrounds. None of the rest, including two who worked to their deaths (dead), have obvious motivation to do so.

In the original world, MC's parents passed away in an accident and she was left all alone. She played the violin but could not continue after the incident. At that time, there was a sponsor who helped her through those tough times but they never once met. They kept in contact mostly through messaging and MC will always tell him when she's performing. MC loved that person and was comforted by him. However, that person disappeared two years ago before MC transmigrated to the current world.

In the current world, MC only cares about her son as she has always been alone and just wanted to take care of him. She is quite cold and neutral to others, as to our ML initially. ML was the one who pursued her first.

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However, the twist in the story is that ML was MC's sponsor in the original world. He passed away after an accident two years ago and transmigrated. ML did not know who MC really was at first and only appreciated her hard working attitude in acting. Only after ML heard MC played the violin then he started to realize. ML has always attended her shows when she was performing in the original world and knew all the songs she played. He also kept a room filled with vinyl records of the songs after he transmigrated.

ML pursued MC slowly but MC still did not accept him even after MC knew ML already know that lil bun was his son. They just acted as parents for the child but not together yet. ML confessed to MC but MC rejected him saying she already had someone she loved for ten (?) years. That's when ML was like ten years?? isn't that me?

He realized but did not tell her his identity because MC was already overwhelmed with the fact that ML knew about the child. MC was actually skeptical about ML's identity but she did not dare read too much into it. However, MC eventually found out and confirmed it herself after she happened to see the room filled with vinyl records. After that, the sweet part starts coming. MC and ML both have a tact understanding and did not have any conflict. I like how they eventually got married and their relationship revealed at the end.

MC's (kinda) younger sister Ye Li. Although initially she was rude to MC, she was actually following her mother's example. After she knew her mother switched MC with her real older sister, Tang Jin, she was sensible enough to know that her mother was in the wrong. She did not covet MC's money either.

ML was great as well! Although he knew MC had a child at the beginning he did not mind. He accepted the child even when he didn't know it was his. He pursued MC slowly and was understanding. ML's family was also supportive.

MC is a little too OP. Idk if I missed something when I MTL-ed but a musician that is so good at acting???? Also her personality is kinda cold and she only shows her sweet side to the lil bun. I can't feel the character progression and personality from her. Only after she got together with ML, she turns to this shy girl. So 2/3 of the story MC is this cold and chill person...

Not much backstory on how the child came about about ML did not wonder when he and the MC slept together.

Also, ML is an actor but at the later half it's like he suddenly got so much free time to spend time with the child and pursue MC. His role from an actor turns to a baby sitter/love interest.

Tang Jin's reveal was kinda lackluster. MC and ML's relationship reveal has much more impact and feels.

Honestly, the romance was a little too slow for me. The child reveal was wayyyy too slow as well. The entertainment parts was kinda boring mainly because the schemes are quite typical. Ya know like those live broadcast to make MC look bad but in turn MC is so op and pretty and gains so many fans instead. Also some program testing contestants' acting and musicality etc... I skimmed through parts I can't take and persisted only because I wanted to see MC and ML get together.