Childish Flower

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This is a story where you love me but I don’t love you. A sweet story about an alpha and an omega.

He did not cherish him in the past, wantonly trampling over the other party’s affection, cutting the other party with bruises all over. How much of a bastard was he, that he was able to exhaust the other party’s affection, and the other party only requested for freedom.

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未熟之花[ABO]
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numba1nobody
numba1nobody rated it
April 12, 2020
Status: Completed
Spoiler below

I kinda didn’t like how they ended up marrying each other after they got divorced.I feel like the author just doesn’t wanted the story to have sad ending and is forced to do a twist in the story.

would have been better though

I don’t like how the MC still have feeling for ML after what he have done to him.

Anyways it’s good tho
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Shorng
Shorng
February 23, 2020
Status: Completed
Ok, first of all, I would like to say, this is really, really worth reading. The dog blood was satisfying with redemption afterward, which is the reason why I read it after reading some other reviews.

Spoilers! Spoilers! Spoilers!

The MC could be a stubborn, cutie, trying desperately, strife for love while in the later half, stubborn and sad, beaten kitty that would refuse to trust anyone or hurt himself more than enough. I love it! I love this MC the most in all the dog blood stories I read so far.

On... more>> the other hand, ML... hmm... how to say... he’s normal? I mean, he wasn’t heartless, too cruel like some other ML in dog blood stories. He does things with reasons and he really knows what he should return kindness with kindness, ruthlessness with ruthlessness. The story does end up as HE because of him? I guess. Anyway, I love both of them but I just favor MC more, hehe. Because he’s cute in my eyes.

All in all, you should just read it to have more in-depth remembrance. I promise you this will be worth your time and it’s pretty short. I binge read in only half a day. <<less
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takame
takame
February 2, 2020
Status: Completed
I'm pretty satisfied with the angst as a dog blood fan. It made me cry and the dog blood part is not that overwhelming. There is no annoying third party and the dead brother issue did not linger for long. The story is also nicely smutty which is quite rare for BL

I wish there was more retribution for the ML and mc's dad but I'm still pretty happy overall with the little bun and the complete family for a happy ending. Nice read in one sitting
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Lioness94
Lioness94 rated it
January 10, 2020
Status: extra 2
Just finished reading this and I have a few things to say:

  1. first of all, thank you to the translator for translating this
  2. Though it started quite nicely, I think this had a bit to much angst towards the end
  3. Tiangchen should've done a lot of things better with Mujin
  4. Mujin's parents are absolute dirt for what they did to Mujin (all his life, actually)
  5. I, personally, would've liked to have known more about what happened when Mujin was little, because that seems to have played a relatively large part in his frailty
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6. I agree with what another commenter said about Mujin getting pregnant too quickly (x2)

The part that touched me the most was when Tianchen read Mujin's diary.

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Alymae
Alymae rated it
December 3, 2019
Status: --
I have cried so hard, my tears won't stop especially when the MCwent into a coma and the ML found out about the library. Gosh, I never thought that the MC loves selflessly. It was so sad, I cried. But I love the story so much, and the ending is really good.

If I can give more than five stars, this will be a perfect ten! Great work, author!
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Heny
Heny rated it
October 25, 2019
Status: extra 2
Why I Can't give them 10 ⭐️??

I love their story so much. Foremost the story hardship of Mujin when he live alone while pregnant... I'm crying so much. When Gao have misunderstanding and slap his face, my heart feel ache so much
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Chenqing
Chenqing rated it
September 18, 2019
Status: Completed
An easy to read story, but it's quite predictable.

There is some angst but I'm not really feeling the romance. Neither the MC nor ML is a flat out scum. MC is kind, but a bit too passive and ML is too cold for my liking.

Another thing I didn't like is how the author wrote MC's relationship with his family. I understand the motives of each characters but I don't really get the feeling. Its unsatisfying. I feel like this part should have been elaborated more but instead the author just... more>> focus on MC and ML relationship.

There are explicit scenes if you're just looking for an ABO smut.

Overall I rate this 3.0 because it can still be a short enjoyable read and it's not prolonged with too much unnecessary drama. But its not something I would reread. <<less
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izayaYY
izayaYY rated it
July 10, 2019
Status: --
I usually avoid stories with love triangles, because of the inevitable angst and heartbreak that results from such a situation. Love triangles rarely result in happy endings, unless it turns into a perfect threesome of course ?

This story is about a love triangle but thankfully it has a happy ending. Moreover, it is beautifully narrated and well translated. The drama is not overdone, probably due to the writing style that is concise and to the point. And I liked that both MCs POV were shown. The author writes beautifully about... more>> emotions. This is written so well, that even without omegaverse and mpreg, it would still have been worth reading

I really hate angst but here, the angst comes from their situation and not from indecision or wishy washy attitudes. In fact, both MCs are realistic, decisive and rational ppl. Their behaviour in the book reflect that. I inderstand that ML cannot let go of his first love. The grieving process is not the same for everyone. Some take months, some take years to recover. I really loved MC MuJin who stand up for himself after trying so hard to win ML's love.

In view of all the difficulties, after all the drama, is the romance between the MCs convincing or not? For me, yes. Towards the end, when ML went all out to win back MuJin, that was the best part of the story ❤ <<less
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Passerby Soysauce-sama
Passerby Soysauce-sama rated it
June 14, 2019
Status: Completed
Ahh. I'm warning you. This hurt my kokoro~ I didn't cry though *red-eyed* Rating this 4.6

The pain and struggles were realistic~ not too histrionic.

I really like how the author simply gave a taste of how (MC) Mujin's personality became like that and didn't dive too deeply 'just to add some drama' or appeal to the ML.

The side characters were treated humanely somehow, unlike most novels I read where family bonds are permanently broken, face-slapping, and all that with the leads... The mistakes remain, though unforgiven, they moved forward without really... more>> clearing ALL things (conspiracies) up just to make themselves feel better. (This is unscientifically realistic in many small ways)

I read this for short 2 hours and definitely worth it. <<less
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greenapplesauce
greenapplesauce rated it
January 18, 2023
Status: Completed
i wish mu jin ended up with another person. The more I think about it the more I feel that ML doesn't deserve him.
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Memorex
Memorex rated it
May 26, 2022
Status: Completed
I finished this just so that I can confirm what bad plot and bad writing just for the sole of creating unneeded misunderstanding.

First one, ML is a victim too.

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ML loves the MC's brother so much and have the right to be angry at Mu's family. Although it was a bad move to confront directly without verifying and waiting for explanation from MC is infuriating, more so when the MC pregnancy is high risk!

That diary is so conveniently there for ML to take time and digest why MC did such a thing instead of accusing he did so because he wanted ML for himself. Come on, how many years have you know MC is!

Mu's family was tr*sh and disgusting but so was Father Gao. How can you believe that love can be there when the subject of love is your son's lover's brother?? ML is forever haunted by the shadow of his lover! Duhh!

I understand the MC is angry and he too has the right to be angry for being treated indifferently and harshly when he was left alone to deal with a high risk pregnancy. But he needs to remember that ML is a victim too.

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Second one, he has the reason (the author) can use to not save his brother. But the author conveniently use that just to create the misunderstanding.

Spoiler

Mu's family clearly shown that they love the brother more than MC. And it was blantantly shoved in MC's face too. The kidney matching showed that MC matched with the brother, but suddenly don't want to take the kidney from your lesser like child to be donated to your favourite dying child? Where is the consistency of your love goes? Your favourite child is dying and can be saved but Mother Mu is busy having a breakdown and fainting.

Then suddenly concerned no heir for the Mu family and don't want to give family business to MC, thus planning those disgusting traps! What the heck!?

Suddenly later towards the story, MC needs to have C-sect delivery and needs to be injected anaesthetic, Mother Mu is concerned about lesser like child who might be confirmed dead? Woahh, author, seriously?

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All in all, I finished this because it only has 37 chapters. If it is more, I am dropping this story. It does contained angst but I seriously think this story should have a BE instead of a force HE. I even shipped MC with the godly-yet-confirmed-did-not-exist-in-real-life, the benevolent bookstore owner Alpha, who gives high salary and even lent (read, not rent) high end accomodation to the needy stressed MC. <<less
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lk21
lk21 rated it
April 4, 2022
Status: Completed
I read this story every time I want a sad read or something to cry about. And every time I read this story I still cry even though I know what's going to happen. Even if I only read from chapter 25 to 30 I still cry because I remember the MC emotions. This story is worth the tears and the read.
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nyxzane
nyxzane rated it
March 23, 2022
Status: --
the story is tinged with love heartache sad moments fluff smuts

it kept me hooked on. ML misunderstood MC love, labelled him as selfish soul but in reality MC was the main sacrificer.

anyways all is well that ends well sweet happy ending 💞
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Gushishi
Gushishi rated it
November 28, 2021
Status: Completed
2.5-2.8 star

The first few chapters are good and coordinated.

The middle of the story... The author didn't explore the story.... Just stated expression and acts.

Later, nearing the end.... There are two characters popped out of nowhere.

Spoiler

two children. An alpha boy and a little princess. The children have no script. One year old and 2 months old

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The1Rin
The1Rin
May 6, 2021
Status: Completed
This is great for a good short cry as both MC and ML go through suffering. With MC whole life kinda miserable and ML being apologetic for his behaviour.

None of the characters were hateable even if some reviews disagree as most of their actions were understandable. ML messed up a few times too much but it happened early/middle so he had times to suffer on his and forgive him.

Only bother for me was that it was a little too fast as MC accepted ML too soon but then the novel... more>> would drag which its better as a short read. <<less
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mikumiku_100
mikumiku_100 rated it
January 13, 2021
Status: Completed
I'm really weak to these kinds of novels *cries*. The suffering from an unrequited love... the emotional pain.. and most specially A LOVELY SHOU SUFFERING FROM ALL OF IT. I really hate it when my lovely bottoms are suffering wuwuwu..I do understand that the situation was not entirely ML's fault but still.. HOW DARE YOU HURT SUCH A CUTE BUNNY MUNCHKIN asjjhskskjsak!! Hahaha jokes aside, it's not as if it's my first time reading an angsty/drama genre story so I can confidently say that compared to other dog-blood-drama-filled and tragic... more>> novels/stories, this one is relatively light. The whole situation escalated to that point because of love triangle or the issue with this moonlight thingy (plus family interventions). Btw, WHY IS IT THESE WHITE MOONLIGHTS ALWAYS SO PROBLEMATIC?! Myghad hahahaha. Anyways, a good read but because my pained heart was not soothed with a satisfying amount of fluff em only rating it this much :3.

Edit: Also, I somehow felt the story was quite rushed. It can be longer and also I think the drama would have more impact and the psychological aspect of their internal conflicts could be more explained or dwelve on more if there was more flashback from the past. <<less
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King of No Killing
King of No Killing rated it
September 29, 2020
Status: Completed
Actually, I 'm not sure why am I even doing this to myself. I was never a fan of angsty novels. I blame 10 Years That I Loved You the Most, GATSOD, Intoxication, Professional Body Double, Hua Hua You Long and all those dog blooded drama for this unwanted craving. Oh yeah, the only thing that keeps me wanting for more is to see those a**holes MLs eat vinegar, beg and suffer. HAHAHA. Ahemm.. Ok, I'll be back updating this comment once I'm done reading Childish Flower.

Edit: Okayyy. After... more>> finishing it overnight I can say that it's just your average story of omegaverse. Both sides' reactions and behaviors are all reasonable. ML is not someone you can hate. Don't expect him to show affection immediately even though he hasn't moved on yet. It will always take time. Here it only took the MC less than two years to make the ML realize that the latter loves him. I said two years because MC only started showing his love to ML when they got married ok. Don't blame the ML if he didn't notice MC's 11-yr unrequited love for him.

Overall the story is so-so. It's just that I was expecting some teeth-gritting moments but there was none for me. Sigh. At least I finished it. Oh. I didn't know I can't change the ratings here. Actual rating: 3.5 <<less
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Bro.ccoli
Bro.ccoli rated it
April 15, 2020
Status: Completed
Want to stop reading in the initial chapters because the ML is annoying and s*upid but thanks G! I didn't. The angst was there but not that much as how great the story but not that much.

It was great at first but as you move on near the ending the quality was dropping. Nonetheless its ok.

Spoiler

Happy Ending

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Cervellerain
Cervellerain rated it
December 17, 2019
Status: Completed
Save yourself some thinking and just read it. Most people hate the ML but I understand him completely. I can almost feel the pain in his heart, the longing, the grief... too much, so unbearable. If I were him, I'd be ten times worse. But no, he's actually a very good person, just had lapses, but the ending was really perfect for both of them. The MC couldn't have anyone better. :)
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Alit
Alit rated it
November 3, 2019
Status: Completed
This story is a bittersweet one. Made me cry so many times. Seeing as this story is also relatively short the charaxter development and plot are both well thoughtout and executed.
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