I hate the part where they both didn't clear up their official relationship. It's just Ah Yao asking him about who he meant on the red carpet then they're like automatically together. b*tch??? Just like that? But they both kind of don't act together? I really need the part where they both recognize and acknowledge their relationship even if it's just on the both of them. Also the marriage part. Boy seriously needs to step up. HE DOESN'T ASK FL AT ALL. He just decided that he wants to marry her so he will without even asking for FL's opinion about it. It's also the same with Ah Yao getting offers to model. She have to always depend her life decisions on Mo Zhen. Uggggh.

Also, like I mentioned earlier, I like the whole ghost timeline and I would've loved for it to stretch and dig deeper into us. I like it to hurt us more and give us more impact. But the only impact I can think of is really just the Goreme trip. That's all. After that, the present timeline, it's kind of boring.

To be honest, the present timeline felt a bit rushed. It's understandable that Mo Zhen already like her so much since his memory of his interactions with ghost Ah Yao is there. But for Ah Yao, who just woke up and lost the memory from the ghost timeline, for her to just go along and depend on him for almost all of her important life matters is just a bit... it sounds unreasonable. I understand that after she woke up she'd feel some sort of 'connection' with Mo Zhen but for her to have that illogical amount of trust and faith for someone who's supposed to be a stranger, who's just her boss... That needs more work.

Okay, maybe what I'm trying to say is that overall, the story lacks that 'oomph' factor. It needs more. It doesn't seem convincing.

Side stories were a bit weird though. I don't really support the idea of 'my son cannot kiss my wife' and being all possessive jealous over a kid. It's just weird to me.

Was also weird how FL seems to undergo personality/brain power change after regaining her memories.

And when reading this somehow I recall all the cannon fodder counterattack QT that I read and ML and FL here are practically the typical that get counterattacked lol T_T

It just that, the state of FL being a ghost probably better that being a human. Like she can't touch anything, but she can move/fly over things, summon wind, even cooking and type on the keyboard ??? She can surf the internet, posses someone or animal so she can eat, have abundant of energy, even if she tired, she can just sleep, and her energy is recharged. Moreover, after she acquainted with a female ghost, she can even change her clothes ????

Like she can literally do everything except touching.

If being a soul wanderer while I'm in comatose state grant me this advantage, I probably stay in this state forever.

It started out very simple and kept going like that till the end. It was fun to see their interactions as the MC was extremely blunt and kind of shameless, while the ML was very narcissistic and irritable. He was initially very annoyed with the MC invading his personal space. However, as she became a constant and regular part of his everyday life and he got accustomed to all the commotion she was causing, he eventually recognized how much she meant to him. However, she was a ghost after all, and he had to let go of her sooner or later. Thus, he didn't want to hold on to her as he would end up being the one hurting when he lost her. Instead, he chose to suppress his feelings and learn to cope with their inevitable separation. This led to him wanting to create pleasant memories with her for the last time as a separation gift to her, when in fact he just wanted something left of her, something he can hold on to and reminiscence after they separate.

I think it would be nice to see the ML reveal how much he appreciates her being with him and assisting him through his everyday struggles as a fun and interesting companion to the MC when she was a ghost. He kept acting arrogant and uncaring till the last moment they separated. It is also possible that he realized his feelings only after she left him.

I have complicated feelings for the MC. While she was funny and adorable as a shameless ghost, she got very boring when she came back to her body. Her dorkiness and dim-wittedness were very cute, and I like clumsy and clueless MCs. However, the one who progressed their relationship for the whole thing was the ML, and it disappointed me to see the MC so passive. She didn't even tell him, not even once, that she liked him! Even after the ML confessed to her on a red carpet! It was obviously a tacit understanding between them, but I really wanted to see them confirm their feelings clearly with each other!

After their separation, as the ML acknowledged his own feelings, he still had the strong conviction that their lives wouldn't ever cross each other again. Piao Piao is to be commended from this point as she helps him notice certain things he couldn't with his arrogance. Him pursuing the MC was very fluffy and cute though, and it was the only thing that had kept me going to finish the story. He was passionate for sure, and it wouldn't hurt to see more passion from both sides!

Overall, I like happy endings and the ending was nice for this one, but as I am saying this for the last time: it would be way better if we could see more of their interaction and fluff! It was kind of fluffy, but more fluff is always a good idea when it comes to stories like this.

it's a happy ending.

Well, at least he gets together with MC's best friend in the end although I think their relationship is a bit forced by the author.

I did not think that what the ML did was bad since the FL really actually liked him even without her memories. Also, he really didn't force her but instead just wanted to see her reactions to the things he does for her. Their relationship just progressed faster after FL regained her memories. It was just funny to see the once cold and ascetic ML become very rogue and shameless haha

Also, 2ndML shamelessly got together with FL's bestfriend lol. I didn't like how he did it, but it can't be helped that FL's bestfriend agreed on being with him in the end.

the part when he knew she was leaving and would forget him. I definitely spilled some tears during the touching hot air balloon/ holiday scenes.