Black Bellied Belle: Demon Lord, Bite the Bait Please

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The first time they met they had battled fiercely, just for a mere bunch of herbs. She needed it to save people, and he wanted to use it to save his own life.

“Let go of it, or you will die.” The man’s violet eyes were cold and sinister as he said in a low voice.

She held on tightly to the base of the herb and pulled its roots right out of the ground, before she turned her eyes back with a crafty smile. “It’s mine now. Snatch it from me if you can.”

When they met several years later they were no longer on opposing sides in hostility. In order to repay the debt for having stolen the herb back then, she went on to miraculously cure his body’s condition, relieving him of the inhumane torment that wrecked at his body day and night. He was amazed by the godly skills in Medicine she possessed and his heart went on to fall irrecoverably head over heels in love.

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卿本腹黑:邪君请上钩
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  1. Probably read when im bored (some of it)
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Latest Release

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05/07/21 Misty Cloud Translations c333 part4
05/07/21 Misty Cloud Translations c333 part3
05/06/21 Misty Cloud Translations c333 part2
05/06/21 Misty Cloud Translations c333 part1
05/04/21 Misty Cloud Translations c332 part4
05/04/21 Misty Cloud Translations c332 part3
05/01/21 Misty Cloud Translations c332 part2
05/01/21 Misty Cloud Translations c332 part1
04/30/21 Misty Cloud Translations c331 part4
04/30/21 Misty Cloud Translations c331 part3
04/29/21 Misty Cloud Translations c331 part2
04/28/21 Misty Cloud Translations c331 part1
04/26/21 Misty Cloud Translations c330 part4
04/26/21 Misty Cloud Translations c330 part3
04/24/21 Misty Cloud Translations c330 part2
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seafairy
seafairy
October 2, 2019
Status: --
The story progression is unorganized. It's quite hard to keep up with the flow of the story because it is messy. The scenes jump from one to another making the reader confused what the hell happened and if it still the same scene. It's quite a headache, really. It is harder to read this novel than a classic poetry.
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BoriCats
BoriCats rated it
February 27, 2023
Status: c81
2.5 stars actually.

The book is chaotic. It's not actually bad in compare with those Mary sue transmigration with face slapping story out there. It has potential and the world building is generic but can be tolerated and the relationship building was actually fine and the way the MC reacts is actually not bad. But it suffers from multiple plot holes and unstraighten facts.

When I was reading this book, I already turn on my tolerance and knowingly ignore glaring mistakes as I know this will I be facing reading this book... more>> and I was able to enjoy the story. But when you reach the 81st chapter which is 1/4 of the whole book and hardly anything happens, It will come to a point that you will realize that you are just wasting your time for nothing. Why is though? Like that 81 chapter is long enough already and each chapter is really long that translator has to divide it into three parts, why is it though that only little happens? It's because the writer seems don't know what to write next. You can see how more than half of that 81 chapter was spent on other character's POV and what's worse, a lot of it are unrelated to the MC and I also think that its unnecessary.

I hardly even know what's the innate elements of the MC or her level of cultivation or her abilities. What infuriates me is when she was having trouble facing this opponent, in the later part of the story, apparently she has the ability and powers to solve it but I think the author just decided to create new ability for the MC. The author didn't clearly has a clear view of what the MC ability is, it's all talk and no show. Like she creates the elixir and it's very good but there is no explanation through the process and how it is indeed good. She has this Burial Soul arts but don't have any use as of now, like what does it do? There should be like small effects in her life that can be seen from her daily life but no, she's acting like a normal cultivator.

The author likes to paint her omnipotent but she was always complaining that she's really weak. I get that! That makes sense! But show us! What are your abilities and how is it inept in this situation. There is no clear explanation, just some ambitious rumblings from the author.

I have also problem with her growing number of characters. I get that there might be some use for them. But they are clearly just another character to have POVs in the future more. Some of them are even irrelevant. I appreciated that the character is distinct and they might have some flesh. But please use them well. What happens is I aam being bombarded with this new characters when I was not even slightly immerse with the MC. I was starve by the MC's screen time that it became annoying. Like the author loves to systematically tell every event that happens on the same day with different characters. Mind you this world is big. Like the scene will be in this kingdom, then a sect, then to a clan, then to the higher lands, then to another kingdom, then to another store then come back to the MC then another round of other people's POV.

The story is dragging. I've read a lot of words but less has happen. I don't even know what other issues to tell as there is a lot and you cant help be confuse with them, that's how LOTS it is.

One thing I also was perplexed is the force plotting the author seems to have. Like she's a high cultivator but the author loves to disarm her with her abilities through s*upid reason just to show her brilliance. Like she supposed to be hiding her abilities and that she has multiple elements but she has to do it in the public and she will not be vigilant enough to notice that there are people who are looking at her, the author would just say she was focused! The heck, like that's believable. What are we? Kids? She even has two companions in her head but no one warn her. She got her brother but he only noticed after she shows her brilliance? BULL. So people now know her brilliance. *Puke

It also happens on how she somehow reveals her s*x just because she was attacked mentally and she lost her mind? She knows the risk but she did it anyway. She knows she's gonna be attacked and she's gonna be expose afterwards but did it anyway just so the author can conveniently let the ML fall for her without making it gay. She also disguise herself outside but I dont know why, she's not hiding anything or to anyone, the next day she disguises but no make up and so people google at her because she's beautiful and she's complaining with the attention.

Why am I even bothering. I know a lot of problems will happen in the next chapters as what other reviewers says. It's actually could have been okay, just poor execution from the author. <<less
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kurohamukami
kurohamukami rated it
December 18, 2022
Status: c173 part3
i dropped this. I can't with so much plot that I saw has nothing to do with MC, f*ck, at first I didn't understand why so many bad comments about this novel, now I've been enlightened.

I greatly regret wasting my time reading this, it's so frustrating how the author didn't even bother to fix this novel, it had potential, but the author doesn't know how to follow the narrative or where the story is going or what it's about.
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ChaoticWisdom
ChaoticWisdom rated it
August 4, 2021
Status: c333 part4
I enjoyed this. It's definitely a mary sue novel and there are absolutely parts not fleshed out but if you're looking for a light read with reincarnation, romance, cultivation, and not constant family betrayal drama as the center piece you'll enjoy it.

I think it because a lot of them focus on the girl putting her family in place but thats really a small part of it. Anyway, its not amazing but its not terrible. 3 stars for that plus 1 star for translation quality.
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ikitty03
ikitty03 rated it
July 29, 2021
Status: c36
This novel suck for only three reason. It's in part 1-3, mostly talk about the SR which unnecessary story, and it doesn't talk about MC and ML. Lastly what the story about; god it's slow. The story keep being up SR and you don't know there background is yet.
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