I think it's better to remove the tag r*pe becomes lover. It sounds like MC was r*ped so he fell in love, but it wasn't. MC already liked ML and both are already possessive to each other even before that chapter 74 when ML took action instead of giving him an antidote. Even after that chapter, MC wasn't as mad to punish ML and he always think ML belongs to him ever since. I wished the author wrote that MC do love ML properly explicitly/verbally, but the MC only showed it by saying like he's naturally mine (which is still good, but saying it is better).

The translation was okay but there were wrong terms (ejaculated was used for the term said), mispellings, and saying the character name as just the family name instead of full name. But still thanks to the translator for giving us some good time to read. It didn't affect why I gave a 4 though.

I gave a 4 because of the plot development. It's like there was no problems at all and everything so easily solved. There are also details that was lost and was not explained properly. Some parts are confusing.

Maybe some will also say that ML is a rapist and a s*xual harasser. But the MC never pushes him away as to kill him, and just let the ML hug or kisses without terrible punishment. The ML is wooing MC since he was a kid. MCs main concern even in his last life and after rebirth is only MC, so he always let ML have his way with him and MC is easily coaxed to forgive. Maybe in that chapter 74, it is do wrong to force MC for a life and death contract, but MC just let it go after, since he never wants ML to be lost from his sight cause ML is his and his only inner demon.

The novel is pretty funny and both characters are very devoted to each other. I just wish that some details were explained, not make some things too complicated, and at least have better heart pumping plot development, but things are easily resolved.

I also wasn't really a fan of the whole kidnapping Chen Mo thing just so he can't interfere with the progression of their relationship, and how it was written off by the MC and forgiven because MC assumes Chen Mo is happy gallivanting around in the Demonic realm with his kidnapper. What also didn't vibe with me was how they eventually got together: the r*pe and marriage death contract thing the next morning kind of wack though! And the MC just goes along with it! Sir, you have rights!!

I'm not complaining about the yandere, I'm complaining about the execution. I was just expecting more violence and less whining from the ML. His cute and harmless act was entertaining for the first half, but then you quickly realize this is the depth of their interactions throughout the entire novel. And the way MC is written just seems so romantically shallow - sure, he gets incredibly jealous when ML talks to anyone else, but that comes off as more tsundere/childish immaturity than envy borne from any romantic passion. I just wasn't FEELING IT LOL

Despite all of this nitpicking, I did persist with this novel for like 6 hours straight and enjoyed it for the most part.