like on the end of the story theres no mention of him every getting cured of his sickness. The main point of why his on the game is to make money but not even a single chapter is dedicated On his IRL.

why the F DID THE DEAD PLAYERS ON THE GAME Revive on the end like WTF the premise on the story is that dead on the game dead IRL. And the other mystery on why people need to go to a dungeon every 3 month else they die have not been answer.

So why did Starbeck have to be a lady in the end? The MC obviously wouldn't have been into her anymore, the same as Kuer Horton who was also a lady pretending to be a guy, who got the cold shoulder as soon as the MC found that out.

I would have appreciated a lot if the author kept the Broker as the final big bad

The fact that the whole premise of the story is in a game that solely exists in a virtual world turns the novel boring. The first few missions were good enough to hook you in but after a few it reads like filler. The main reason for this is because nothing that Kieran does in his missions ever affects reality directly. None of the characters pass over except for special dungeons which are like a sequel to the original missions. It forces a feeling disinterest because the characters aren't truly alive and you most likely won't ever see you again. Even if one of them dies you can barely bring yourself to care because it changes nothing. It's like reading the plot line of someone's gameplay, extremely boring.

This is enhanced by the not-so-stellar translation, which is definitely readable, don't get me wrong, but the occasional inconsistencies in grammar pulls you out of a novel that is already hard to get into. Sometimes Kieran's know-it-all attitude juxtaposed against his supposed humbleness does this as well, he comes off as jagged, only able to act in two different extremes.

Kieran comes with a ton of plot armour, he excels in completing missions and never is in any true danger aside from the starting mission which is why the story quickly becomes boring. You never have a moment where you think 'Oh shit, this is bad' which to me means that the MC is never at risk. Sure there are some unbeatable existences but he always ends up finding a way to kill them or avoid them to kill them later. He also never makes a mistake. With how convoluted and difficult some of the missions are, Kieran always manages to pull them off with a 100% completion rate. Combine this with a total lack of any setbacks in any of the chapters so far Kieran ends up as a sort of Gary Sue, extremely boring to read.

I also feel the need to mention that at over 350 chapters in and we're only on his 5th dungeon. Supposedly you have to complete 30 to get out of the game alive without consequences. He progresses extremely slowly (all missions take up 1 hour of real world time, irregardless of if you spend months or years inside them) and aside from the initial set up in the first few chapters his life outside of the game is completely irrelevant. Apart from the one or two mentions that he is going to eat, piss and do basic real world things reality doesn't seem to affect the story. This is strange because he's still piss poor at the moment, eating fast food in his room and is basically a ghost in society. I was looking forward to seeing him becoming healthier and possibly more social, but at this point in time he only has one reliable friend (who he also only knows in the game). Whether it was him going out to exercise or simply shopping for healthier groceries to cook and eat there is no break from the constant battles/missions which makes it feel like one huge insignificant blur. Not to mention that since he is in such desperate need of medical attention the first thing he should change is his diet to give his body some sort of standing ground. The fast food he eats in reality is supposedly so bad that a nutrient bar that tastes like nothing and described as "swallowing debris" is better than it.

in the start, there were a few that got interested in the MC in a couple of dungeons but it wasn't annoying by then. But then it started to have every girl the MC comes into contact with in every dungeon like him, it may also be like a harem sometimes. Because of the mc's confusing act of never really rejecting or saying no straight to the females who shows interest in him so it makes it really really annoying. And then also in the big city with that wu, I don't know what the author wants to point out with that wu but she really became annoying, especially when she compares and insist that the MC and her past lover is the same person.

the reason is that there is a scene that is so cliche that it almost made me stop reading. I was enjoying his progression and the intricate ways he did his quest's but when he got the heath omg was I mad. Like you can see that it was such a Deus ex machina. First he manages to destroy the crystal but guess what it still manages to hit his hearth. Oh but that isn't the end, so he is dying and the sistem offers to heal him, of course he doesn't have enough points so the system offers the second option (you think that he will have enough for this one but no) with which I would be content because it would still be fine and he wouldnt become OP too fast. But he doesn't have enough even for that. So the system offers him the third and the most risky option and he takes it and obtains the SPECIAL AND UNIQUE HEARTH THAT NOBODY ELSE HAS, and guess what the penalty for it's use is cheep even tho it makes him so much stronger.