Young Man, You Are Too Young, Too Simple

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“Young man, your chastity was lost.”

“Σ ( ° △ °|||)!!”

“Give up your v**ginity to save the world! Our motto is–” “I didn’t think it would be bent, la la la la la!”

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少年你图样图森破
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19 Reviews


Ouryuu Zeno
Ouryuu Zeno
Sep 19, 2019
Status: arc3
I've mtled this and it's kinda unsatisfying, the feelings of the MC is superficial and ML is just brainlessly falling in love? The MC doesn't even feel anything much once world shifts to the next one.

Spoiler

The third arc was weird where I think the substitute shou who kinda looks like the MC is the ml... Like he was dating the scum gong for 6 years how did he just change so easily.

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Story is all over the place, very rushed endings for the arcs.
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rainydayromantic
rainydayroma
May 09, 2019
Status: c5
This looks promising and adorably funny! World-hopping novel about an inexperienced young man who dies choking on a gr*pe and is forcibly pulled into a fast-wear situation, assisted by a rather condescending system. His mission seems to be to travel to many worlds and 'abuse' Mary Sue and Gary Sue characters, disrupting their plot-lines. Not much background on the MC so far, but I can foresee his character archetype leaning towards the silly-s*upid, but very earnest, shou. Maybe as the novel progresses he'll get smarter and more powerful, but so... more>> far he is the opposite of OP, haha. His interactions with his system add a bit of dry humor to the story. Slight ch 1 spoiler: In this first arc, he transmigrates into a golden retriever, so you can imagine from that premise that we will see some ridiculous situations.

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Ranseiran
Ranseiran
Nov 18, 2019
Status: Completed
This is suitable for light reader. No too serious plot, but some arcs are heartbreaking while some really make me dizzy with the all-over-the-place plots. Maybe I cant really understand it bcoz I used MTLed, but...... Well, ya know it when u read it. Overall, just ok, not really amazing
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ylial
ylial
Aug 05, 2019
Status: c12
Good plotline but the story is really shallow and annoying. Annoying ML, MC and system, probably the author tried to make it funny but the opposite happened. Also, It ended too quickly and the plot lines in an arc keep jumping without finishing.

Spoiler

I was reading the event where the fire ability user blew himself up and everyone died, the chapter suddenly shifted to another story. The story is really lacking

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Waste of time for me so will drop
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1Sami
1Sami
Mar 30, 2020
Status: c40
This is a really good story so far. There is good character development of the MC as he progresses through the different worlds. He is incredibly naive in the first arc but he gradually becomes scheming and learns how to complete his mission objectives perfectly while keeping everything under his control. The ML falls in love almost immediantly in every arc without the author giving us a real reason why, which is the only real downside of the story. But that can be overlooked when you see the interactions between... more>> the MC and ML. <<less
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FanGirlNoha
FanGirlNoha
Aug 23, 2020
Status: c58 part2
This novel deserves a 5 if you consider only the variety of stories and the drama aspect. And I probably would've rated it 5 if not for the fact that I'm very confused about the MC's actual feelings. We know that ... more>>
Spoiler

he loves the ML from the first world Wen Yan. But we're never confirmed whether all the MLs are the same person or different. Based on how the MC keeps day- dreaming about Wen Yan while he's having intimate actions with other characters, I feel that the MLs could all be different people. But of that's true, then I feel slightly disoriented by the fact that the author does not show any of the MC's conflicting thoughts about sleeping with others or showing emotions for them.

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Maybe he just considers all the other worlds as acting jobs and performs accordingly but it would've been better if the author provided some sort of monologue to clear that up. So it's difficult to understand the MC's emotions clearly.

The translated chapters are now at the 5th arc (there's a bonus arc in-between, 5.5 I guess) The plots of these different worlds in themselves are good for those who enjoy angst and dog - blood drama. But like I said, the MC's own feelings remain unclear.

The MLs are interesting in the sense that they're diverse. We're still not sure if all these MLs arr actually the same person or not. But unlike many other QT novels, it's interesting to read about them regardless of their flaws, because they act so differently from one another. Some are devoted and sweet, some are kinda scummy but repent, some have very questionable moral standings.

Tl;dr: Good: for reading because of diverse stories, different types of MLs and dogblood drama.

Bad: for having an MC who lacks decisive character traits even after 5arcs.

Absolutely RECOMMENDED! ? <<less
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Aachiin0914
Aachiin0914
Sep 18, 2021
Status: --
Im only at the arc 3.

But my hands were itching for a review.

Anyway, MC suddenly for inexplicable reason was bound to a system. Hahaha Im actually sure what kind of system it is, but let's call him BL system. Who knew what's the purpose of the system really is, but from what I read it seemed that, it was to broke the original cp and be with the target or something.

Anyway, this is really a light story. The first two arcs, is very short. Many because the author plan to... more>> cramp arc in ten chapters, that's why the chapter is full of time skip.

The first arc is about apocalypse.

MC is a golden retriever and ML is the cold president. Actually, compare to arc three, the ML developed feelings for MC quite fast.

Although, ML knew MC is very spiritual, well, it's okay to feel possessive to your dog who have powers, but to actually fell in love with them...I doubt it. Except if you knew MC was human at first.

Anyway, this first arc was like a jigsaw puzzle full of hole.

Spoiler

In chapter one, MC said the in coming apocalypse and there's still three days before it happened. In chapter 2, they were already traveling for b base. Then all of the suddenly, ML was slash by a zombie and almost died.

Then skip again, ML already a level four lightning mutant with space. Then boom! Teleport to the base. They took a bath and MC becomes a human. Then they kissed on the same day and finally changed from master and pet to lovers on the same day!

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The time line was actually messy. I even wanted to check the raws if it was actually like that.

Well let's proceed to the second arc.

Second arc is father and the adopted son.

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though, there's still the time skipping. The author's writing skills improved here.

But I'm. not too sure about how long MC really stayed in ml's house as his adopted son.

At first in MC's intro to original plot, he said "don't asked how the father raised his adopted son." Then that's it. I thought, MC was already there for years. But in ml's POV, when he saw that MC was gathering his coirrage to talk to him, he thought, he just adapted MC a month ago or something. So, although MC is shy and introverted ML thought MC was still adapting to his new environment.

Never mind this. Wheat actually, confused me is the part where the biological entered. Or I was just confused. I read this at night well, when the sun was already peaking to the sky. So maybe I'm wrong.

I'm not sure whether it was two years or three days. But after MC and that classmate fought, the biological son arrived.

MC even have a monologue saying something about two years. I understood it as the plot being accelerated. But skipping to that, the plot here is actually fine.

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What I don't understand is, is MC acting or not?

In QT like this, even if you rarely caught on MC's true thoughts, the author will still have hints that MC is acting. Like the MC in the Villain is too cute.

MC is acting there. The whole time he was acting cute, naive baby, the author already hinted that MC was acting.

But in this Novel, there's none.

Well, I gave 5 ratings cause I actually enjoy reading it. It made me think many things, cause it's full of hole.

Anyway, continue to arc 3.

This is where I am currently.

Compare to the first two arcs, this one is actually very good.

Spoiler

MC didn't get together with ML soon. And the emotional dev of ML is clearly written. Though, most readers questioned ml's love love in this arc, if you compare the ML from the first two chapters, the ML here is actually very good.

ML here is already blackened 100%. At first he approached MC because he wanted him to drown in this muddy waters as well. But at the same time, he knew ML couldn't afford MC because both him and the slag gong are not worthy of him.

ML in the story is very sensitive and prone to making mistakes. He already has a violent tendencies and changed so much. He was filled with anxiety.

His emotional dev, first started with MC coming back from England. ML knew he and his lover we're finished. But the moment he meet MC, he knew why his lover loved this man and couldn't hate such innocent person. But at the moment of his desperation, he pushed MC together with in the situation for revenge.

ML haven't developed his feeling for MC yet.

They stayed together for a month, living in one house until the car accident happen.

ML is in very vagile state. And because MC gave ML a home that doesn't have, he was actually very touched. And for a month they stayed together building up their feelings.

Then the slag gong finally knew what happened to his white moonlight and once again slap ML in the face.

ML finally woke up, and didn't want to continue anymore. But the slag gong continue to provoke him.

It was when the slag gong finally made up his mind to gave up his white moonlight and pursue his current lover, the slag gong could sense that his white moonlight have feeling for ML and tried to broke their relationship by Confesing, and telling him the relationship between him and ml.

That's where everything became complicated.

In the end, everyone gave up on ml.

MC flew went back to England to avoid ml, since ML and the slag gong were together so, MC was the one who step back first. But before that happened MC and ML wrestled in bed when ML is drowning himself in alcohol.

Then there's the slag gong with his cheep love. Since MC confessed to the slag gong that he now have someone he loved but thatvperosn don't loved him, the slag gong gave up ml. He said that since he said he love someone then he sincerely love them. Then proclaimed that he won't steal fight MC for ML anymore. Then left with a parting words that MC painted with his left hand.

Oh man, I stead of crying I laughed at this scene. It's so dramatic that it's hilarious. It was too forced I don't know what to do. Hahaha

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Abyway, I'll edit this after I finished reading it again. Hahaha

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Unlike other QT were the first arc is good, this one evolved arc by arc. It the author's writing seemed smoother as the arc goes on.

Arc four is... ah men, I forgot about arc four but it was good.

Arc five made me cry a little bit. The author's emotional words in here improved a lot.

There are two story in arc 5

Spoiler

Because MC was taken away by truck-kun, MC went to martial arts world. There he became a young master that became a prostitute after being solve off when their family bankrupt.

Although there's a lot of mls here originally, MC just stick to his savior. This is really unexpected, because usually, that saviour would just be a second male lead. But here, they never true love.

MC went to go back to modern world after solving the white lotus brother. And the side chapter about the original and the savior really touched me. Their so sweet.

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Anyway, o take back what I said before. MC is a world class actor.

The first few chapters were not written well. But the arcs in the middle were great.

And mc's driving force in continuing this was the ML fr the first world. Though, because the first arc is not written very well, the emotions Dev of MC and ML there... well, compare to other mls in some arc were really shallow.

Anyway, that's the plot designed.

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Arc seven is

Spoiler

Is a BE!

Who knew. I thought, except for MC's clumsy death in arc one everything else would be HE.

MC tried a knew way of getti g point in arc seven. Abusing ml, MC could get double points.

And it was really a tear jerky moments TT

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ike_00000
ike_00000
Dec 11, 2020
Status: --
Uhh idk.

First of all the story-telling isn't great. The story jumps / timeskips at key moments all the time, and many of the developments aren't that logical. Not only does the plot feel jerky, the romance seems sudden because of this.

Secondly, it feels obvious ML would fall in love. MC is just completing the tasks that come, and its due to these acts ML falls for him. Feels like if it weren't MC but somebody else, ML would still fall for them. This makes the romance feel very weak to... more>> me because it is purely due to the system. I bet we'll get some BS about how they were destined to fall in love because of past entanglements or something, but still.

Thirdly, it feels like MC's goal is very simple. System says he has to solve FL, but truthfully this is a very easy task and there's a million ways to accomplish it. Instead, system makes him go around in circles and help ML reach the peak of his life, even though ML didn't really need MC to reach the peak anyway.

Lastly, is "opponent" even a bad person? I don't really think so, but his task is to prevent opponent&ML being together for some reason. System tr*shtalks opponent from the beginning, but they don't even seem that terrible and developments end up bullying & villainizing opponent. In hard situation, people change; most people aren't angels, and innately have selfishness. In the beginning the opponent didn't actually have a problem, but who knows what they went through in the meantime. Feels like discriminating against them and not giving them a chance from the start, and we do see MC pushing opponent's blackening. The author wrote opponent as such a typical vicious cannon fodder character, which imo is a sign of lack of skill.

Other complaints: Arc 1, how is hiding his ability protecting him??? You're in the apocalypse, maybe you can save some strength but MC clearly is as powerful / more powerful than ML so why should he have to be treated like a prostitute??? So unnecessary. <<less
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Kal
Kal
May 19, 2019
Status: c5
The usual quick-wear transmigration novel. 1v1, face-slapping, an abundance of dog food, HE (happy end), etc. All in all very normal, but a cute read. First arc started with the MC in a dog’s body that can transform into MC’s original body. Looking forward to updates.
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Changingchangie
Changingchan
Jun 27, 2020
Status: c54
This is actually suitable for a person who's into something light and fluffy novel, this has no intense plot but a light one. However, there are some arcs where it could get uncomfortable for you, so you can just skip that arc and go to the next one. But since it is still an ongoing translation the only thing I could recommend is to wait for the translator to finish it.

Spoiler

I'm actually waiting until Luo Shitu can go back to our Wen 。:゚ (;´∩`;) ゚:。

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crystal magic
crystal magi
Apr 09, 2020
Status: c30
The first two stories were so good! But then the translator change the style and it’s more of an overview now and it’s much more confusing. It’s the difference between watching a movie and having a friend tell you what happened. Things aren’t as clear and you don’t bond with the characters and things that should mean something or be funny you are left scratching your head in confusion half the time.
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teagsho
teagsho
Mar 02, 2020
Status: v4
It seems that the ML from each world is the same but MC didn't know that? Because in the 3rd arc MC said "Wen Yansu.." (the Arc 1's ML) in his dream after make love with the 3rd Arc ML. Doesn't that means MC didn't think that 3rd Arc ML is the same with the 1st Arc ML? But then MC feeling seems real in the each arc? I'm pretty confused tbh.

If MC still has 1st ML in his heart then why did he give his body and heart easily... more>> to each ML in each Arc? The fact that he's still remember 1st ML it's really disturbing me haha. I mean, if you know that your lover is in front of you (3rd Arc ML) why did he seems to miss Wen Yansu? Aren't they the same person?

I just thought that each Arc has a diff ML (not the same soul) and didn't have any correlation so I just think that this novel is the collection of short story. Now that MC remember 1st ML...... i think deep down in his heart he know that each ML from each Arc is the same that's why he subconsciously give his body and heart to the ML.

I really want to know when MC know that each ML is the same soul OMG he didn't even a bit curious about this and just want to accumulate point so he can go back either to the 1st world or the real world lol.

Not recommended for you if you're the kind of person that want detailed story and clear explanation about the setting of MC and ML because really, the fact that MC making love easily with each arc ML make me really confused, with one push from the system and they did it. Then MC fall in love with them (MLs). Didn't you at least feel repulsive that the one who touch you is a stranger? (Since MC didn't know ML is the same person in each world). Even though I know he have a link with ML but..... at least don't give down so easily! And try to think "why did I feel like he's so similar with Wen Yansu?" Please feel a little doubt with the familiar feeling!

Recomended for you if you just want to read a QT with a light atmosphere. Each arc is short and simple, fluff and didn't have any troublesome dog blood at all. There's a little tragedy in the last chapter of the 1st Arc (MC died protecting ML) but it's not that sad really, so damn light that I didn't even feel anything lol. Each arc end with "Happy ever after" kind of ending (except 1st Arc) and didn't tell anything about the death of MC and ML just like they got together and happy then the end next chapter already next Arc AHAHAHAHAH <<less
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Lazyreader1324
Lazyreader13
Jan 27, 2021
Status: v1c1
The system was annoying and the author makes it comedy but instead of a savage system type. I hate the freaking system. The way MC transmigrates, its annoying and the "shortcutness" way of explaining is too short. It didnt even states how he got the freaking system by eating the grapes like wtf.
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Kazekun
Kazekun
Aug 24, 2019
Status: c16
This is so fluffy and cute at once. Love it. Can't wait for another chapter ?
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DemiUchiha
DemiUchiha
Feb 20, 2021
Status: Completed
It was alright. It could have been better. Like the other comments have said, it was not clear if the ML was the same in every arc or not.

The brother arc was extremely weird :/

4.5/10
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summerspring
summerspring
Jun 22, 2020
Status: c1
Interesting. I actually liked the translation way that it was before bc it seems to be rushed to me in the summarized version. But that is just my preference and doesnt affect my score :)
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1dumbho1
1dumbho1
Dec 18, 2023
Status: c60 part2
I really want to read it properly as the different stories are unique, although it is unclear whether the male lead is the same every arc. Some arcs seem to be more brutal than others and sometimes there seems to be info missing altogether. I just wish it was translated properly somewhere 'cause the MTL is not it. If translated it is an easy read nothing too deep.
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Nom de Plume
Nom de Plume
Apr 28, 2022
Status: c60 part2
Biggest Issue: Continuity is thrown out the window making transitions between chapters confusing. Some needed details are missing and some added details are irrelevant.

It's not clear enough as of the first arc if MC is used to accepting that level of intimacy (kissing). He doesn't accept the ML emotionally at first yet allows the kisses. Over and over. What are his boundries? Is it okay for just anyone to kiss him? Or is Wen Yan special? Second arc seems to imply he doesn't mind at all when he brushes off... more>> a forced kiss from a stranger as nothing.

Note about assumptions after reading finale:
Spoiler

Wen Yan is special. Other ML are not Wen Yan. MC's character settings are explained at the end and it actually makes sense.

Does he owe the others the same sincerity as Wen Yan? Who knows. He is aware that he giving them an illusion. The vacation arc shows he believes that leaving the world early is leaving behind someone who truly belongs to them. He seems to give them happy endings, but I've read too many evil system novels to be convinced!

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Worth a read considering it's much shorter than it appears. I would have rated it higher if the author could have decided to focus on either the main couple or the individual arcs. Instead, both lose out.

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Arc 1: Protecting the animals is everyone's responsibility (c1.1-c1.11)

Spoiler

Original Story- The End of the World: The Director's Tyrannical Passion for the Pure and Lovely Maid (love triangle between President Wen Yan, his housemaid, and the Tang family's son)

Goal- Defeat Su Momo

Gags/POI- MC is a dog; 'similar to original world' turns into zombie apocalypse; ML surface calmness; weird gr*pe thing; main characters more Su than the og!fl; ML is MC OTP

Thoughts- The FL didn't get enough chance to show off just how much of a Mary Su she was, which somehow seems to undermine the importance of the MC's mission. Why does he have to work so hard?

Even the second ML has more development than her. He 'likes' whoever the ML likes in both timelines. His 'feelings' most likely stem from envy of their relationship. He wants love so he tries to get it from those he sees displaying love. It's sick, but works as a character setting.

The FL on the other hand... she is a white lotus and even darkens causing the MCs death. Yet she seems to be truly naive the single time we see her POV. Her behavior and thoughts are all across the board causing her to exist more as a plot device than a character. She is effective at getting everyone to hate MC and believe that she is the OTP of the ML (with help / manipulation from second ML). She completely fails at her role otherwise.

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Arc 2: Dad, won't you love me again? (c2.1-c2.9)

Spoiler

Original Story- The business industry emperor's little demonic princess (Han Jinwen's adoptive (Xin) and legitimate (Xiaonian) sons compete for favor)

Goal- Defeat Han Xiaonian

Gags/POI- Exchange store opens; Pe*vert ML; Kidnappers didn't plan for him to be harmed but he still gets drugged anyway; MC White Lotus Act too effective; XXOO unlocks River Crabs

Thoughts- Both adopted sons were desperate for affection and stability. Both felt threatened by each other. Bio kid took underhanded actions to drive out the other kid. Xin yearned for feelings more secure than a dad son relationship only to die for it despite not acting on it. It's not clear if the original timeline had in*est, but Xin being executed by his father for the sake of the bio son is a riveting detail. What exactly did he believe the adopted son had done? He didn't mu*der anyone for Xin in the new timeline despite many people pushing his bottom line, so it can be assumed that it's not something he does casually.

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Arc 3: How to have a Happy Ending with a slag gong and scum shou. (c3.1-c3.10)

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Original Story- Give me your Love (Shao Yan 'loves' Jian Huaichen yet took Xiao Heng as a substitute for six years)

Goal- Steal Heng from the tr*sh Shao Yan (?)

Gags/POI- Tragic Route, First ML Blackening, Switch Couple, Regretful Slag Gong

Thoughts- ML had been selling his bottom to the scum man in exchange for affection even after he found out the affection was a lie during their third anniversary. One of the most emotional routes taken so far, but it feels a bit out of tune with the previous arcs without a Su rival.

Consistency for this arc is great to the point that it feels like the author inserted a standalone story they had been planning on the side. Maybe the author was still a novice for the earlier two arcs or this is a sign that the mission to bring down the Mary/Gary Su characters is a red herring. MC becomes more comfortable getting with men in each world and even plans to raise children with ML this arc, although we don't get to see them. The one he most remembers is still the ML from the first arc despite them doing the least together. That is the only ML he has faced with his true appearance tbf.

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Arc 4: My lover can't be so bad. (c4.1-c4.12)

Spoiler

Original Story- Reborn ML comes to get revenge against 4th prince faction (ML Ji Bei; MC Xiao Xiangnan)

Goal- Defeat Ling Rui

Gags/POI- Ancient Setting, Naive Prince, Soncon Emperor, Brocon Crown Prince, Prince-Minister Relationship (WangyexCaomin), Ambitious Gay Transmigrator opponent, Rebel Army, Coma, Martyr MC

Thoughts- This arc finally had a worthy antagonist. Ling Rui was truly vicious. He made decisions as if he were a tv series protagonist, and everyone else were but mere NPCs who should die if they were more powerful than his family. He knew he wasn't good enough to chase the MC, so he didn't mind helping him to a BE even if MC was only a potential threat to his love life. LR just wanted to seduce and use ML/other attractive males as tools. He simply didn't see other characters as fellow humans.

Ling Rui was a transmigrator with modern knowledge and modern education given a powerful body trained in martial arts and warfare born into military power. He had all the advantages suitable for a leader, flawed only by his callous and selfish nature. Main characters are very lucky that LR acted in a state of disassociation, creating major flaws in his plans, or else he would have become an enemy strong even within this genre. That may be why he succeeded so easily in the previous life before the combo of foreknowledge from (rebirth ML + MC system) could suppress him.

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Arc 5: Every brother is extremely manly. (Part 1 c5.1-5.8)

Spoiler

Original Story- Potential Taboo Lovers separated right after Confession (ML Jiang Yiyang; MC Tong Xin)

Goal- Defeat Brocon Jiang Yifan

Gags/POI- Failed Confession interrupted before it could be turned down; Interrupted Task

Thoughts- ML this time is so indecisive. He can't distinguish between family affection and love. He does some s*upid stuff bc he doesn't want to lose his bio brother. Not sure how the ML dude has the gall to blame MC for everything when he is obviously the one initiating things. He runs away as soon as the other person responds and then is mad when the other person moves away. MC gives up his best college choice, so that ML can return to his family without him in the way. ML doesn't give the person he likes any security. He trusts his bro actually gave up, despite continuing ambiguity. This leads to a major accident after Yifan makes a very successful taunt against MC. Yifan was saved by MC so may really give up this time.

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Side Mission: NPC? You call this sh*t a vacation? (c5.9-c5.15)

Spoiler

Original Story- Youth tries to protect white lotus brother only to be betrayed (MC Bai Shengmo; ML Nan (gong) Yue)

Goal- Survive hypocrite Bai Lianhua

Gags/POI- White Lotus, AFK System, Shura Field, 4x Scum, Fake Vacation, Handsome on the Inside Lover, Low Key ML?, Hidden Identity

Thoughts- This world seems different than the others in many ways. This ML was cut from a different cloth. Kind, low self esteem, etc. MC also decides to leave ahead of time and give him a Shengmo that could truly belong to him. MC takes the initiative to sleep with him despite it not being necessary, and quite enjoys it too. Nan Yue's extreme proficiency was mentioned more than once as they 'unlocked new positions together'. I would think the ML had his memory this time if this were a 1v1 novel.

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Arc 5.5: Return to World 5/ Every brother is extremely manly (Part 2 c5.16.1-c5.18.2)

Spoiler

Thoughts- Well... Yifan certainly did not reflect on himself. Tbh, Yiyang did not do well at this either. At least he finally cuts off the relationship with Yifan and focuses on his lover instead. I somehow wish Yiyang was left hanging for another few years, but that would make neither of the characters happy.

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Note: My title translations might be wayyyy off

Arc 6: Awooo, Spring is in the Air (c60-71)

Spoiler

Seems to be a beastman story

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Arc 7: Leader, Help! (c72-82)

Spoiler

Didn't find out much even with some skimming so this arc is a complete mystery to me.

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Arc 8: Loosen the reigns to catch the Best Actor (c83-93)

Spoiler

MC's 'wife' runs away from home, seemingly from the beginning of the arc. My guess is that it is the ML and they are both actors. MC seems to be at fault. He tells someone third party to keep a distance from him.

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Arc 9: Waking up every day in love with Master (c94-103, c105-107)

Spoiler

Cultivation Arc?

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Finale: A different way (c108-109) / The same return (c110-111)

Spoiler

Reveal that the lover in Arc 9 was actually the will of heaven for that world (wow) leaving me to wonder if that world dies if ML fulfills promise to 'die together'.

System becomes human and goes to WY world w/ MC and tells ML about system. WY guesses and accepts the content of the missions. He is just happy MC is truly his now. Accompanies MC back to real world to meet parents.

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Extra: Qingge (c112)

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Definitely need to read the MTL arcs to understand this extra, which I have not yet. Hurry up prospective translators!

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lourdes
lourdes
Aug 23, 2021
Status: v3
I have read for now up to third arc. It doesn't have chapter and I'm so lazy to look so I leave it at that.

I really like the third arc. I little sad moment really makes me cry. I don't like drama but this arc was still in the boundary of "light" so it OK. You just feel the ML is pitiful but won't break your heart to pieces. Third arc so far is my favorite. Arc 1-2 is good too otherwise I wouldnt reach Arc 3 if I'm bored... more>> reading the previous 1-2 arc. Today is 08-23-21

Gonna comback after I finish other arc for review. :) <<less
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