Super cute light read! You could probably finish in an hour or less and there’s not really a plot, just some fluff and papapa-ing ;)

Short, sweet and fluffy!!!

I love the MC's naivety and innocence, well it's understandable as it's his first time down the mountain... Love all the parts into bits! It has smut, a bit of plot (I think?) and tons of fluffiness (+MC a fluffy fox) !

A relaxing read to all those complicated and dark stories..

These is simply a sweet short story that you can quickly finish reading in one go. It might feel like you're reading little notes, but the format of the short story is meant to be like that, not because the author lacked "confidence in writing a proper story". It's quite common from some of the chinese short stories I've read.

A rare smut short story without r*pe or blackmail. Many times, I will have the urge to read smut but not ok with r*pe, blackmail, coercion, etc. There are a lot more angsty/Stockholm smut than fluffy smut out there.

This story is basically a destined couple meeting for the first time and gradually falling into love, get into relationship and finally getting married. For a smut novel full of s*x, it actually has a very conservative plotline which is refreshing!

very cute, light fluff and some smut, quite comedic in a sense

shou is adorable but not too dumb (in my opinion) and gong is sweet

it's a very light novel that you can probably finish in an hour or two if you read all in one go.

no real plot though so if you are looking for a light story with no real angst and lots of fluff then this is great but if you are looking for something with a solid plot and character development then this is probably not for... more>> you <<less

Sweet and cute plot however it very simplistic and short. Not very descriptive and repetitive. Kinda boring style of writing (i assume it is the same in original text).

I felt like im reading sentences put together by a kid who lacks vocabulary and starts sentences in the same way over and over again. It would have been a huge improvement if the author put some more work into the length, expanding the plot, adding some descriptions, making it a more interesting read. In summary, idea behind it was great but... more>> delivery inadequate... In my opinion. <<less

Honestly, this is pure fluff and smut but that's clearly what the author is aiming for. With that in mind, I'd say it has done alright... it's a good read if you don't want plot but rather something short, fluffy and (slightly) comedic. :) I'd give it 2.5/5 stars.

A very cute, light, and fluffy read with smut scattered all around. A very nice stop gap after reading those awfully long ones.

They are more like cliffnotes. You cant feel anything for the characters nor their bed actions because it feels like reading bullet points. I hope the original author find confidence in writing proper story, because the characters and plot are ok (very standard for fluff yaoi and that's ok) just need proper sentences.

3.5 stars

Even though it's almost 60 chapters, the individual chapters are so short it reads more like 5. As such, the writing is cursory and leaves one with no particular attachment to the characters or the 'plot' (there really isn't one).

That being said, it is a cute short story with humorous moments, so it's worth the read if you have some time to fill.

Smut and fluff and the fox is so cute _ (:з」∠) _

There is no actual plot, which is good and also not so good. I want to read more about them but but but the story is already end wuwuwu

This makes me think of a somewhat longer version of A Fox Spirit's Guide to Sleeping with Men. It's sweet and simple, and it actually makes it clear from the start why MC and ML are interested in each other, even tho the reason is just "ML thinks MC is a cute innocent demon and MC thinks ML is good looking and nice" (but this is already a step above most serious novels, where you're kept guessing "why tf does he even like him??"). Another thing it has over others... more>> is this time I actually think MC is very cute rather than annoying. Also, ML isn't gay from the start so we get to see ML contemplate about "possibly being bent" ahaha. <<less

It's too sweet... to the point it makes u want to puke.

The narrative is very simple, and it is purely smut with no plot. At the end I was a little bored to finish it because the scenes got repetitive. Their relationship is too fast-paced (maybe because the novel it's short, but it could be better executed, in my opinion) and it made me remember the time I used to read fanfics made by teenagers, lol.

But, it is great for people that doesn't want any angst and a light read... more>> to pass the time (although I agree with the review that states that the MC is too naive, doesn't know how to live in society and ML may be coercing him in some matters). <<less

Short and fluffy but nothing special. It's about a powerful taoist meeting a fox from there, their relationship starts. This is something you can read to pass time or a break after reading something dark/noir novels. Smut 5/10, story 6/10.

yes it is cute but this is the type of story that mixes cuteness and smut haha.

as for the story, it is more similar to narrative and vignettes to there is no overcomplicated plot

Short, smut and fluffy.

Just a really short story full of dog food ?

This could be according to my mood at the time while I was reading, however, I feel like the entire premise would've been adorable or more poetic if the author wrote a bit more? I get it, this novel is supposed to be short and sweet. I love teeth-rotting diabetes-inducing floof, but this just kind of fell short for me... Maybe I just wanted a bit more. This little short actually has potential.

<3 floofy, smexy, hilarious~ I'll give it a 3.5/5. There's nothing wrong with what's in the novel, just... more>> that there could be more. <<less

Chapter 54 + extra 3

naive, s**tty Shou fox demon x Taoist Priest Gong with big s*x drive

Story about a extremely innocent, s*upid, naive and cute Demon Fox that met a straight-faced cultivator who got bent.

Short Narration/Summary :

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Spoiler

Clueless fox got attached to the 'human' and wanted to choose another target got caught and pressed down.

His Bent Taoist Priest Gong worked fast and made a dao contract with the two-tailed little fox demon.

Lots of dualcultivation, fluff, dog food, more smut, short rescuing of the kidnapped fox, short face slapping a s*upid b*tch, shocking the cultivation world with the news that the legendary Ten Kill ZhenJun got a dao companion, short narration of the past of Taoist Priest, marriage

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It's not the brevity that bothers me, it's the writing style. This reads like a 10 years old summer time homeworks. The stuff one does hurriedly in five minutes the night of the last day of summer vacation.

Everything's so rushed it's barely legible. I can't say it's been "painted with broad strokes, " the strokes are so broad they're barely visible huehue.

Feelings, characters, settings, smut, everything sounds so infantile and like the writer themselves is too scatter-brained to string together a coherent sentence.

Cute and short. No serious story just a demon fox and a priest having s*x most of the time. Fox MC is childishly naive and goes along with anything ML wants that it's funny. It's only around an hour read so after filling up on fluff have a pleasant day.