Ace of the Dragon Division

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There’s SAS in Great Britain, CIA in the USA. In Huaxia, there’s Dragon Division, known as the mysterious power of the East.

When a soldier that originally failed to be selected to join, appeared on the Dragon Division’s list again, no one noticed, that this inconspicuous and humble looking guy was actually the Dragon King of the division, the one that’s most difficult to deal with.

He was a man, whose appearance gave every one existential crisis, including a fly that was consecutively caught by him with a pair of chopsticks.

Of course, this story is hilarious as well.

[Shen Yao laughed. “You think I would help you? For what reason?”

Xu Cheng sighed. “Shen Yao, to be honest, you are really pretty.”

“Humph.” Shen Yao snorted coldly, “Can you elaborate on that for me?”

“I don’t know how to get into details, but I can only say that when I accidentally tore your skirt today, I got a boner.” ]

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AOTDD
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Seregosa
Seregosa
May 30, 2019
Status: c101
This is truly quite a subpar novel with a heavily inflated rating because of the translator. It's a pathetic novel with extremely many flaws, 4.5/5? No, its a 3.5/5 novel, and we all know what that means on novelupdates. It took me two chapters until I started to lose interest, 5 to want to drop it and 10 to really get sick of it. But as the fair guy I am, I wanted to give it a proper chance, so I read up to chapter 101 despite not enjoying it... more>> at all. There are actually ZERO good parts in this novel, it's quite amazing. Let me tell you exactly why this novel is so horrible and why the scores are so weird and undeserved, but I'll keep it all in a spoiler bubble because I know I will spoil quite a few things, not that it matters in a story like this.

Spoiler
  1. He’s a regular smoker despite wanting to become one of the strongest, likely since the author must be a smoker as well.
  2. He can’t deal with women properly even if the author wants to pretend he’s got balls. The MC is quite pathetic, he has the mind of a hormone-driven virg*n teenager, the worst kind. He'll get excited and get boners by merely witnessing a glimpse of some beautiful girl's panties and even get nosebleeds from seeing girls in their underwear...
  3. The “showbiz” in this novel is pathetic, his supposed “wife” is clearly just a pretty piece of meat that everyone wants to "eat" and has no real value other than her face. The paparazzi is also way overdone, we're talking about criminal level stalking and huge groups of hundreds or thousands of people gathering everywhere she goes out of nowhere.
  4. There’re excessive descriptions about how beautiful some people are, especially the mc's wife, it's to the point of making you feel uncomfortable.
  5. The women acts like little kids, yelling about face this, face that and refusing to accept official decisions, that stuff is enough to call the police, they’re technically intruding into his home since they’re no longer officially living there, but he just gives up and lets them live there. They're also ridiculously petty and thinks that everyone should treat them specially because they're beautiful. Doesn't help that the coincidences are way too many and forced, like how a hot police woman happens to stay at his apartment and is one of the ones putting up a fight to not be kicked out, she's in the same line of work as the MC and pretty much the same department, especially later on. The other girl that refuses to leave just HAPPENS to be the BEST FRIEND of his wife. As if that's even possible... Despite this being a novel with the MC only wanting one woman and having no interest in other women at all, the author forces fake romance in and I really mean he FORCES it in. Instead of focusing on interesting stuff, we often have to sit through the bullsh*t pulled by these girls and their conversations with the MC. A good way to waste text and reach word count quotas, but a horrible way to write a novel in.
  6. The police also acts like idiotic children, what’s that about face and wanting to beat someone up because they’re seen with a girl they work with? Are they kindergarteners? This is a normal thing over there, it's not an isolated case.
  7. It’s overall ridiculous in so many ways, I mean, just how out of touch with reality is this author if he thinks that everyone yells about face all the time and will act like kids just because, say, someone they like a little gets close to a man? The police guys actually sat staring at him for dozens of minutes straight when he was invited to a dinner with the girl, are you serious? This isn't just pathetic anymore, this is a leveled up version of pathetic. Just how starved for s*x are these people if they all would do anything just to talk to her? I mean, geez, you'd think she was an immortal above the clouds, yet she's just a kinda beautiful girl with a bad personality. At least this kind of thing is slightly more acceptable in a cultivation novel where some people are indeed way stronger than others and would get arrogant and conceited, but this is just s*upid for our modern day society. Doesn't get better when one of these guys, a "SWAT" team member, acted like a kid with mental issues, or easier to understand for most of us, a s*upid young master type character in a cultivation novel that only exists to get faceslapped quickly as the author drags things out way too much.
  8. The MC is brainless, he acts like a chinese version of a hot-headed japanese justice shounen protagonist.
  9. The power levels are weird and useless. We never get to know exactly what they represent more than someone at higher ranks being more OP, why are the military people so much stronger anyway? Being way stronger than those top pros who actually WORK to build muscle strength, and not just by a little.
  10. People repeat themselves over and over again and every villain is pretty much a copy-paste, like being offended, unreasonable and outraged at not being given "face" and then starting to threaten the MC to get his way only to fail and then keep on holding a grudge and threatening with lines such as "I warn you, don't go out after 10pm" (this particular one is a favorite of the author, used at least a dozen times in 100 chapters). Every single enemy is truly the same, no matter who they are or where they're from. Be they police, young master, gangster or foreigner, women or male.
  11. The mc's powers gets pretty ridiculous, like using ecolocation to clearly see and hear everything through walls, metal, clothes etc, even the contents of a gas tube, he can also see through flesh all the way to peoples' skeletons and whatever else. He can see this clear as day, including the colors and even things like printed on text and things several hundred meters away. It even, no matter how much info needs to be processed, puts no strain whatsoever on his brain or eyes! Wooh, so awesome. Honestly, if you give such a half-assed explanation and then pretend it's fine, it just makes things cringeworthy... It's not even an issue of being OP, it's just s*upid and unnecessary. He also has the power of ants and several different animals mixed in one and gets all their good parts, like being able to lift many times his own weight like an ant, at 10 times his own weight, he can punch out at 1500+kg... So, I guess he'll be able to throw punches with forces above a dozen tons later on, meanwhile, everyone else is just kinda normal, at best being stronger than "normal"...
  12. He has no grasp on other countries, the author actually described britain as "the british empire" and pretended that some made-up princes acts like young masters (kind of) and even that there were some severe public racism going on towards the MC like him being cursed at in various ways and being called a "yellow monkey" repeatedly. The female lead's mother is also a "british lady" but she somehow acts exactly like a chinese mother-type character, complete with all the forcing her kids into marriage and trying to force him to have kids and the worldview that 24 isn't young and her daughter should get married already, this is all despite her LIVING IN BRITAIN. Also, there's this "tevez" guy who is supposedly an "authentic british man" who also acts EXACTLY like a chinese young master and lusts after the mc's wife. By the way, it turns out that there are "rich and influential heirs" from half of britain that lusts after her for some reason even though she was never in the showbiz over there, also, obviously, the class system is (in the mind of the author) similar to the one in china with all of these rich nobodies doing s*upid stuff and acting like d*cks to people for no reason just because they have some cash. What the hell? This ignorance is ridiculous. Even the MC pretty much seems to have grown up in britain, yet his values are pathetically chinese. The author shouldn't put in such a setting if he can't pull it off at all, might as well call britain "china version 2" and stop the bullsh*t. I guess I should praise him because there's not too much targeted racism and "china numba 1" bullsh*t, but there's still a fair deal of it, just not as much as in other chinese novels of similar type. Kinda funny how the MC lived most of his live in britain but acts as if china is the only place he belongs in and he's kind of xenophobic in a way, talking about "his country" and stuff like "how dare you come to 'our' country and have me play 'your' game? no, gotta play by the local customs if you come to china!"... Sigh. That tevez guy only exists to give an outlet for chinese racists to feel satisfied about themselves and how "great" their country is.

Let's stop here. I believe that by now, you can see quite a few of the flaws in this story and why you shouldn't read this.

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My final verdict is... don't read this, it's not worth it, it's truly a subpar novel whose only purpose is to waste your time and try to write an easy novel with focus on word count. The score does NOT reflect the content, one of the few novels least deserving of a high score like this yet having one because of manipulation of ratings. I hope I just saved you a lot of time. Also, the first 10-15 chapters will give a perfect picture of how the novel will continue playing out, nothing much will change, so don't bother to keep on reading if you decided to give it a try but don't like it after that many chapters. <<less
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Not Red Yet
Not Red Yet
Jan 28, 2019
Status: c10
Nothing to read here, just a typical lousy Chinese novel that has face smacking and forced drama.

If you like novels where A chapter is just useless arguing before a fight then this is perfect for you. MC is married in name to a woman, like cold and elegant ceo wife and other such novels.

Just another novel where useless banter takes up most of the chapter with our MC having little to no say cause of fools.
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kkgoh
kkgoh
May 28, 2019
Status: c175
SUMMARY
Very average novel. No major problems, but nothing special either.
I hate to bust balls, but ratings were severely inflated because translator was only releasing bonus chapters in exchange for hitting NU rating benchmarks...

PREMISE
Physically gifted soldier is severely injured during a mission, and mysteriously gains superpowers (gene-editing) during the process. He semi-retires to a civilian life as a police officer (basically Robocop), and along the way needs to figure out how to use his newfound powers to gain acceptance from his estranged family and woo the many (possible)... more>> women in his orbit.

COMMENTS
(1) Mundane face-slapping plot
MC becomes a super soldier via a gene cheat and becomes obscenely OP. Proceeds to steamroll everything/everyone. Nothing wrong with OPness if it's done well/humorously. But there's little to no comedy. It's the typical MC-hides-his-strength-and-faceslaps-every-dumbass-that-challenges-him. Repeat every dozen chapters.

(2) Useless harem
All of the women are useless damsels-in-distress. No personalities. They have various backgrounds (the law-enforcer/policewoman, the actress, the rich brat, the aloof-military-type). It's just all been done to death.

The MC does seem committed to his childhood friend/wife-in-name and isn't a philanderer. That's about the only noteworthy point.

(3) Broken leveling system
The idea of Class E through S don't make sense because they are just based on physical ability (how fast/strong/responsive/enduring you are). It becomes just a random pointless number because MC's powers break the levels.
Spoiler

How are you supposed to classify supernatural X-ray vision, super hearing, or super strength while you are still Class C? Because it clearly makes you way more OP than a Class B.

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(4) Inappropriate ratings
I respect that translators need to make a living, but exchanging bonus chapters for inflated ratings seems a little bit disingenuous. No real harm since I'd just call this a victimless crime. Readers just need to be aware before they invest too much time into this novel. <<less
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sleeplessnk45
sleeplessnk4
Jun 13, 2019
Status: --
Spoiler

Xu Cheng is introduced as the chad, he's the best of the best but then he's not, but actually still is??? Lol He's married to the no1 beautiful woman and all the stacys want him, but he's not interested for some reason. He's cold and talented and a smoker, that's all you need to know. He's too cool for actual characterization tho. I'm too much of a loser so maybe Xu Cheng won't want me to read about his awesome face-slapping adventures defeating all the incels.

For real, it's definitely not for me. But everyone's different anyway.

MC is just so strange. Every character is strange, I just can't relate.

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clueless
clueless
Jan 24, 2019
Status: --
It's interesting novel, usually it's about how corrupted the police are, but here the MC as a police, do everything according to the law, he doesn't care about one's background. He is righteous in a sense, but not s*upid.

I like how the MC stick to his principle and his own goal, to the point neglecting his own beautiful wife, for couple of years. He did that not because he didn't love her, but because he really loves her. He did all that because of his inferiority complex that caused by... more>> what happened to his parents in the past. He just wants that he didn't walk the same path as his father did, he just wants that his children have a complete parents and live a carefree life. So to overcome it he worked really hard to achieve his dream (to be in a dragon group).

And I like the part how he eliminate all his love rivals, because they worked together to assassinate him.

The other character I like is the heroine, the MC wife, I like how devoted she is to MC, though at the beginning I didn't like her attitude, after 40 or so chapters you will get the hang of it, why she so devoted. After 200+ chapters, there will be major changes to their loves life. All I can say is I like how she supporting MC as a wife and how she did it unconditionally.

There are some humours, though sometimes the author put it in a places that seems out of place. Just imagine while you're being a target of assassination, can you still joke around with your colleagues about nicknames and about how to pickup girls, or joking while in another 10 minutes you will have life and death duel. Well I don't particularly care about it, and actually enjoyed it as that part lighten up the mood.

The main plot is about how he got all his power because of genetic mutation, if you read till the end, you might think about super gene, except that this is like it's prequel.

According to the ending chapter, there is no other female characters except his wife. So no harem.

Overall it's a good novel, I don't know why the rating so low. <<less
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Phaos
Phaos
May 31, 2019
Status: c35
i wanted to enjoy this ln but the more I read the more seem to lose interest.

the novel direction is wishy washy, let's have a superhuman which acts like a mall cop, pretends to be a vigente and does everything by the books. Then it adds a harem filled it with random beauty willing to live with strangers off the bat. It's like reading a kids fantasy.
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novaes
novaes
Jan 30, 2019
Status: c28
Seems like yet another OP Chinese MC harem protagonist in the modern day complete with arrogant young masters, near total corruption of every level of society from government to the streets, devastating beauties lusting after the MC, face slapping, super powers and most of the same stuff you usually see in these novels.

Not sure if it's harem yet, since there is no harem tag but there's already a bunch of candidates and it's pretty much exactly what you'd expect bar one twist. Thankfully the MC does not appear to be... more>> an amoral, penisbrained, degenerate like they are in most Chinese harem novels, at least FOR NOW. <<less
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xaist
xaist
Aug 09, 2020
Status: c728
I ended up dropping the book. The novel started off average with the usual cliches in Chinese novels sent in the modern day; the MC is overpowered, FL is a beauty, and rich second generation constantly harassed our MC. However I can't really recommend this novel because the author's writing is constantly pulling me out of the novel making me question its internal constancy.

  • Ex. Dragon division is either the strongest or weakest organization depending on the plot.
  • Ex. Mu*der is only illegal when someone tries to kill the MC
  • Ex. Killing other countries' soldiers doesn't start a war when the MC does it
The only positive thing I found in the novel is that the MC is loyal to the FL, it's too bad that the FL disappears for a majority of the... more>> chapters and only shows up to be a damsel or a trophy.

The main reason I dropped the novel is because around ch.720 MC is ret*rded.

Spoiler

He pulls the whole I became ugly now, so the woman who waited on me for 4 years can't possible love me. I am just a monster so I must fake my death and leave her

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cencourang
cencourang
Oct 03, 2019
Status: c900
Okay, 1st I want to say, sorry for my broken English. But I really want to review this novel.

First time I read this novel, I though it will be another cliche genre (and I actually like it genre like this for binge read, as long as the story stay consistent and no one became ret*rd.). The first couple chapter, I already feel it, like harem member appear nowhere, broken promised with fiancee, arrogant young master, etc.
But, the author really broke that expectation and bring something fun to read.

SPOILER ALERT!!!

When... more>> you think about harem, 3 of them that you think will became his harem member, only 2 that really fall in love. And there is a reason for them to like the MC. And the end of the day, MC only choose 1, he rejected 1 other girl. 3 of this girl, have their own problem and personality too. They got characters development.

For the plot of this broken fiancee thing, we got an explanation here and it really make sense why they became like that. MC just an Orphan. The fiancee is the flower of the England. The fiancee not only beautiful, she is a successful businesswoman and actress too. Meanwhile MC have a complex about his status. Not only his mother leave him, his father got killed. This make him want to focus on getting revenge. He love his fiancee, but he got inferiority complex over her. Always think, he didn't match with her. Fiancee the other hand, feeling guilty for MC, because how much MC did for her when they still live together in England. So, the story about them, is how the MC overcome his inferiority complex and be more confident, the fiancee try to became more honest to her feeling.

Arrogant young master is just a name. They just appear to start the conflict. The focus of the story in the 1st arc, is about how MC fight underworld as a police.

After the 1st arc clear, we got little arc about MC became a mentor to his fiancee to variety show on TV. Its a cute short arc.

After that, MC tried to get back to his main career. To enter military again and enter Dragon Division.

After that, MC try to resolve with douchebag that keep disturb and threatening his fiancee and her family.

And finally, we got the arc where MC try to get revenge.

For me, this is the downfall of the story. The reason?

We got the fact that his mother love his father so much and the one who killed his father was a man who fall in love with his mother. One of those high clan just like his mother. For this, his mother tried to make his son look dead so nobody from her family or the man who killed her husband family chase after her son. She got confined by her family. After learning that, MC want to rescue her. So he kill the family that responsible for his father dead, and rescued his mother, and killed whoever try to prevent him to get his mother out from her confinement. But, instead succeeding to rescued his mother, his mother dead in a lame excuses.

So, what happen next? The story became shit.

Author literally can make MC mother live, and make some development how this mother and son can get together again (just like author My Wife Beautiful CEO, where after rescued his mother, we got a story about their development, fact even tho I hate that story too, LUL). And how they live together.

Why did I said story became shit? The nightmare that I told in the beginning, happen here.

  1. sh*t tons "Arrogant Young Master" appears. I don't need to explain or giving an example right for this?
  2. MC became one of those MC that "CHOP CHOP CHOP CHOP" everything, and became arrogant just like usual MC in xianxia where he already OP
  3. All the character introduction, development, and progression became shit. One of them is the one that I said in point 2 above. Not only that, do you remember the stewardess girl that love MC but got turn down? She appear again. What do you think of her character? She is strong and dependable woman. But when she appear again, did you know how did she became? Out of nowhere, she became one of those prostitute wannabe that her father want to use to make his business succeed. Like, what the heck? Why suddenly she became like that? And she became one of those ranting and throwing tantrum and "NEED HELP" woman that MC need to save. More ridiculous is how the arc end. MC know how scumbag her father was, but instead saving her with making her became dependable again, he help her father succeed with his business (Yes, MC became rich boy that have connection everywhere). Whose next? O yeah the fiancee. So, the right hand of MC mother still live, and she have all MC mother legacy (money) and want to make the fiancee became the successor. MC and fiancee agreed. But what did they do? Instead learning from MC mother right hand (because she is a successful and expert in this field, she is literally the one who handle MC mother business), she want to going to collage. For what? She said "To learn more about business". What the actual f*ck. She literally have someone that expert in those field, know what thing more important to the business (if you go to college, you know how college work right?). The real reason why she goes to college again, and in America, just for the sake of arrogant young master shit.
And, I finally gave up. So, if you really want to read this story, just read until MC mother arc done (so you know the cause of MC main arc). After that, just drop the story. The story literally end there. Not only MC got his revenge, he finally met with his mother (even though she's dead), MC bury his mother next to his mother (literally what he want, to bring his mother to go to his father grave) and MC already get together with the fiancee, or I can say, they already officially married. <<less
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Requiem17
Requiem17
May 06, 2019
Status: c103
So far the story is an appealing blend of both comedy and action, the fight scenes are enjoyable and it isn't the typical overpowered Chinese MC, steam rolling everyone from the start. Although he is powerful I feel that at this moment in the story he is a big fish in a little pond needing to be truly tested and pushed to his limits in order to unlock his full potential and any latent DNA that is in his system from the serum.

Enjoyable read. I recommend for people to check... more>> it out. <<less
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AtnShadid
AtnShadid
May 14, 2020
Status: --
Face slapping, arrogant s*upid young masters, gambling their whole worth like it's nothing and not stopping if they're losing, but go in deeper.
People treat MC wife as the most beautiful person out there, straight up want to snatch her even when she says she does indeed have a Husband and is married.
Story has too many problems, also can we get a modern world novel without this Chinese nationalism? Like holy shit....
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Kayode
Kayode
May 01, 2019
Status: c102
OK this novel is pretty good.

I went in expecting yet another variation on the wicked soldier King and found out I was wrong. This novel has plenty of comedy it isn't afraid to laugh at itself and doesn't try to be all broody and shit. There is a clearly defined hierarchy of female love interests and most importantly it seems to have learned from the others as it has a plot that actively strives not to leave large gaping holes in logic.

TL:DR

Read this its fun and interesting
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Divinechaotic
Divinechaoti
May 04, 2021
Status: v700
One of those typical tr*shy chinese light novel with a narrative about China being bullied by other countries when in fact China is also one hell of a bully. It also tells you that they are united like cells making up a creatures body when in fact you will see news about chinese people tricking and selling their fellow chinese for money, chinese people who suddenly jump in front of cars to scam money out of people and the chinese army bullying small countries because they are fighting for their... more>> territories in the West Philippine Sea <<less
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MyOrigin
MyOrigin
May 01, 2019
Status: c103
I’ve been reading this since it came out and I completely respect what these people are doing. The story is great and I can’t wait for the MC to become more domineering. Don’t read a couple chapters and give it a bad rating, and also don’t give it a bad rating without even reading it. Wait for it to finish before reviewing it!
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lightningninja123
lightningnin
Jul 21, 2019
Status: c1000
Do you know the difference between a open pe*vert and closet pe*vert?

one of them don't pretend to be normal

I gotta love novels that are not harem because MC doesn't love or only love one of the females while the h**ny chinese author makes all female character (all peerless beauty) only attracted to him for god knows why. Only difference between this novel and harem novels is that one has an author that is open about being an harem and the other has an author that is trying to be special.
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Arcani97
Arcani97
Apr 30, 2019
Status: c102
History very good and with very interesting characters, he has a strong character but also very intelligent, with a good moral and until now very fair and loyal.
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Deathwing
Deathwing
Jun 28, 2020
Status: c308
This novel started as a minimum 4.5 stars.

However, the quality seriously deteriorates after a few hundred chapters. The characters become even blander than any other Chinese novel out there. The characters other than the main character are basically just fillers. The main character joins the "Dragon Division" but other than himself, no one is able to do anything in that faction. The author is on-par with several Korean authors when it comes to racism. Any country that is not China is heavily criticized and face-slapped.

The Female Lead is a, literally... more>> "nation-devouring, light-skinned, alluring beauty" where any problem the MC faces is directly due to her. It feels like author just keeps running out of ideas and just uses her to create another arc. <<less
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Veresta
Veresta
Apr 19, 2020
Status: c406
I rate the novel 2.5 stars, maybe 3 tops. The novel started off as interesting until it deteriorated to some boring stuff.

1. The novel is filled with clichés such as
• The female lead is a one of a kind ultra beauty who's only use is to be a trouble magnet
• Young masters that get spanked then their backing revenge only to get spanked also
• The MC gets into accident early on but luckily gets OP powers
• The patriotism cliche commonly seen in korean novels where they... more>> basically shove in to your face that their country is the best and others are garbage.

2. The so called dragon division is USELESS. Aside from the MC and the former division commander (MC's teacher), everyone is so weak that MC has to do all the job most of the time

3. The story became repetitive "you piss me then I kill you" plot. The story basically lost substance at some point <<less
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Chip554
Chip554
May 02, 2019
Status: c104
This is a fun read. The Main Lead had set goals and knows exactly what he wants. And although he has some female friends, he's only got the FL in his mind, which I'm glad about since I'm not a fan of harem.
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d4sh
d4sh
Nov 13, 2019
Status: c306
The fact that this isn't a harem is already a big plus.

Anyway here's the MC:

  1. Here he's got the chance with other women but he's like "what? no. I love my girl. sorry." Nice change of pace. Otherwise an MC is Married to/in love with 1 person. But then f*cks and collects 10 more just cuz. And it's always the wives that are so understanding and willing. And the dude is obviously suffering and struggling that 10 women want to be in a polygamist relationship with him. Poor MC reluctantly accepts. Dunno what's it with that in every f*cking novel.
  2. Nationalistic within reason. Don't be racist and dude won't f*ck you up. Tho it is still a Chinese novel so it's like China #1, and the rest of the world are ignorant morons with no culture obviously. I don't know if that's something in the contract that the author has to push China vs the World down our throats or CCP is going to ban their books or something...
    Spoiler

    Dude straight up messes with the queen of England and kills one of the princes. And the Queen had absolutely no reason to act the way she did. Like a young master thug type. What? But the plot demanded and we got a ret*rded few chapters.

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    Anyway, it's a few chapters of BS like that but you can get through them since it's not super badly written.
  3. Smart and already strong so this is really him going from strong to stronger. Usual trope is that the MC is tr*sh underneath the tr*sh in a backwater village that's in a backwater country. Literally level 0. Then they get sudden powers and become arrogant pricks who get their revenge. Here the MC is already established as an accomplished soldier. And his personality doesn't change too much or at all. The consistency is nice. Although we haven't yet gotten to the real story. Still a bit more world building.
Overall, there's decent writing, characters and character development, plot, premise, pacing, etc. It's worth giving it a shot. You'll know within 200 chapters if you like it or not and that's a bargain.

I can totally see myself updating the rating to 3 stars depending on how the story pans out. We'll see.
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