Childish Flower

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This is a story where you love me but I don’t love you. A sweet story about an alpha and an omega.

He did not cherish him in the past, wantonly trampling over the other party’s affection, cutting the other party with bruises all over. How much of a bastard was he, that he was able to exhaust the other party’s affection, and the other party only requested for freedom.

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未熟之花[ABO]
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readingthings
readingthings rated it
June 10, 2019
Status: Completed
I was a bit nervous that this story was going to be too heartbreaking for me because of all the comments. As it turned out, it wasn't bad. So either I'm immune to certain levels of drama or it wasn't sad at all. Might be because we're given the perspective of both characters. It's an understandable situation really. Add is a little bit more plot devices and we could have had a telenovela here where it would feel like our souls were being torn to pieces. In all, it's a... more>> decent piece of work to read and the translation is good too. The story is worth a read.

For anyone who can't stand heartbreak and likes to read a bit of spoilers like me:

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So the drama of this is that the ML thought the MC plotted against him to trap him into the marriage. The ML was in love with the younger sibling of the MC (who died) and was tricked by the mother-in-law to bond with the MC (who was in love with the ML). When things begin to go good the MC finds some stuff and jumps to some really intense but logical conclusions and BAM! Drama. Things happen and we get a bit of reverse role going on. So readers can feel that justice is being made for the MC. This story has a happy ending. Although it could turn into a cannon fodder tragic story. Add in some transmigriation and.. huh... nevermind. I'm getting way off topic now.

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Adlt_1226
Adlt_1226 rated it
April 2, 2021
Status: Completed
i think this novel has received a lot of unfair review...i think it was great, while it was not perfect and yes, generic abo plus angst and drama, it was nevertheless a good read. I think the issue lies in the length, it was too short and the number of chapters was not enough to let the story develop properly... it had a lot of potential and would be something you can pickup if you’re looking for a short angsty read
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Sleep-deprived
Sleep-deprived rated it
December 12, 2020
Status: extra 1
This is a simple story but it made me cry a little.

If you're looking for something with a reasonable amount of knives - just enough for the conflict to be interesting, not enough to want to die of sadness - this is it.

My only issue is the resolution. This is a HE but ... more>>
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I can't help but think that the ML doesn't really deserve the MC. Yes, even with the change of heart. Moreover, it's not so good for the MC to stay with him either. I would love it to turn out as an omega striving for and getting independence, and it almost here... If not for the sudden estrus which makes him reconcile via s*x with his ex.

Still, before that, it was a good read.

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dee_ism
dee_ism rated it
November 12, 2020
Status: --
A quite generic story. It's predictable, yet I still bawled my eyes out.

The MC is really such a nice and gentle person and so strong on top of that.
The ML might come as a cold person, but imo he is also a gentle person, and his reluctance also come from justifiable reason.

What I regret is the ending not that satisfactory. They should have a nice heart to heart talk.
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instead of proposing during s*x, lmao

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Pinxter
Pinxter rated it
July 25, 2019
Status: extra 2
I really like this one. The love and pain endured by MJ is subtle yet deep. It always bring me to tears when he was hurt by TC's words. But I also like that he didn't give up and want to stand on his own regardless what. Thank God it's a happy ending. The writer's way of putting emotion to words is deep. Thank you for writing and translating :)
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NunuYuyu
NunuYuyu rated it
June 8, 2019
Status: Completed
The story is good. Enough plots and I feel quite satisfied with the ending. Recommend it to everyone, especially to anyone who wants a bittersweet story.
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tashtumea27
tashtumea27 rated it
May 20, 2019
Status: extra 1
The summary is both succinct and accurate. Please read this, you will probably cry and laugh but will love it in the end. It has just the right amount of angst, the story building was done nicely, and the characters are reasonably written.

as another reviewer had said: 5/5 would cry again
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effing muffins
effing muffins rated it
May 19, 2019
Status: extra 1
i thought I was prepared to cry when I started to read this book, I was not.

This story is filled with heartache and miscommunication, so much miscommunication, sounds like a lot of the stuff out there buuut the author has a way of making everything feel so real.

The MC is such a lovable character and he grows so much, you won´t regret reading this!

Note: In my opinion, you know an author is good when they make you go through a lot of emotions in a few chapters
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justdoityoufucker rated it
April 6, 2023
Status: Completed
Ah, I have to agree with another reviewer who said that they wished for ... more>>
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the MC to get with his boss.

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I don't hate this or anything, there's just so much stuff that the ML did that is swept under the rug, and it mostly seems to be the case that
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the ML basically forces MC to get over it because he suddenly wants to get remarried and live happily ever after, and he doesn't have to fully apologize for the sh*tty stuff he did.

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Quick read, translation isn't great, heed the tags.

Edited to add: other reviews blame MC for
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the pheromone incident but it's pretty clear that MC's mom (and maybe dad) planned that specifically. Blaming MC or ML is just gross. They're both victims of that.

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Anissia
Anissia
February 25, 2023
Status: Completed
This story is heavily underrated. It is an enjoyable quick read, good enough given the length of it and amount of chapters, it has some angst, misunderstandings, and fluff. I would have liked it to have lasted more, but it was nonetheless a good ride that I liked while it lasted. I love the main characters here, tho the ML has some minor flaws but it is very acceptable, a very decent ML and MC, the characterization and emotional plot is good enough. I give this novel a muah <3,... more>> I loved it, made me teary eyed, and then laugh, then perplexed, and then made my heart soften and melt, all through one sitting. <<less
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Aebpl1
Aebpl1 rated it
July 13, 2022
Status: Completed
There's no doubt the novel is written so elegantly you can't just drop it even after so many times disappointed with the inconsistency and rushing the story and those disastrous plotholes in the end

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that two last chapters where ML corners MC and coerces him into a new marriage leaving me with disgust and full resentment and then adding that second pregnancy leaving me thinking has the author rented their brain to devil (a s*upid kind at that) ??

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About ML's first love :

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There's always a f*cking insecurity over whether he moved on or not for MC. Even after ML confessed to reassure him he loves MC there was a tone of " Now that he's not here, I'll love you with my all", the issue of a childhood sweetheart could be easily handled but the author had to keep the so-called "ANGST", this mixed with a rushed writing made author unable to resolve the issue till the end leaving a bitter taste ending... past loves which cut deep were always spicy topics for me but I had no much sympathy for what was supposed to be called first love in this story but sounded more like haunted love to me, what the hell?

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hycave
hycave rated it
June 24, 2022
Status: Completed
I was on a hunt for angst that can make me cry and sadly this novel doesn't get there. There is angst but I feel like the author always cut it short in the delivery. Not only the angst part, I feel like the story about his family, his kidnapping story and even the last chapter of this novel ended abruptly. I still enjoy reading this novel for the most part of it but I don't think I will re-read it in the future.
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6xux6
6xux6 rated it
March 18, 2022
Status: Completed
This novel has me crying, it's really sweet and has some fluff here and there but mostly sad, I really like the characters development at the end and really enjoyed the read and I may re-read it again
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SararaGold
SararaGold rated it
May 25, 2021
Status: Completed
  1. Bitter sweet, and angst.
  2. Predictable storyline.
  3. Weak shou protagonist, as in physically and emotionally.
  4. Gong is not scum, but I personally don't like him that much. I don't really know why.
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XxmeacxX
XxmeacxX
April 12, 2021
Status: Completed
Quite messy. All the characters need halp. Only the bookstore boss was decent, he mvp yet forgotten. All is forgotten when it comes to lust - the interpersonal relationships and the plot development. Too little people to help MC, kids, and the house. Side charas only there to support plot movement. The events were also squished to fit the given chapters. Couldve given us more of the past, present, and future happenings - expand and deepen the story. Explain more ba. I was about to rate it 0.5 but the... more>> angst surprised me - I stayed and rated it.5 up for the angst xD esp the birth scene (those scenes were memorable). They should've explored more on it (all the angst parts. Also, make ML work hard ah, MC so blinded by love. ML got easy mode. Even if it's understandable if you're in his shoes, still though, try a bit more to be decent will ya) tsk, give us more knives to the heart!

If he's unhealthy, be consistent with it ah, what's with our mc's fertility rate. His health should not be able to do that. Would've been believable if he couldn't have a child anymore. His health is always so-so, sometimes unhealthy yet healthy and sometimes super unhealthy. All their problems seems to be resolved through s*x too... Or ML forcing his way in like using their child. What kind of ceo/director are you. Welp, our MC loves him no matter what, our ML must've done a great deed in his past life.... the side cp was so sudden and random our hardworking translator had to jog our memory to make a connection with that one inro sentence of that chara.

Do read it I guess. Esp if you're into dogblood sht. Story got holes though, but chapter total-wise, it won't consume much of your time lol

I COME BACK TO THIS NOVEL WHENEVER I WANT AN ANGST-FIX ESP TO THE BIRTH SCENE 👌 okay portrayal of a weak-healthed chara (I've read a lot of novels and mangas/hwas/huas and this is one of the most vivid ones esp when a chara is in a supposed coma and have to relearn to work out those muscles. Also for a hard birth. Others especially comics types aint that descriptive/vivid)... But if I want a true angst fix, I have another novel in mind where every arc is tragedy and dogblood lmao <<less
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Vineri
Vineri rated it
March 18, 2021
Status: --
First off, I just want to say that the misunderstanding of the ML is only understandable if you don't take into consideration his actions afterward is... less than desirable. He didn't even ask for an explanation. Like, the ML even act as if MC was throwing a temper tantrum by leaving after he hit him.

The way they made up disgusts me too, as everything emotional seems to happen while they're having s*x. And then when MC tries his best to get away, ML doesn't even have the decency to leave... more>> him alone, but intruded in all aspects of his life, even his home.

In fact, the whole time I was wishing that MC would just run off with literally anyone else and leave the pos to mourn by his lonesome. <<less
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Reyleisha
Reyleisha rated it
October 28, 2020
Status: Completed
Rating: 4/5- I have cried when reading novels, but I really bawled when I read this.

I felt incredibly heartbroken for the MC, and truly wished he could have a happy ending, but the ML really never redeemed himself and the MCs family never resolved their issues which felt very unfair to the MC. I think this novel ended with me feeling that the MC got the short end of the stick.

I love angsty plots and the angst was great, but then I still couldn’t help but feel that the shou... more>> deserved better when this book ended and he never really got his happy ending. <<less
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chere100
chere100 rated it
October 24, 2020
Status: Completed
Kind of a generic story, but not badly told. I think the real factor negatively effecting my opinion of the story might have been a combination of translator and writer. Not many spelling problems, but massive grammar ones. Made reading a chore, sapping enjoyment from a story that was already not particularly impressive. Names seemed to get mixed up at times, adult scenes weren't well translated, and probably weren't well written either. Some confusion particularly in the extras with at least one character that I had no idea who they... more>> were, I don't think they were mentioned in the story, and because the protag had a second baby around the end of the story, I initially assumed it was the second child. However I now feel that it was someone totally random, and I'm not sure if the second child was mentioned there or not. The translator had things rather confusing, and I think the author did, too. Anyways, it was a shorter story and didn't take up too much time, so I don't feel too bothered about wasting some time reading this. I think one's time could be better spent on a more enjoyable book, though. <<less
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Hannalrd
Hannalrd
September 22, 2020
Status: --
Yes, its a nice drama... but goshammit if a nice LONG CONVERSATION WOULD HAVE SOLVED EVERYTHING!!

Its infuriating!

My brain has scattered and I dunno what else to say.. Translator did an amazing job, but this read is just depressing.. not even the ending is satisfying - I was cheering for bookshop owner second ML since he appeared... If I put myself in any of their shoes (ML or MC) I would be eaten up by doubts and distrust through the relationship with the other person - the extra just proves a... more>> part of it!

Another reviewer said it - second pregnancy was uncalled for.. according to MC’s own words, he would have gladly KILLED himself to give ML what MC thought he wanted. I just want to give them both therapy. <<less
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mariri 199x_
mariri 199x_ rated it
May 2, 2020
Status: Completed
I admit, this story may not suit everyone's tastes, but I love it. It had copious amounts of cliché, angst and miscommunication that will all be eventually solved. The translations were good too. Even though everything was predictable, you can still immerse yourself in this dogblood drama and have a good time.

MC is a doormat. ML is ordinary. ML's actions were fairly reasonable.
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