Who Touched My Tail!

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Xue Ling is a nine tailed fox who has been cultivating for thousands of years but lost all his tails in a moment of capriciousness.

Tails are easy to self destruct, but not easy to recover. In order to restore his human figure, he must struggle to destroy the plot, forcibly change the protagonist’s fate, and be the cannon fodder in the first line of attack.

But why are these plots more and more irrational? The setup is getting more and more weird, and what is with this person that is showing up in every single world?

It seems that before going through all these worlds, he has forgotten some very important affairs?

Su Xuanyan: Yes, you’ve forgotten me.

Xue Ling: Get lost! (▼皿▼#) Clearly every time you are the one that doesn’t remember anything!

Su Xuanyan: Oh, this is purely an accident.

Associated Names
One entry per line
谁动了我的尾巴!
Related Series
The Year of Rebirth (Prequel)
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Quickly Wear the Face of the Devil (27)
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Holding Onto My Man (8)
There Will Always Be Protagonists With Delusions of Starting a Harem (7)
Reborn As a System (7)
Heroic Death System (6)
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  5. 150+ chapters BL

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air1ine rated it
May 21, 2022
Status: --
7.8/10 but in here I'll put it in a 4/5

MC. = Basically Xue Ling, A Demon Fox, has lost all of it's 9 tails, and has to go to otherworlds to retrieve it. his journey includes a innocent and cute system, which involves it's golden finger, Not like our MC needs it since he's omnipotent enough. MC's personality is run on how foxes are depicted, Cunning, ruthless & a schemer, a two-faced character that I love since he doesn't only care for himself but also cares for the other people... more>> that exist when he is in the worldline they are in. His playful and spoiled character comes in only when ML is near, I love how he's loyal and only want him 😞.

(His name is a spoiler!) For ML, as far as I can go be "non-spoiler free" on his character, I'd say that his character is somehow infatuated with MC's little system. His personality is a mix of playful obsessing and overbearing ceo, you get me? but at the same time he gets MC and knows how to respect him and treat him as his equal while also! spoiling him since MC, , , is? kinda into it, , well, yep thats how he is, he's very in love with MC and won't hesitate to love him unconditionally, even when MC was hiding his ******, he accepted him fully, I love how MC also trusts him to safeguard all his secrets knowing that his threats are true, but ML always seems so unfazed by it. Well ML doesn't disobey MC anyways so can't even complain about it.

I'd have to put on footnotes for other people to read this first tho- okay so,

  1. Arc 1 - ancient times, fast paced, not really much going on you can skim it but its good to get to know how MC's personality works too, oh yeah and no romance, not even a 4-5 dialogue from ML.. tsk tsk
  2. Arc 2 - modern times, the best face slapping scenes, not much going on again, not even a hand holding scene
  3. Arc 3 - skip skip it all. its f*cking in*est and not good for the brain, worst arc no joke, relationship has progressed and has done snu snu but seriously worst arc. MC doesn't seem fazed but I do, throwing up again.
  4. Arc 4 - read chapter 40 but dont dwell on it too much, Mention of r*pe, just go to chapter 44 = face slapping is starting there, or you can directly skim through it, and then go to 48 or 49. its interstellar
  5. Arc 5 - ancient times, cross dress, and arranged marriage, the best one actually, love their progress in their relationship. you can clearly see how big their love for each other is
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thats foryou guys to figure out now, there's nothing serious/no trigger warnings forward so just enjoy the read ^^

also note that author's writing style starts as slow as their chapters match it, you can just let yourself familiarize with MC's name and personality ^^ the chapter count start in 1 digits then on to 11-17 chapters each arc when you start reading through more and more hehe, I especially like that part

little spoiler to make you understand the little plot behind MC's tails:

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“When you go to those worlds, your abilities will be suppressed. But, you don’t have to worry too much. After all, your man’s status is rich and powerful every time. He will be able to protect you, and nothing too bad will happen.”

“I see.” Xue Ling picked up the little fox by the scruff of its neck and pulled it away from the bed. “Speaking of which, it’s very curious. Why is it that the bodies I enter are all so strange, while he is always rich and powerful? Is his luck so good?”

“Er... ” The system doesn’t know what to say. Should it tell him that it was because the man was so powerful that even if his memories were sealed, they didn’t want him to wake up and endanger the world? That they did so in order to make sure his life was not too unfortunate so as to prevent accidentally stimulating him to destroy the world??

Because of his identity, every time he entered into a world, the will of the world would subconsciously choose a better body for him as part of its self-protection mechanism. In some worlds with two protagonists where the other protagonist had a larger impact on the world, he would sometimes also be arranged into the identity of a protagonist. This was also why he had been one of the protagonists in the first world.

“Forget it, you don’t look reliable at all. You probably wouldn’t answer even if I asked.”

System: “... ” Ha-ha.

The heroine had already met her end, so the remainder of this world was an easy vacation for Xue Ling. He had not forgotten that such a shameful thing as his inability to control his own tail, and so he settled down to cultivate for two years in order to consolidate and manipulate his internal strength within a certain range. Only, he would still need to recreate his own body in order to be able to use his power freely.

This was not an easy thing to do. The system also advised Xue Ling to slow down, telling him that it would find more tutorials for Xue Ling in the next world in order to help him recreate his body, so Xue Ling was not in a hurry.

Although he had the intention of rebuilding his body when he self-destructed back then, it was still an extremely difficult thing to do. He was a demon, and had only experienced a transformation, unlike ghosts, who could create their body through cultivation. It was a great challenge for Xue Ling to recreate his body by himself.

However, he was not panicked. After all, he had plenty of time, and he had already found two of his tails. He had originally been anxious to recover his tails because of his loss of strength, but now that he had a goal and a lover, Xue Ling was no longer as anxious to get things done.

Just like how Zhan Shaoxi had promised – as long as it was something Xue Ling wanted, he would do anything for him.

When Xue Ling turned eighteen, the General’s Manor held an adulthood ceremony for him. There were no guests, nor were the maids informed of what their mistress was up to. Zhan Shaoxi personally crowned Xue Ling and recorded it for him. That night, he moved into Xue Ling’s room, and officially spent the night together.

The poor General had been married to his wife for three years before he finally hit a home run.

The next year, Zhan Shaoxi resigned from his official post in court, obtained the Emperor’s permission, and took the Royal Princess to travel and explore the world. Only when it was New Years and they had to return to pay their respects would the courtiers see them. Later, they retreated and lived in seclusion in the mountain forests and never appeared again.

The love between the two people became legendary. Although the Royal Princess was never able to bear a child, General Zhan did not use this reason to marry any others. The Zhenguo General’s Manor bloodline has been lost since then, but Xi Country had become strong enough to no longer need the Zhan family.

After leaving the Capital, Xue Ling reverted back to wearing men’s clothing, and the two of them explored the martial arts world, attended the Wulin Assembly, walked through the Southern Regions, and travelled all over the world. Finally, they lived in seclusion on the near the Eastern Sea, and became the most common pair of husbands.

This life was so wonderful that when Xue Ling closed his eyes, he was still holding tightly to Zhan Shaoxi’s hand, refusing to let go and urging him to find him earlier in the next life.

After he had truly left the world, the blurred eyes of the old man that was holding his hand became clear again. Despite his aged face, the aura that emanated from him at this moment was nothing like an old man on the verge of death.

Su Xuanyan held tightly to the hand clasped in his, the joy in his heart unprecedented. Although it was not as though he did not know his name, it was a great breakthrough that Xue Ling had taken the initiative to share it with him.

Recalling the time when he had first met this person, Su Xuanyan’s eyes were full of amus**ent.

He was rarely in such great spirits. After he closed his eyes and left the world, he was still in an unprecedented good mood.

When he first entered the world, he had fallen into the Ten Directions World’s trick, and had not obtained the identity he wanted, leading to a period of misunderstandings between him and Xue Ling. Since he was in a good mood, he would settle this score with the Ten Directions World slowly.

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I've been so busy with studies recently but this is a good read to feel like punching other people's throats (in a good way) the face slapping, comedy and romance it has is fun to read, reccomend ♥︎ <<less
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LianeVert
LianeVert rated it
January 15, 2021
Status: Completed
So I'll start my review by saying that I gave this story 5 stars for the sole reason that it gets wayy more hate than it truly deserves. Don't get me wrong this is not a masterpiece, but it's also not as bad as some reviews make it out to be.

MC is unfeeling and ruthless, he tells us this himself, he is also a demon fox and it is in his nature, also I don't really see what is so wrong with the way he treats ML?? He plays hard... more>> to get but its because he likes the feeling of falling for his lover over and over again, besides, MC ALWAYS becomes softhearted when it comes to ML, to the point even the system knows that the "you run I chase" never lasts long. Another thing I had to comment is the sheer amount of comparisons this has with QWTFOD, that novel is SUPER famous, and I'm pretty sure it's normal for authors to get inspired by each other and moreso by trends, books written at around the same time have the same trends (I don't know if WTMT and QWTFOD were, but it was just an example).

So, defenitly give this novel a try, it has some really interesting world arcs that I remember even after reading it because I found them pretty memorable, it follows the typical worldsettings but some of the characters the MC transmigrates to have very interesting backstories.

Spoiler

for example the one where MC transmigrates to a crossdressing bride, it was my favorite arc (until now) from this novel

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dee_ism
dee_ism rated it
October 21, 2020
Status: --
I don't have any problem regarding MC personality, he's sassy.

The downside of the story are:
1. Since it's a QT, it's getting repetitive so fast
2. Awesome world building, then lack luster ending on each arc (arc 1 and 10 are still my fave)
3. Face slapping element not that satisfying
4. ML just being there, as a golden thigh who pamper the MC and finish MC tasks, and a dog food material
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QCY
QCY rated it
November 11, 2019
Status: Completed
Honestly, I really don't know why there are so many low reviews. People keep on making comparisons to QWTFOTD, and saying that this is like the worse version and that this story is mediocre at best. Personally, I feel like the dynamics between the MC and ML was more believable, because it took 2 (or 3?) arcs for the MC to actually accept the ML, which is more believable when the MC is actually a demonic fox that has lived for a long time and needs to adjust to loving... more>> someone in what he considers a temporary lifetime.

Well, I'm not here to flame those reviews, but I really believe that this story deserves some more attention and better ratings. QWTFOTD is its own story, and WTMT is another story. To whoever picks this story up, read it for some time before making your judgement.

Yeah, I'm not really going to review on this book, because I suck at that and I think you'd be better informed in reading other reviews.

(Just here to rant about those reviews complaining about WTMT) <<less
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BillionJellyfish
BillionJellyfish rated it
July 3, 2019
Status: Completed
Average: not bad, just not the best

This is cute and all, but nothing special. There are a lot of infodumps or unnecessary details. I wish the author focused more on the MC and ML's relationship growth and romantic moments, but oh whelp. I struggled a lil bit to finish the novel because I gradually lost interest and each arc was relatively predictable, but I still managed to finish it to the end, so hurray!

I recommend this if ya looking to pass the time, but just don't expect a super engaging... more>> storyline. <<less
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ylial
ylial rated it
May 5, 2019
Status: c159
This novel is a slow romance ? that focuses on MC and ML's love development instead of the story arcs, so some may find the story lacking. I also find the story lacking but it's very enjoyable to read.

A great story... so far XD A fox MC and a repressed ML that has a housekeeper syndrome. ?? (you'll understand this as u read)

I wish there's an ML like him in RL ?
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Starshine00K
Starshine00K rated it
April 18, 2019
Status: c137
This story is very good in my opinion. I have been reading this since January when I saw it. I would recommend this to my friends who like bl stories but sadly I don't have any. I would open my phone in the morning before school starts and read this story. Thank you for translating this.
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cookieconquerer
cookieconquerer rated it
April 17, 2019
Status: c137
It makes me laugh and is super cute.

10/10 fluff. If you're not looking for anything serious but want to good mindless time this is the shite. All the benefits of yaoi, with the fluffiness of shounen ai LOL
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NA2Z
NA2Z rated it
February 1, 2019
Status: c60
Amazing! ❤️

This story takes it slow and natural for someone who has lived thousand of years. MC was careful to fall in love at first and ML also has its own hilarious personality problem...?

Then the story keeps getting better and interesting. The other mob characters also not all cliché protagonist and it's other half/halves...

All in all, it's a very good read and recommended for someone who also loves QWTFOD and other similar world hopping novels.???

Enjoy!
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maijys
maijys rated it
August 18, 2022
Status: Completed
I've read a lot of QT novels and there's definitely some excellent ones out there, some average ones, and some very bad ones. This novel is an average one.

There's not much character development for the MC or ML, but that's not really something that bothers me if the arcs themselves are entertaining. In the case of this novel, there are 14 total arcs, but a lot of the storylines are pretty repetitive. The main focus of all the arcs that get the most detail are the actual interactions between the... more>> MC and the ML only, with all other characters having just a handful of lines and their actions just being summarized, even the antagonists of each arc.

One exception is the very last arc, but this is not a positive thing. In that last arc, the author goes into unusual detail with side characters in a way that never happened in previous arcs, giving them lots of screen time. It turns out that it's because these side characters are the characters from another one of the author's novels, but for someone who has never read that other novel, it seemed like a giant waste of time. It makes the last arc very boring with lots of "filler", which is a shame because it's supposed to be the resolution of the overarching plot as well. <<less
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luhyung
luhyung
May 14, 2022
Status: c45
I don’t know why but I have dropped a lot of Chrysanthemum Garden’s translations. It is very high quality work and there’s nothing really for me to pick on. The translations somehow seem... long winded? It’s quite trying on my patience to get to the end of each chapter. Either ways, the writing style might be it for others but it’s not for me
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Rain in the sunny morning
Rain in the sunny morning rated it
November 22, 2021
Status: Completed
warning; contains spoilers that I couldn't be bother to be put in a separate section.

The novel itself was pretty good in my opinion. The translator and editors were great and the translations were very smooth and neat!

like other novels there were definitely somethings lacking such as how fast the pacing were and how I thought that there wasn't much depth in Xue Ling and Su XuanYan's relationship. This couple of course love each other but I don't really see how their love developed, I couldn't see the process of them... more>> falling in love in each world (of course Su XuanYan had some of his feelings from the previous world) even in the last world where it's like a start over. In the last arc I didn't understand how they fell exactly in love when there's not much feelings being developed. Not that there wasn't. You could see their feelings being resurfaced and starting to fall back in love but compared to other novels it had very pitifully few moments where we really get to see the long process. (T_T) I myself is not a huge fan of slow burn and prefer to have the main love interest be together around 1/3 of the novel so I wasn't to bothered that the relationship was quite fast.

side characters personally were pretty good and wasn't as 2d Mu Xi was definitely one of my favs! (//∇//) Yes, not every side character is a villain and just plain s*upid at most parts.

There were quite a nice range of different genres so I can guarantee that there'll be a arc that'll catch your eye atleast. There were Modern, ancient, interstellar, A/B/O, virtual reality (?) , apocalypse, mermaid, cultivation, ger, beast men and sub beast men and western (This list is not in order) ( ̄∇ ̄)

As I said before XIIN is an extremely good translator along with the editors and everything goes smoothly so you don't have to worry about not being able to keep up. d (^_^o)

the arcs are short because they had to fit in 14 arcs in 206 chapters which is an average of 14 chapters an arc. This got me quite interested as I didn't like arcs that dragged on for to long but the downside is that it had a lot of time skip linking to the relationship development to be not shone and directly skipped. The most memorable QT novels would be 'I really am a slag shou' and 'quickly wear the face of a devil' which are both great. IRAASS has about the average of 30 chapters per arc from what I last remember which is about double the amount of WTMT's arcs. As I can imagine QWFOD's arc are also longer.
I do not like people comparing novels with others so I will not, read them both they're both good.♪ (´▽`)

My first impression of reading this novel after the first arc was: The face slapping were alright.. a few, repressed man, 'so they didn't fall in love?', 'XL died?! Wuwuwuwu' and 'that was fast'

One of the things that stood out immediately for me were that the main cp didn't fall in love in the first life but rather the third and that was a good decision because the arcs were short and it would make it seem like the relationship was particularly rushed. Love is developed over time and even though love at first sight is great, you have to get to know a person better first before you start dating them,

Another thing that makes this stand out is that there's a reason for the MC to transmigrate into all these worlds and that part was handled extremely well overall. There was also a reason for SXY to follow XL over these worlds and I thought it was super cute! SXY would watch XL after each world knowing that they'll be together again.
XL loves to hang ML about to dry (*´ー`*)

The fact about MC going to collect his tail not in every single arc was just something I noticed and appreciated a lot.
At first MC seemed like another innocent bun but the more I read the more I realized that was not the case.

I thought that it was important to mention that arc 4 was my favorite honestly there were so much twists in there and I loved it so much! Everything about the prophecy, first emperor, The empress... it was just legendary and I will forever remember it. ╰ (*´︶`*) ╯♡

overall this is a great read and after reading you won't regret it, just that this is more of a relaxed novel and can be read in your spare time.

On another note, before I read this novel I wanted to see if it was worth it so I read some reviews.

Whoever said Xue Ling lost his tails when he went buying soy sauce come out and meet me. 😃 <<less
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petalfy
petalfy rated it
July 9, 2021
Status: Completed
One of my favorite QT novels. Though I’ll admit, some arcs were forgettable, while others are extremely entertaining. It just depends on personal preferences, but you’ll for sure find a trope that you like, considering the ample amount of arcs.
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Yumeru
Yumeru rated it
April 30, 2021
Status: Completed
A good world hopping Novel & some lil info from the arcs: ... more>>
Spoiler

1st arc Ancient, scholar/general sad;_;
2nd world : Musician/business
Well our couple still feeling each other out, not openly expressing their thoughts like from the story:
"But Xue Ling (MC) was a true tsundere, following the spirit of ‘If you don’t say it, I won’t ask about it; if you want to pretend, I’ll pretend with you~’ he also stubbornly acted ignorant.
With these two, for them to talk it out and get together would really take a miracle."

3. Actor/Businessman
Well there are some things that makes the ML repressed his feelings here although MC is ready to try if ever ML talked about it
MC saying some line like thisXD:
Xue Ling pouted. “Yes, they are all damned repressed men. Damn it. Other people attract overbearing presidents, but all I get are dull and sulky men who don’t say anything even when they’re about to die. It’s not like they would really die if they said ‘I like you’!!”

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Remember guys our MC is a fox, living thousand years and this is just a novel. According to MC:
"If it were him, he would make sure that the other party became impotent for life, and die without his body intact. (For scumbags) "
Oh, his world views were too abnormal to be applied to modern society. (He admitted it himself haha& he considerd the body he transmigrated to as his own although he will finish his missions he will do it with his own will&decisions)

There was also something to ML that only when his Body per world meet MC he will fall in love with him- his soul being attracted to MC.

ML soul saying to the system:
ML for the sake of the future ‘him’ that would have lost his memories, he paused and added, “But the positive feelings from every world will accumulate, and in the end, he will love him more and more, to the point where he will become deeply enamoured even with a single glance.”

More arcs:
Spoiler

4th ABO/zerg
MC looking forward meeting ML to the following worlds:
The most powerful person in the world was this body’s ‘husband’. Xue Ling resolutely crossed him out from the list. If that man really transmigrated into the body of that scum, he would rather stab him to death and then commit su*cide. They could start over again in another world.[ HAHAHAHA]

5th Ancient world/general
MC teasing again our ML hahaha and Yes for ML whose willing to wait for MC. Our MC more open this time saying his real name to ML.

6th Game/Data
Though I like game arcs this one is a bit boring for Me. But I do like that MC kinda have his real body this arc and ML can also use his real identity.

7th Merman/General
Wahhh another twist for Merman theme. I do read other novels with this kind of arc. Time for our ML to woo/coax our MC~ Love this arc because MC's Fam UwU many side couple

8th Zombie arc teehee

9th Ancient Disciple /master
ML struggled for hundred yrs repressing his feelings for MC. MC's happy teasing ML haha finally got his black room plot play
10th prof/Student modern
Chill arc hahhaa MC bullying ML, still doting ML~

11th emperor /ancient
12th Beastmen/god
13th beastmen/nurturers

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14th arc present/modern /hightech world= MC is an artist here

Hey I like it how our couple became aware of each other in the first world and continuously strengthened their love as they world hop. MC has his own bottom line so as well ML (he will never hurt MC-there was no cringey arc on this Novel). ML always forgets their past memories &it's kinda good at the last arc MC d one who forgot it longer. Worth to read!! <<less
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Sisithatlikestoread
Sisithatlikestoread rated it
January 7, 2021
Status: Completed
Yea this story might be cliche with OP protagonist and ML but so what? That doesn't make it bad. It's true it might have some shortcomings but it's not so bad it's not worth reading!

I for one didn't find it boring and rushed. I liked the MC's shamelessness and OPness. I liked the worlds veryvery much and also MC's and ML's love!!

I don't understand people who give a terribly low rating for something that's not even THAT bad. It's true it might not be your cup of tea but it... more>> can't possibly be a 1 or a 2. 3 is fine since you personally might not like it.

Perhaps I'm just way too petty and salty for some people I saw that are way too harsh and critical of novels. If it's not absolutely perfect it's a 4 or a 3. It annoys me so much since not all people like a 'perfect, realistic and logical' novel, and finding one anyways is rare. I literally saw people say that "everything is amazing except the plot a *little tiny* bit, but the novel doesn't focus on the plot in the first place but more on doting and the protagonists love". And then they gave a 4/5. A FOUR- Are you kidding me? Where is the problem? Genres and plots and characters are different so obviously things aren't going to be perfectly the way you want it. Different novels focus on differnet things, AGAIN, obviously they would be a bit lacking in some other areas. You may think something's perfect but others may not think so. I'm saying this because when I see low reviews on a novel I feel disheartened to try reading it (and mostly after I read them I actually enjoy them a lot). I know it might be a problem with me watching people's opinions so much but come on man. I'm 100% not the only one. Y'all too harsh. That's why I review the novels I find really good and give them 5 stars no less. Like just give a 5 for a novel you like and a 1 for a novel that's horrible and you hate. It's that easy and NOT COMPLICATED. You can't compare novels that have different genres and plot and stuff.

Oof sorry for the rant >_<'' <<less
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Alexania
Alexania rated it
December 3, 2020
Status: c211
I got a bit bored / put off? (I can't even remember) in the beginning but it actually got better after I picked it back up.

MC stays competent and even though he has extreme "spoiled shou" moments, he doesn't permanently devolve into that state and brings the bad ass back.

The ending was decently satisfying, sweet and ends were tied up pretty well.

... more>> I laughed out loud quite a few times, especially at the interactions between the system and MC.

I also really enjoyed the author's writing style and the translation is fantastic.

If you enjoy this genre I definitely recommend this one. <<less
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monstertrucks
monstertrucks rated it
October 30, 2020
Status: Completed
I haven't read many QT novels, so I'm not going to compare this webnovels with other similar ones. This webnovel focuses mainly on the romance/dynamics between the MC and ML. The worlds are merely backdrops. The protagonists never face any real hardships and difficulties; you read this novel because you want to squee because of the interactions between MC/ML (nothing wrong with that if that's what you like).

I think my main gripe is that some arcs are extremely rushed. You can argue what reasons the author may have had doing... more>> that (my guess is that they were bored of that particular world, or was too excited to start the next one), but it is UNDENIABLE that some arcs were rushed. In some arcs, the world was suddenly resolved from 3rd person within 3-4 paragraphs. It was really bizarre and frankly disjointing. At times I was really disappointed because I actually liked that arc's background story and there wasn't a payoff. Some of the arcs were plain boring, and even those were rushed at the end.
Spoiler

Oh my god, the CULTIVATION ARC

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Like, you know the arc is garbage when the ending is finished "off-screen". The overall plot was nothing to commend, but also could have been worse.

The romance itself is fine. Both MC and ML kind of have 1 dimensional personalities, but I still enjoyed reading about their interactions because I like sappy stuff. To me, a five star novel is perfect or near perfect. With all the rushed arcs, I cannot believe the number of people who have given this 5/5. That's supposed to be a 100% you know? I'd give this novel a 3.5, but I have rounded down. Mediocre at best. (The translation is really excellent though. Thank you to the translator and editors that worked on this!) <<less
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MehrM
MehrM rated it
October 8, 2020
Status: --
This one was really good... each arc felt new... not about the same as other QT

However just like other QT it felt too fast... especially the beginning

The MC well I don't know why they call him tsundere even he thinks so... but I don't think he is at all... if I had to say he is rather the spoil brat than tsundere type... well not that annoying but it does piss me off most of the time when he's with the ML... the ML is too indulgent towards him to... more>> the point where if the ML acts indifferent to the MC while not remembering a thing the MC will sorta throw a fit... like if I'm not good so wont him... I have scene indulging the ML or spoiling him... instead he plays him.... you know relationship is equal... but here its unbalanced with the ML always giving but the MC reluctantly giving

The MC is particularly intelligent though... he does his task well... most of the time without relying on the ML... unlike many other MC...

Though his spoil character he not unlikable just sometimes annoying to me.... it might not be so for others though

SPOILER....

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in*est arc 3

Those who are uncomfortable may skip

However the MC felt that even though the bodies were brothers... there soul weren't hence he didn't take it as in*est... therefore others might interpret it the same way

Ps I don't mind in*est as long it doesn't include me ^^' <<less
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Melange
Melange rated it
April 23, 2020
Status: Completed
If you're looking for something similar to QWTFOD, you may like this novel. Unfortunately, like many users have mentioned, the novel has its shortcomings.

The author spends a lot of time building up and introducing the arcs, but once the MC and ML get together in each world, it becomes a race to the end of the world. Hardly any of the arcs have any semblance of denouement. Most of the time you'll get some vague explanation of how everyone lived happily and MC and ML magically disappeared from the world.

I... more>> don't think MC is necessarily bad, and he definitely loves ML, but he's capricious and infinitesimally petty. If you don't like this kind of MC then you most likely won't enjoy the novel. In spite of these shortcomings, I still found it an enjoyable read. Each world has a different setting without overlapping, and some of them are pretty unique (although there was a lot of confusion in the beginning of many arcs). Be aware that you need to read the translator's notes for the final arc or you'll be confused.

Spoiler

This is because the novel is the 4th and last novel of a series, and the characters that appear in the last world are reoccurring characters from the previous novels. The novels are the following:

1. 重生之执笔流年 - Su Liunian x Su Xuanqing
2. 总裁,算命吗?- Yuan Chuanbai x Baili Shaojue
3. 宿主君情商低怎么破 - Ji Zichen x Shen Chongwen

The resolution is kinda weird and doesn't make a whole ton of sense but whatever, happy ending I guess.

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Xian-laoshi
Xian-laoshi rated it
March 26, 2020
Status: c58
Honestly, I somehow like the attitude of the MC— smart, carefree, domeering, and decisive. He knows what he wants, although he's helplessly stubborn.

Here's a heads-on on what's to expect to the ML:

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I love it how the ML, despite losing his memories every new world, still recognizes his "accumulating" feelings for the MC and how he dotes on him. I totally agree with MC that no matter how indifferent you are, it is impossible to remain so after being doted and spoiled on for two lifetimes.

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What really piqued my interest is the first arc. I love how it ended. I love how it ended tragically

2nd and 3rd arcs aren't that great, but they're fine.

Now, the fourth arc, which is about interstellar space and ABO (Alpha, Beta, Omega), is really interesting— personally speaking. For me, the MC's and ML's overbearing power were emphasized in here. And I like it when the omega MC unexpectedly underwent heat. It really got me worried that the scum protagonist would mark him. Good thing, ML went to the rescue. Hahaha!

Well...

There are a lot of good points of this novel. However, they're just like that. Good. Not better, not best. Just... Good. Nothing particularly stands out.

For me, it's just the MC's foxy personality that's interesting.

Additionally, world-hopping stories like this one really gets boring somehow. Repetitive events won't kept you going. So, I was stopping at the 5th arc.

Both MC and ML are overpowered so basically, they could practically do anything together. Therefore, character development could not be observed in here. Just the budding romance. <<less
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