I Have a “System” Halo

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The system: We must take the plot seriously!

Mo Fan: Ok.

The system: We cannot be OOC!

Mo Fan: Yes.

The system: We have to be cold. We must be ruthless. We cannot lose ourselves in this imaginary world.

Mo Fan: …no problem.

Not long after…

Mo Fan: System, can we talk? Hold my gong and take him away.

System: ……

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我有一枚“系统”光环[快穿]
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Date Group Release
07/13/21 Otaku translation c4 part21
06/06/21 Otaku translation c4 part20
05/31/21 Otaku translation c4 part19
05/25/21 Otaku translation c4 part18
04/01/21 Otaku translation c4 part17
03/26/21 Otaku translation c4 part16
03/20/21 Otaku translation c4 part15
03/13/21 Otaku translation c4 part14
03/06/21 Otaku translation c4 part13
03/03/21 Otaku translation c4 part12
02/27/21 Otaku translation c4 part11
02/27/21 Otaku translation c4 part10
02/27/21 Otaku translation c4 part9
02/25/21 Otaku translation c4 part8
02/25/21 Otaku translation c4 part7
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VictorT
VictorT rated it
December 11, 2019
Status: Completed
Great QT novel, I like how balanced author writing style is, the balance between plot and romance between ML and MC, unlike some other novels that as soon as ML and MC get together the arc will end with a hurried ending. No immediately falling in love either.

MC is the indifferent and calculating type and at first 4 worlds he may look heartless and cold:

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Because he doesn't care about ML feelings and leaves the world as soon as possible after getting done with his mission but from 5th world he starts to learn about loving ML and will stay with him until the original body life span allows

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And ML, He is the possessive type but not too extreme and yandere like. More like big dog type lol.

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I like how he has different personalities in every world, like the shameless cheerful personality in the summoner arc or the fool and simple personality. He isn't always the cold CEO kind of personality in every arc and that is refreshing

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This novel is really well written. Fortunately MC didn't turn into a dumb, obedient 0 IQ when ML appears or just sit and watch as ML do his mission for him, although he gets some help from ML on the side he mainly completes his missions himself.

System role in this novel is not too apparent, It doesn't have a store or points or anything else and MC completes his missions with his own strength and cleverness, in other words even independent from his system.

And be assured, no other arc in this book ends so sudden like the first arc, I think the arc suddenly ended because:
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MC was done with the mission, he didn't want to waste his time in the world anymore and when he asked his system about what happens to the original body after leaving, he was more assured to leave, and it was mentioned that in the original plot the protagonist aka the big brother had a car accident after saving the original body, and the world revised I think. So I think MC didn't Notice the timeline and When the car accident happened in order to leave the world and not let protagonist die/world don't collapse MC died instead of him

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Overall no super complicated plot and great for casual reading. Totally recommended. <<less
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rhianirory
rhianirory rated it
April 15, 2019
Status: c10
so far it's fairly good though the ending to the first arc was a bit abrupt and a little confusing and sudden.
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i was pretty sure he was going to die anyways since that happens a lot in quick wear once they finish the scenario but there was no build up to the end. One moment he's talking to the system and next thing we know bam, he suddenly pushes the ML out of the way of a vehicle and dies. No idea where they were at the time or what they were doing or even if they were walking down the street. It did have the unintentional effect of making me laugh at what should have been an emotionally moving scene in the story

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this is a fairly long novel for BL, (including the extras it's 307 chapters according to jjwxc), so hopefully the author gets better at the endings for each world; even some of the mediocre ones don't jerk you sideways out of nowhere like this did in the first world. I guess we will see. It's interesting enough that i'll keep reading at any rate.
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JadeCerise
JadeCerise rated it
August 11, 2020
Status: v2c4
The first arc is pretty good. However, there's a severe decline in the quality of translation for the 2nd arc. Might as well read the MTL, I guess.
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kari
kari rated it
November 22, 2020
Status: v3
Umm.. It's passable

Nothing particularly good or bad abt it. Our MC is quite the cold one so far. He treats it as a mission instead of a chance at life, so it is believable that he won't just fall in love n want to extend his stay

But it does make me question his humanity a bit.

Also, 2nd arc wasnt great & Idk if the TL made it worse or better
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ike_00000
ike_00000 rated it
September 4, 2020
Status: v2
Honestly very eh. Maybe it's because there aren't that many arcs out yet so the MC doesn't have a chance to fully show their personality, but so far I'm not a huge fan. He just seems very indifferent, but also not like the playful indifferent that would also be more interesting. As far as BL QT goes, this doesn't meet the bar for me.

Edit: I realize his indifference in the first arc is still okay, because coupled w the spoiling halo it ki~nda can make sense possibly why the ML... more>> was attracted? lol. but in the second arc idk it makes no sense to me that ML fell for him...

MC left so coldly & abruptly I wish there were an epilogue <<less
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CuiFen
CuiFen rated it
April 23, 2019
Status: c10
i think the first arc is quite good? I mean, even though the ending of the first arc is quite rushed and confusing...

the system and MC are also likable, I just hope that the MC would be more expressive to the ML

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I'm rlly confused when the scene of MC pushing the ML appeared, coz u know like just 5 secs ago he's talking to the system and the next sec, he suddenly pushed the ML and them baam he died

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well I'm looking forward to the next arc
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ylial
ylial rated it
May 19, 2019
Status: c15
World hopping story where MC should not act OC. Not much info yet will add review when Im done midway

Dunno why the author made the Arc 1 the shortest arc. Usually, it should be the best arc. Hopefully the succeeding arcs are good. And some may find the arc1 ending disappointing and I'm one of them
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The system and MC knew when the MC will die so yea.. It quickly ended. Kinda anticlimatic

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Will rerate after I finish
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jasmin1028
jasmin1028
March 14, 2021
Status: c4
I'm not rating it rn cause I obviously haven't read it enough to give ratings but I'll just say that some things in this novel till now bother me and makes the reading experience less fun.

So in arc 1 the MC is well behaved spoilt delicate looking young master. I don't have any problem with that but in chapter 4 some passerby girls said, "His skin was also very white and tender ah. He's probably soft and easy to push down." This happened when a random male classmate (good looking)... more>> was talking with our MC, , now how is it okay to say that to anyone regardless of their gender and looks??? Honestly if this was a M/F Wattpad book everyone would be so mad in the comment section. *rightfully so* Anyway later ML did something so that that random good looking classmate *with whom MC hardly spoke 2 words* wouldn't appear in front of MC again. honestly this also the case with many other shounen ai / yaoi novels and I absolutely hate it.

Anyway this ^ is not the only part which bothered me but I'm lazy to add everything so that's it I guess. I can't English so sorry if there are any mistakes... <<less
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Kobochan
Kobochan rated it
November 20, 2022
Status: c1
Though it's a normal QT novel, but they're not that focusing on mission or giving the MC a punishment just like another QT.

But so far the plot is really sweet and touch, ML will always follows MC in wolrd after world with their sign of love, it a bite mark that MC leaves in ML's right shoulder.

I recommend you to camp here, really. Lovely beauty Shou that always get spoiled x possessive Gong that alway going crazy over Shou
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dead water
dead water rated it
June 29, 2022
Status: c260
I really enjoyed reading this novel even though it gets repetitive with few of the arcs, .e.g, esport or gaming world. The game that gets mentioned is League of Legends (LOL) because that's the only game the author knows. There's another arc with similar game mechanics as LOL further in the arcs, I can just say that ML and MC is both op.

Another one that gets repetitive is: either ML becomes the older one or the MC becomes a child, ML becomes a child or MC becomes an adult.

The system... more>> for the first time is very likable, which I have never seen any systems do because I always find them annoying.

Spoiler

This is rather cliché but MC and ML is a match made in heaven with 99.99% match

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A spoiler that I got by purposely going at the end of the chapter is

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at the end of the novel it seems that they're both going to continue world hopping since system says

"Xiao Wu, do you want to go back to your favorite world?"

Wu Wu whispered, "Which world?"

"The world of your first amnesia."

"Do you want to go back?"

Pei Feng said gently, "This is the world where Xiaowu likes me, which is my new born world. I hope to be there with Xiaowu and grow old.

"Okay. When do you want to go back?"

"How about adulthood?"

Despite guessing the man's purpose, Wu Wu nodded indulgently, "OK."

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it's kind of sad that some arcs has tragedy on it like:

"I have a "pampered" halo"
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this is the first world, basically MC, dies by saving the ML by pushing him when the car comes at their way, so the MC pushes off the ML so he doesn't die. MC doesn't love him on this world. MC has no feelings for the ML other than a new toy that he could use for his boredom.

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"I have a "shallot" halo"
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MC and ML gets found out by their parents while they were kissing and are both forced to separate from each other. MC is like force to go abroad. But when he's in the plane after saying his goodbye, the plane crashes due to the plot

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"I have a "fragrant" halo"
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MC dies. Well, he doesn't die. He dies by sacrificing himself for ML, but ML later follows him, so it's a happy ending. I guess.

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ML has some tendencies

Spoiler

Tbh I thought ML in "I have a "harmony" halo" arc was a masochist, he was even aware going "i checked psychology books and stuff I'm not a masochist" but is willing to take mc's abuse? But then again ML is too dumbstruck in love

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I truly believe that the author really likes writing about games which is called esports. The author must really enjoy writing it because every time I thought it was finally over — it just so happened to be another one.

Lol I just don't understand how a gaming world went from yaaaa games!!! To la la la singing. <<less
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Fisukisuki
Fisukisuki rated it
November 30, 2021
Status: c4 part21
Would be a lie if I don't understand why this has a low rating. Especially because the 4th arc would make a lot of people feeling Uncomfortable, though the ending of it is really Nice and give us full of hope for the next arc. I just wish someone would Continue translate this Novel.

Our MC is COLD. Indifference. Can easily act lazy because most his Missions was just act Cold and Indifference when needed. He doesn't need scheming or anything because his power came from finishing the Mission. He could... more>> deviate when he know he allowed within limit and useful for his situation.

He was Very Cold in a way he only have slight fondness toward ML even after 2 arc and didn't have problem leaving them when the mission was over. Though he finally feel and let himself feel a little bit more in the 3rd arc because the World let him stay longer. He makes decision and he was hopping.

On the 4th arc, this has HEAVY Theme.
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Child Abuse where MC from being Loving father toward ML since ML was 3yo, to Drunk hurt him when ML was 8+ because the Mission, and then Abuse him 'for real' as much as he can (because MC wasn't always live with ML when he 'find out' ML wasn't his real son)...

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... but ML ALWAYS LOVE MC! After that, time skipped, no more Heavy theme, MC get revelation, things getting Sweeter and then the Ending giving us Hopefulness for the Next Arc!

So I really pray someone continue this Novel!!! 🙏🙏🙏 <<less
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Mogboella
Mogboella rated it
July 18, 2021
Status: c96
I’m in love. I’ve been looking for good QT novels for a while and this one just gives me the feels. My favorite so far is the high-school arc. I cried so hard, at the end the song that I was playing was To Build a Home by the Cinematic Orchestra and they went together so well that I was bawling. Recommended to start playing sing at Chapter 95.

Anyway. 5 stars, great read, MTL is readable
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1Sami
1Sami rated it
October 15, 2020
Status: c3.3
The ML almost always falls for the MC immediately but the MC doesn´t fall for him so it balances out. As soon as the mission is finished the MC leaves the world which I think is nice compared to most other QT novels. The arcs are a good length. The first one was really good but I think that the second could be improved on a bit. The author even specifically said that it wasn´t a gaming arc but it pretty much was which was a disappointment. I don´t mind... more>> the gaming theme but I was looking forward to something more and I was let down. <<less
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Xiu_er
Xiu_er rated it
August 31, 2022
Status: Completed
Rating: 3.4/5

This is a novel where you could see the author improve as you read along. World building was basically nonexistent and time was also a vague concept as the author liked to pass over to them boring events. So time skips were employed pretty often. You also found the characters being in different places and at a different time from one paragraph to another without any warning. On top of that this novel had a lot of plotholes/inconsistencies. So it was pretty confusing to read at times, especially when... more>> mtling.

The world building did improve a bit as the novel progressed. But the other weaknesses stayed in one way or another.

As for the main CP, I feel a bit conflicted about them, not as a couple but rather as individuals. The MC's personality kept changing which you could contribute to the different halos in each world. But his base personality was also fluctuating quite a bit. Whether he is a cold sociopath who is distant and detached from everything but the ML or a clingy and sticky pampered little wife the contrast is so stark you will think he might have a split-personality disorder. At least his laziness is consistent as it was developed through the constant pampering and doting from the ML who basically does all the work for the MC.

This is also something that bothers me a bit. Being spoiled is one thing, but leaving all your work to another person while you laze around and bask in luxury gives me flashbacks to the times I had to do all the work in group projects while my teammates got all the credit/better grades because they are better at presenting. As you can see I still hold grudges over that so I don't particularly like how lazy the MC and how much of an enabler the ML is.

I still gave 3.4 stars because a couple of the later arcs were a bit more interesting and not as generic even if they employed a few common tropes. <<less
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08YeNna
08YeNna
August 17, 2021
Status: c214
I'm reading MTL and I don't know arc I am right now, but anyway I'm kinda bored and it's very tiring to read the MTL so maybe I'll continue reading this when there is translated chapter available. The arcs are okay and every end of the arc I read so far have a satisfying ending, at least for me. However, the progress of plot in every arc bores me a bit.
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