Warlock of the Magus World


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Leylin is transported from an advanced technological era into a medieval world— except there’s magic. Equipped with only his quick wits and an A.I. chip fused to his soul, he sets out to become the most powerful magus the world has ever known. In a land divided into the Light and Dark Magi, the weak can either be cattle or disposable slaves. Only the strong can determine their lives, and only they have the luxury for virtue. Yet strength is only a tool for Leylin, like any other. His goal, in the end, is his own.

Translator’s desc:
What happens when a scientist from a futuristic world reincarnates in a World of Magic and Knights?

An awesome MC — that’s what happens!

A scientist’s goal is to explore the secrets of the universe, and this is exactly what Leylin sets out to do when he is reincarnated. Dark, cold and calculating, he makes use of all his resources as he sets off on his adventures to meet his goal.

Face? Who needs that… Hmmm… that guy seems too powerful for me to take on now… I better keep a low profile for now.

You want me to help you? Sure… but what benefit can I get out of it? Nothing? Bye.

Hmmm… that guy looks like he might cause me problems in the future. Should I let him off for now and let him grow into someone that can threaten me….. Nahhh. *kill*

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New Keisotsuna
July 15, 2017
Status: --
Well, I guess this is a decent read. Though I have to say it was boring in the early parts. And the MC was a little disappointing.

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I mean, his supposed to be a scientist or researcher, right? So I was expecting that he will be really smart and handle magic well because of his wits, but he's relying to much in his A.I. CHIP.

It was too the point that the A.I. CHIP felt more like the protagonist, doing everything.


I'm not saying this story's bad, I'm just dissatisfied with how the story developed. But there are good points as well.

For instance, the MC. He's realistic, he knows his limits and he doesn't seek fame, and I admire that he isn't the usual reckless, overbearing protagonists, but he is very careful with his choices.

Just that, he depends too much on his A.I. CHIP.

As for the plot, it's not very 'stimulating' and I don't think all those technical words and information is very necessary. Its like they just exist to fill uo the chapters, and that's boring me.

I'll be dropping this, for now. But with personality, I'd probably check this back again. Someday. <<less
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New mechafanboy
July 15, 2017
Status: c83
Not gonna plop down a rating as of yet since I'm planning on throwing this onto the backburner.

There's a LOT of clamor around how the MC is hard and logical in the description and sure I can safely say most of his actions reflect this except due to how the novel is structured, there's always been only one real plausible path, meaning there's no pros or cons to weight, it's a linear road because no other way would get you to the same results as what the mc does. That... more>> takes a lot of the logic and troubleshooting away from the novel and what's left feels hollow and dull in comparison.


Take the latest "development" in the story for example, we're told that no other ways exist to become a magus except signing a contract and/or getting access to materials which are controlled by mages, with no actual consideration whatsoever such as the average life span of a magus, what restrictions are placed on him etc, Leylin immediately decides to decline a contract. I don't necessarily disagree with the decision, but I wanted to hear a more reasonable line of logic than "I value freedom" especially from someone who covets power and decided to go back to the academy after being 90% sure he wouldn't be killed.


The xianxia powercurve aspect seems to be even more annoying in this one since we're not given a clear power structure of anything at all, all we've known for most of the chapters is that power goes

Normal people -> Knight/Acolyte 1 -> Acolyte 2 -> Grand Knight/Acolyte 3 -> Magus

then apparently they added ranks to Magus around late 7x. ... I'm now waiting for Grandmagus who will get even more adoration from the world, despite the fact that even lower level mages are supposed some of the toppest peoples around. ... Excuse the stupidity of that term because not having a clear power level/ranking makes it difficult to understand the world being built up in general. ... Although that's ALSO in question given that the world is never fully mentioned, how wide is it? how many continents are there? Do magi exist in greater numbers elsewhere? NONE of this has been mentioned and has to be inferred from Leylin's travels thus far.

I'm leaning towards not interested moreso than interested. I'll push through and read more at a later date, but tentatively, i'm not sold on the premise. <<less
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Astaroth rated it
April 26, 2016
Status: --
I can’t believe people are rating this based on how often sentences end with exclamation marks. Is that really supposed to be a valid complaint? “too many exclamation marks, 1/5, shit novel”

Everything with this novel is great, the Author obviously used his head and made serious effort to make these characters and how they act.

Yes, Leylin is a cold-hearted bastard, even I was surprised at times, but this is his personality, and the Author (so far, ch 101) hasn’t ever forced him to act out of character in the name... more>> of plot or story development.

So while Leylin is cold-hearted, this is obviously not something you should rate the novel on. Are you going to rate NTR & Yaoi novels negatively because you don’t like the tag? Then let’s say you don’t like Fantasy novels, are you also going to rate negatively because this Fantasy novel you’re reading does indeed have Fantasy elements?

That seems pretty stupid to me, if you don’t like the tags, don’t read it. If you hate reincarnation novels, don’t read them. Why should this be any different, you don’t like cold-hearted Main Characters, THEN DON’T READ IT.

I don’t think to myself “now would be a good time for some fluffy and cute stuff” and then I watch Saw and complain about the gore…

Yes, there can be valid complaints about the novel, but most of the negative reviews are completely irrelevant.

And people complaining about the "chip" not being scientific, get real, do you seriously expect the Author to write paragraphs or entire pages of how it works? I don't see you complaining about CD and other xianxia novels chalking up "laws" to "Deep shit / profound mysterious crap.", which says nothing about it to the reader at all.

And even if the Author could, would you seriously want that in the novel? I thought most people read novels to get away from work and school, not to study science...

Are you also going to complain that you didn't learn about real world history from reading Lord of the Rings? <<less
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morli rated it
February 15, 2016
Status: c70
Like many people said, the MC isn't scientist at all! All of his scientist part come from the ridiculous OP AI chip he has in his past life that somehow got transported alongside him! And he doesn't have the mindset of scientist! The analysis, research and deduction the scientist usually have is done by his stupidly OP AI chip! And it was done in matter of second! The MC just take what the AI chip deduce as his own without slightest doubt! Very scientific of him! No effort at all!

He... more>> is just your normal xianxia protagonist with OP artifact! But the difference is he depends on his AI chip too much! Learning magic? Use AI chip. Researching something? Use AI chip. Don't know someone is friend or foe? Use AI chip. Getting out of dangerous situation? Use AI chip! All of his trouble is resolved by his AI chip! And he can't do anything without the help of his AI chip!

There is other problem too! He is heartless, self-centered, not driven by emotions and very calculating! That's fine, I like smart MC. Sadly, his character preventing him to have a good companion or lover! The MC just doesn't care about them and even will abandon them if there is no benefit left! The lack of character building for those characters doesn't help them either!

And the story itself has many issues! The MC is someone who avoid trouble very much! The flag that will lead to good conflict is avoided by him! He is so low key and calculating thus he has few enemies! And unlike other story where troubles encounter the MC often, his AI chip make sure he encounters few troubles! Because of that he is unlike someone who is in the center of conflict, but more like bystander instead!

If you read this review and have headache because of the exclamation mark, get used to it! This story is full of exclamation mark and you will encounter it a lot in this story! <<less
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Lebrew rated it
April 29, 2016
Status: --
I love this novel, 5/5. It has an interesting world, good pacing and a main character i really like. Yes, our main character is a homicidal, egotistical psychopath, but so is everybody else, so you might as well go with him. I think the thing i like the most about the novel is that though the MC might make choices you don´t like or agree with, they are still somewhat realistic and consistent with the established personality of the MC. Though he is “slightly” OP, he doesn´t suddenly challenge some... more>> huge clan and win through sheer power of plot armor.

He is cunning and avoids taking the blame for killing heirs of powerful families, unlike a lot of other typical xianxia protagonists. Also when it comes to romance it´s not like he is thickheaded or a lecher, rather he takes the middle road by having sex for pleasure and relieving stress, but not establishing any sort of emotional relationships whatsoever. While i feel kinda bad for Anna, i still think that his way of handling their relationship was the most appropriate considering his goals in life and personality. So summarized i really like the main character. <<less
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TheJudge rated it
June 6, 2016
Status: --
Heartless MC that will do ANYTHING to further his power, this include using and then throwing away little girls, classmates and anyone that he befriends later on the novel. His moto is if he has nothing to gain from them he'll throw them away, that or use them as bait. His ability A.I chip makes no sense at all, nor does the author bother to explain the plot holes in this novel.

There is no romance, friendship or teammates in this novel, the MC is a psychopath and as the... more>> story progresses he becomes even worse, some of the things he does is so despicable that they pale in comparison to what the villains have done. It starts out normal, but trust me you'll want to throw up by the time you get to the later chapters.

This novel is just below CCM, the novel that I regret wasting my time to read. <<less
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TimMit rated it
June 4, 2016
Status: c133
I never left a comment before, however, after trying to find something good to read I stumbled upon some negative reviews, thus deciding to clear up the whole thing.

WMW is not a novel for kids. By that I mean there no princes on white horses, a whole bunch of lucky things and so on. It is well written with logical flow given to the plot.

If you are looking for SMART MC, that is the thing you must read. He is not running wild and offends everyone he sees.

Many... more>> say this is not scientific and no experiments and so on. Well then I want to ask u, have u ever spoken to scientist in your life. I doubt it. Many experiments nowadays are performed in computer. I am currently writing a paper where all of tests are simulated virtually.

Many ranked low just because the MC is "evil" well I mean that is your taste. Why rank low? Are u ranking the MC or the writing. Why not just stating that it is not a novel for altruistic people.

Finally, I would like to recommend my list of novels to read. For those who find my comment reasonable and share my point of view. Otherwise, don't even bother to read further.

1) World of the magus world
2) World of cultivation (pretty slow start , but the MC is truly smart and continues to be one through the whole plot, the world is well made without major flaws) slow start u should endure at least 50 chapters before the action begins.
3) True Martina world and Martial world
Well written with a more as u say "good" character <<less
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takehisa rated it
May 10, 2016
Status: --
I'm quite shocked about all those low reviews, seriously, the MC is true to his personality, some of his decision might be cold, but hey, if you put a little thought, he's just a rational and reasonable man, and using his brain all the time
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Anbu_Hero rated it
April 27, 2016
Status: --
Ok look here people. Like most of the reviews here that gave this novel a 5/5 I indefinitely agree with their opinion on this novel. This novel is beyond amazing. If you like calculative MC’s and Fantasy novel that is well created and well thought out then this is for you. The story is has so far been interesting. The thing that has been pissing me off is that this site allows little B**** to write down stupid reviews that is degrading this series. Like seriously you give this series... more>> a 4/5 or lower because that awesome MC who is a highly intelligent human being is cold hearted unlike what you imagine of fairy tale novels where the MC is usually a fighter of justice and peace. Bulls***.

The MC isn’t even cold hearted. He has his own ethics. Just like in how the real world we don’t go out of our way to help every single person in the world acting like a knight in shining armor. He just does the same thing. His ethics are humanitarian to a certain extent. He punishes evil and helps those who has been of helped to him. He takes advantage of things and he has a brain that actually functions. Seriously this series should at least be top 10 in this site. Which is dominated by Chinese novels that are practically all the same thing with just a different name for the things they have. Yet I digress, I still enjoy them. But sometimes fresh and new novels like this are the ones that should be praised. <<less
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Yin rated it
June 1, 2016
Status: c55
After reading around 60 chapters of this novel I can only say that this novel is majorly disappointing.

The main character is claimed to be a scientist yet does not preform any action that a scientist would; rather, he simply orders his "deus ex A.I. Chip" to essentially act as google-sensei and tell him the solution to all of his problems. This is a major annoyance in the story as it is a get out of jail for free card that is used constantly. I don't believe there is... more>> a chapter where this thing isn't mentioned 20 billion times.

As for character progression? It doesn't exist. This story is meant to take place over several years but the main character acts as if he is the exact same regardless of how much time passes/is skipped in the story. His personality is one of a robot that has no emotions and thus is completely unrelatable. All other characters are given little to no background or screen time and are completely superficial.

Finally, the plot. It's pretty bad. It starts out with something that I can only describe as a grim Harry Potter type of story and then during the school arc it just gives up as if the author realized that the arc was incredibly boring and couldn't find a way to redeem it.

Overall I can't say I would recommend this novel to anyone. The characters are shallow, there is never any tense situations and the plot consists of A.I chip doing everything while the author scrambles to change the setting to something that isn't a complete bore. You're better off skipping it to read something else. <<less
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Darkanlan rated it
May 15, 2017
Status: c1200

A decent read about an A.I. chip and it's meat bag that carries it along it's path of cultivation towards eternity. To be honest I enjoyed the read up until the last 50 - 100 chapters, they felt rushed like the guy was just trying to end the series.

Worth a read, but I'd quit at about chapter 1150 or so and just make up the rest in your head. Went from a decent read to a regret that I finished reading it.

A number of notable problems in the series as a whole, there is absolutely no character development for anyone other than the mc and ai chip. You'll read 50-100 chapters about him getting closer to some woman while doing other things, just to have them end up in his hands and that's probably the last time you'll ever hear of that woman for more than a single sentence.

One of the biggest problems would be his wives / lovers and the kids he's supposed to have had. The guy only named two of them and didn't even bother to name the rest, doesn't even mention them more than once or twice. He even forgot that he said the mc had impregnated several women and only remembered two of them, then added some new ones in later and didn't even bother to name the kids. If you want to read about an AI chip and it's adventure with a ruthless worthless mc, this series is probably for you.

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Victor DoUrden rated it
January 15, 2016
Status: --
Not much to say really. Story is pretty shitty. The entire bullshit ai chip is just stupid and makes no sense “scientifically” and for a “scientist” he don’t do fucking shit as a scientist. Entire thing could easily be replace by I was an school student and when truck san came through the wall to hit me and my groups science project (that was mainly done by the group and not me) it hit us so hard we ended up in another world…. the entire thing of a “chip” not... more>> having the parts or body to process anything or take data… well… fucking magic because magic! Fuck processors, cpu’s, ram and well anything else a “chip” would need for operation because magic! MC is not, was never and will never be a scientist, just a hormone filled arrogant teen with large inclination for self interest. Story has no depth anywhere, just shallow and written to please the MC (and maybe some personal fantasy from the author as well)

I could not stand for this disgusting beginning this story has at all. Fucking chip this and that, abusing the chip harder then when a 40 year old fat perverted scumbag neet abuses his wee wee hard enough for cops to come for domestic abuse. Hell I half suspect the actual MC is the chip and is the one doing the controlling cause no fucking way some random “scientist” now some perverted kid (or more like is still) can magically kick an experienced fighters ass… actually wait no… um… fucking magic…. magic is how he does it…. plot holes!? fill that shit with magic. Pretty damn sure plenty of the original person stayed personality wise to meld with the supposed mc.

Oh no! ohnoohno noo something is happening! oh oh… ohhh… nope wait… false alarm we got the rocket propelled, gold diamond encrusted, silver inlaid platter…. and the fucking damned chip. :/

Personally Im sad and disappointed that the chip did not gain it’s own godlike perfect body (which for some dumb reason would be a beautiful girl in his preference) and wipe his ass and change his underwear too when not busy scanning/processing/initializing/improving

1 star author could have had something here but…. calling this half assed is still a compliment

PS to the moron above and those that understand the reference... Drizzt is written by a professional author who does not suck horribly like the author of this story on the other hand who probably failed or never paid attention to whatever is the language course over there... heck >.> ..... have read a lot of fics by first time writers that shit on this story in writing quality <<less
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Kurousagirei rated it
July 28, 2016
Status: --
1. "Deus ex AI Chip". That's what this story should have been named. First of all somebody please tell me how this guy is considered a "scientist" when the AI chip literally does ALL his thinking and analyzing for him. He doesn't have to move a single brain cell! Is that what counts as being smart where he's from? He is little more than a body for the AI chip to act through and literally CANNOT do anything by himself if the chip were to suddenly stop working because he... more>> relies on it completely.

2. I'm all for the MC that's efficient in everything he does and eliminates all threats to avoid stupid conflicts, not drooling for and risking life and limb for every good looking bitchy-as-hell female he comes across and chooses NOT to run dick first into danger for no reason. What I'm not for is an MC with a personality as interesting as sandpaper with a ridiculously OP AI chip to wipe his ass. He goes past anti-hero and straight into unlikable asshole. Looking out for your own self interest is not a sin, but it is when this one personality trait wipes away your very humanity to the point where he's basically an AI himself. I suspect that it's just a lazy ass way to boycott character development. He avoids even the conflict that he could gain from. He's less like an MC and more of a bystander that you would never really care to know about. Average in every aptitude but (funnily enough) schemes like a scumbag on the low.

3. It's boring. The whole story is like an onion. Conflict is essential to a story so it doesn't help the plot none when the chip solves all of his for him. There's no tension. I'm now 99.999% sure that this is the authors fantasy more than an actual novel.

4. There is no need to end every sentence with an exclamation mark. Especially not with a plot and MC as dull as this one. Some may argue that this could be overlooked but that's a load of bullshit. Punctuation is important for setting the tone of a story, but It doesn't matter how tame what the speaker is saying is, it WILL end with an exclamation. You start reading a sentence believing that it's an action packed moment but then you're disappointed when you find out how boring the what they're doing actually is. Is it supposed to make up for the fact that there's no tension? It will give you a headache if you're actually used to good writing.

5. There's fuck all character development so you you really can't give a flying frig about the survival of anyone in the story no matter how you try.

This story messed up my whole day. There just wasn't any coming back after this disappointment. If I could only give it a third of a star. <<less
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aldrinkhan rated it
May 17, 2016
Status: c122
World building (initial 10+) chapters kinda dull but after passing that it is a breeze. Not your typical chinese novel: no harem, no stupid or naive MC, no bloodthirsty MC either, no revenge focus, just a pure journey to the top
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Simple As It
Simple As It rated it
June 25, 2016
Status: --
The story was so stupid, everything is done by A.I. chip from his previous world, the MC doesn't appear as scientist at all, he just like ordinary person with help of OP artifact.

You have a problem with your body? let the AI do it! you have a problem learning from something? let the AI inject you the information! you are about to die because of negative effect? let the AI dispel everything! you have a problem with your combat? let the AI help you! The only thing that the MC... more>> didn't require AI is when he had sex, fuck that plot!

Moreover, "MC is cold blooded" fuck that cold blooded! he just basically uncaring person with unreasonable choice, he's from earth, he should've more "Humanity". He's unreasonably 'cold-blooded'.

Overall? Shitty and stupid story, MC with worst characteristic, brainless, and absolutely flat character with OP A.I. Chip, plot-less story.

Yep, completely stupid story in my opinion. don't read it, don't waste your time! <<less
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Kefi rated it
April 9, 2016
Status: --
I had no problem with the MC not being a "white knight" kind of MC, but when he starts to be a regular evil mage, I loose all interest in his survival.
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PandaZzz rated it
July 27, 2016
Status: c83
At first, I was very optimistic about this novel, seeing the reviews "calculating Mc, cold and calm, can be heartless, logical, no knight in shining armor, etc".

Having read up to c83, the chapter which I could not go beyond, every one of this adjectives that describe the Mc have are present in him. However, many of these are taken to an extreme such as being calculative and logical. Mc always bases his actions on logic and benefits. If he sees that something doesn't benefit him, he doesn't do it, and... more>> even though this is considered a good characteristic, it is taken to such an extreme that many of his actions are predictable.

He doesn't get into trouble unless he WANTS to. So every time some damsel in distress comes along with trouble and no benefit he'll look the other way. If that damsel seems like she wants to kill Mc, Mc kills her. If aiding someone in something allows him to get some material, he'll do it.

These are smart moves and should be enjoyable since I love smart MCs, but they are bland because Mc is mechanical, he has NO emotions. From time to time, Mc will lecherously look at a girl's body, but because he was some whoremonger, he will ONLY want the girl's body. No heart. This novel has no character development. It has lots of timeskips, but MC seems to only grow in doing more evil things like human experiments because this is how the author set the world up. Only by experimenting on people can a Magus grow. But, since this seems to be the only way the author allows Magus to grow stronger, Mc seems like he will keep developing a cold heart that allows no one to get through to it.

Relationships in this novel are non-existent in regards to Love. Only physical relationships because Mc does not develop feeling for people he spends years with. He has a maid who serves him for 3 years and he leaves after giving her remuneration.

This novel caters to bland power up adventures where he gathers herbs and material for research and potions. The decisions he makes also mostly derive from the deus ex machina chip that does all the work for him in every chapter. It's a handy device that lets anyone be calculative.
Albeit, I've only read to c83, the early stages of a novel can give a good idea of the story's potential and I'd say it was pretty bland. <<less
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ElDorado rated it
June 25, 2016
Status: c23
Horrible execution, typical premise (with a few add-ons of its own).

LOL the MC is nothing like a scientist- a true scientist would try to delve into the depths of magic research while caring little about power. He's simply a pragmatist with more self-preservation instincts than most of the hot-blooded, rash protagonists of this genre. Another deduction: AI chip which somehow followed his soul after reincarnation into new life. No, just no. Someone who can't write well shouldn't mix 'science' with magic, that's just adding oil to the fire. All it... more>> does it show stats and give advice on choices he is making. Final point. MC just flat-out has zero personality. Sure, be cold-blooded and ruthless. But there's simply nothing that stands out about him. He might as well be 'Villager A+no qualms about killing+pragmatism'. <<less
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Celebration rated it
April 25, 2016
Status: --
I don’t know what the person below me is talking about, he doesn't have a wife or mistresses. He has slaves and servants whom he sleeps with. And when he moves on he leaves them with money. He doesn't even give them the expectations of romance. He is respectful towards them and doesn't mistreats them, but they aren't his wives or mistresses. As for the AI chip. It isn't op or haxed. It is more like a super computer. Meaning it is only as smart as the information the mc... more>> puts in and the question he ask. The MC himself has to be able to utilize it well. If not it would be useless. Similar to how 95% of us don’t utilize our own computers.

While 4% are hackers and programmers. Then there is that 1% that is on some other level stuff. That is our MC and he uses his AI chip well. Not to mention he is the one that made the chip in the first place. Our MC is just brilliant. I don’t get how some of the reviewers are missing this. He isn't a saint, he is definitely out for himself. Though he isn’t opposed to assisting others, but not at the cost of his own well being. He is cautious but he isn't cruel to people undeserving. He’ll help if it doesn't hurt him. He isn't a martyr. Everyone has to live with their own choices. The MC completely believes in the dog eat dog world. He is arrogant but frankly he has every right to be. <<less
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Ananya rated it
July 30, 2016
Status: c55
This novel has a great cheat ability in the form of an 'A.I' chip which transmigrated along with the MC to the present from his previous life in which he was a 'scientist'.

The MC is just as described in the above description. The world is a medieval western setting. The fights are good and they are pretty thrilling.

The main problem with this novel is the MC, its just that he may be a MC but he's not a 'Hero', so basically I didn't find any good reason to root for... more>> his character.

The world in this novel is just as cold blooded as the MC if not more, so while I may pity some side characters but then again I didn't feel good about them.

The main problem with this novel for me is the MC. There is no justifiable motivation for the MC to seek power and rise to the top, only probable motivation is 'survival'. He does not care much about other characters, since he always keeps them at an arm's distance. So the stakes in this novel is pretty much low.

In a nutshell, in other novels if the villain kidnaps someone closer to the MC, then MC will risk his life to rescue that person but if it was this MC in same situation, then he will probably think what is the point of rescuing that person, and if he has any use to him, only then will he consider rescuing them otherwise.....he will simply discard that person.

I mean I can't speak for all, but for me the 'MC' in this novel is very cold and there is no real reason to root for him, so I'm not gonna read this..........but it may not be the same for some of you.........so please give it a try and decide for yourselves. <<less
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scribbledoutname rated it
June 13, 2016
Status: --
Great premise, really bland execution.

I REALLY wanted to like this, because I love mages and magic schools, and the premise is great. But unfortunately, everything excluding the premise is sub-par. The characters are bland, Leylin is not only boring but also lacks the superior intelligence and reasoning you'd expect from someone who was (supposedly) a scientist in his past life.

... more>>

Just as an example -- from the very start of the story we see Leylin being moronic and walking around eating plants so the AI can figure out what they do. What? Is this what a scientist would do? What happens when you eat poison? I actually assumed that maybe the AI would be able to control his body and eject any poison of he were to consume it but this isn't the case. He was just being an idiot.


The AI is also extremely inconsistent. There is no rhyme or reason to how long it takes for it to figure things out... it's really just down to when the author wants Leylin to be able to do something. I don't understand why it takes the AI so long to do accomplish certain tasks when you compare those tasks to similar ones.

It could be because I've just caught up to a few great xianxias but I find the world boring and unrealistic with the occasional hint of something cool, but there's just not enough of it to keep me invested.

I really wish this was a better story, but I've given up on hoping the story will evolve into a world rich with interesting magic and compelling characters, rather than a selfish douchebag who is wholly dependent on an inconsistent AI and has deceived himself into believing he knows anything about the scientific method.

If you want to see a real scientist in a magic school, you're better off reading Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality. <<less
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Molenir rated it
May 7, 2016
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Not a very good story. Lots of issues. Some of them may be due to translation issues, but more likely are caused by the author. As other reviewers have pointed out, the MC is not a “Scientist” No scientific method, no real experiments. Rather it’s a guy who got a magical artifact.

The MC is simply a sociopath with no redeeming features or qualities. Apart from the occasional Skill Up, there is no character progression, nothing to make us invested in him, other then... more>> the fact that he is the MC. Additionally the world is so poorly constructed and thought out, and some events so poorly considered that immersion constantly breaks down as you scratch your head saying huh, what, why?!? Rather then delve and into greater detail I will simply say, there are way too many plotholes in the story. I read up to around chapter 100, and then couldn’t be bothered to read further. I simply can’t stand the MC, or this poorly written story any further. <<less
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