The Romance is profound in a way. Its very deep. A girl who has an OP power but a tragedy because she can’t touch anyone. She may act like a Tomboy Oujousama but she does not act spoil at all. There’s more to her then meets the eye. I hope the Author puts her into good use!
He inherits the power of a Dark Void 6th Rank Warlord. Who once turned the Galaxy upside down. He becomes not just stronger then Earth Hero but the entire Milky Way Galaxy! Before you know it he inherits Dark King abilities who once nearly destroyed the Galaxy Alliance! He was already stronger then the Hero then imagine just how OP he is!
Its amazing how Han Teachers Dark Walker and Path were both connected to Han predecessor Dark Void. Being of the Old Generation and long retired. They nurture and teach Han becoming a Monster!
the only girl is Nancy whose in her mid 20s. The author could had made her main heroine and really used her character...but instead made this Novel really weird.
He meets the immortal Goddess in a disguise. But c’mon make use more of the idea! Not just “oh its her ill just be on my way then”. Quin Er is very interesting and caring and to much for her own good. I like the fact that she’s cold as stone and a very complicated character with so much potential not being used! Xu Yue. Well she’s just there, sometimes it feels that she should be Quin Er instead because she’s been with the Mc a lot more since the beginning.
She was a mass murderer after all and he was trying to get stronger. You can tell she’s already fallen for him since he did that. I still simply just don’t like the Author ways of doing things. You could had made him gain her abilities in a cooler way you know? Lets not forget she has a body of a 13 year old and called “beautiful”
I really like the fact that he uses his knowledge that he learned in his previous life. And I like the fact he uses Demon techniques to defeat Humans and even Demons themselves. But again hes reckless and doesn’t think through it most of the time. He is like stupid dog who keeps biting things bigger then him. Since Chapter 1 he spills important secrets and is way to open! He should had just wag his tail and pretend to be ignorant and let his family underestimate him. Not very intillegent just desperate to change fate and gain power even if its through evil deeds. He realizes this himself. He doesn't care how many sins he's committing as long as he can save her. Its like a Robber justifying robbing a Bank just for the sake of his poor family. I don't like that. Don't try to justify your deeds. But at least he admits what he is doing. In truth he can be a even better character, he even stopped drinking and helped the Immortal Goddess from being scam. He even hugged the girl he raped at the very end...even so I hate how he is a huge hypocrite. In the end its not for Quin Er but to benefit him
The Main Character is incredibly insensitive and Alters the Memory of his Fiancé to stop liking him. He also has called a 7 year old attractively beautiful. What the hell? As for the Yandere tag. The Author has failed making a Yandere. The Girl Oyando is merely obsessed with him to the point of annoying. Most of the time she doesn't even act her Yandere role! It was forced upon her.
Don't add it 300 chapters later! It feels like he is huge manipulator and everything is for his convinces and whim.
The Main Character. Ni Lie called the father of Ye Zuyin shameless and liar. Dude you are the one who invaded his daughter home. You were the one who blackmailed him. He is only doing it to protect her. You are bullying yourself in.
There's a girl name Vivian. She's a freaking amazing character. A million dollar idea! No doubt. She's an adorable little witch girl whose OP. But..the Author is really cruel not utilizing this character properly! She only has little scenes and we see her through more Tragedy then good. The other one was Knight Girl. She showed amazing potential and growth! But after a few chapters she just becomes the "Beauty Girl who attracts everyone" Why stop these characters?! Instead they're only used material for his Harem..to make Mc look good. Ah there's also Medusa and Ghost girl. Deep backstories but no utilizing their characters!
Basically all these bitches are spoiled lol. At first the Main Heroine Ina had good potential but then just loses her purpose in the story and is just another side character blindly fallowing him. I hate how all his wives said "I should introduce myself to father in law." I'm like "Bitch didn't you just hear what Erwin said? They abandon him! He has no parents or family and his situation with them are bad right now.. yet your this conceited."
Even all the $ he's gotten was manipulated by the King. The King gave him so much money for his "Work". Good thing right? Wrong. He gave him so much money so he would have no choice but to spend it to develop more territory for the Kingdom.
I think the MC had no choice but to go on a dark path since the beginning. It makes me really sad because this kind kid had to carry a huge burden. How else can he change people views and bring back old technology? Obviously a brainwash society will try to stop him from bringing change. He needs to be a King who brings fear. He has no choice. In order to bring to the best results. I really think Jenny is the light of his life and he still shows that he cares about her but wants nothing to do with her. I can't blame Jenny but I hope she seriously makes it up to the MC. She has to get angry too. I still feel furious for Jenny betraying the MC but you can't blame her for being brainwashed... I like the fact the MC has loyal friends who have his back. He might had lost his adoptive parents but he was never truly alone after that. He still had a few loyal friends and a old man who saw MC like a son. Only a few have betrayed but MC always one step ahead and is not stupid. Even if they betray him. He will still win.
Suddenly the older sister who was the main villain is in tears because the prince has other women.. But isn't that natural since he's royalty? And she's crying about it! Wtf after causing a lot of damage to MC this was your breaking point? Then she gets raped by the guy she loved! This is stupid.
The MC husband also has been obviously lying to her that he's a honest and pure king but she still forgives him! I don't like it.
I do like the fact its anti polygamy! We see the perspective of Women being forced to married or being concubine. The feeling of wanting to be first and not sharing their spouse.
I love how she pats her pet beast like a villain. It's like Dr.Evil lol. But she's not evil at all. Even though the Author states her as a cold demon. But her heart is swaying so much emotionally..truly stupid.
I can name a lot of things that happen but ill name only one. Mc comes back to his Kingdom only to find it being taken over. Characters got killed. Wow so you pretty much ruined everything you builder up in the first 100 chapters! You've been foreshadowing the Kingdom Ancestor and he only appears once just to die! Goddamit what was all that Tension for then? What was all that build up momentum for then? the Ancestor would be a badass character just to appear and die like this?! Writer does this a lot..
The Romance is cute and darn adorable in some moments. Seeing the Mc have father-daughter times..with Dan Fei. Also Huang Er mysterious girl who shows up in the first Arc [obviously main heroine] despite being main heroine she rarely shows up half of the series. The mysterious foreshadowing she gave as the Heroine was good idea but randomly just popped up! I wish Author was more Organize. It was cute how she fell in love with him...she always wanted a guy to sing with her and when the Mc does she cries..it was a beautiful moment. I almost even cried. As for the Princess Gouyu and Zithuro..Author is just cold..they were in the Story right off from the start! So why does the Mc have to reject them like that? She's loyal and long for you since before you even got big. She knows you wont accept her but still chooses to be by your side even if as a Servant. She knows your to far to reach and so what? Dan Fei is weaker then Gouyu so why not her too at least?!
Monster Girl, cool right? Normally I dont hate this sorta thing but she's desperately trying to appear like a Human Girl to appeal to the Mc. In reality this Character knows nothing and is only using the Information and Body that was given to her. In the end she's just a Monster. And when you point this out she gets emotional or even angry. I hate that she convinces herself to be so. Author could make a better use of this idea of a Slime Girl. But fails to do so
Fatty, pretty girl...
I really think "The Terming World" is interesting because NPCs have a mind of their own but... Players actually rape these NPCs. Its too weird. I wonder if they actually see them as Real Humans or AIs that aren't alive?
The MC just never questions anything or is least bit cautious. Often he would disguise himself and his girls as grown ups with [Fake Growth]. I thought it was pretty badass at first but he then meets a 20year old girl who is obviously desperate for love and is jealous of his 2 kids wives. So the MC uses the spell to make her temporary young again so she can relive as a child once more. She forcefully acts like a spoiled child wishing to be pampered. But right when he was going to switch her back she refuses and says she wants to play more. Its obvious she's waiting for the chance to be his "wife" but MC is oblivious to it. Its like she manipulated the whole thing to happen! It gets on my nerves. Should I just ignore that the whole scene was manipulated like that? Should I just ignore that his 2 wives easily accepted it because "its fun with more people"? They take it like their playing house. It becomes predictable at this point. The Princess and another older girl come to the Harem. Maybe the Demon King will go with the same process. Get girl younger to join your harem. Why introduce more unnecessary girls? It had good characters like the Grandpa and King. I was starting to warm up to the Older brother. Now these characters blindly follow the MC and it just gets plain boring. It was fine the way it was but it becomes to Harem-mie.. Lets not forget he's only 9 and she's 20!
To loli girl to teacher to sexy girl to big breasted tsundere to childhood friend.ect it goes on and on. You can feel the Author indecisiveness. WTF I really liked that girl who slapped him and even almost undressed herself to test him if he was loyal! The Childhood friend accepted things too easily. Well at least its not Polygamy right? But when I saw the other girls who had more character development be jealous of Childhood friend who barely progressed at all. I was kind of hoping for Polygamy..that's how bad the romance was
The thing I was looking forward the most from the beginning was Revenge. He never fully got it and failed even after becoming OP and its just gets postpone... Author does a lot of stalling. Even his entrance to invade the party was boring.. Akatsuki did not make a badass entrance and everything was done to easily. I had high hopes in him forming a badass group but after recruiting 2 characters the rest was forced and rushed! That was one of the biggest disappointments of this Novel