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HikikomoriGirl
HikikomoriGirl rated it
Reincarnator
June 23, 2016
Status: c50
Well...the idea is nice. I am a fan of the Apocalypse genre. Especially when the MC has a 'leader' trait. In this novel although the MC pushes people away a lot, many admire him as someone strong and want to follow him. Anyways, it's the writing that I have a problem with. The story jumps a lot. One minute the MC is making plans about something and before we can actually see his plans be carried out he's already at the last stage taking on the 'last boss'. This makes... more>> the story confusing at times...and I heard that it even becomes more confusing after chapter 100. In my opinion, besides the MC, the characters are too flimsy. It's as if they aren't there at all. I actually want to know more about the MCs three friends that we read about at the first chapter. I feel as if they have more 'presence' than the others. So far, this story simply follows a guy who is willing to sacrifice others to reach his goal and eventually save humanity as he gets more OP along the way. <<less
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HikikomoriGirl
HikikomoriGirl rated it
Warlord
May 21, 2017
Status: c2
Okay, lets forget the overuse of events found in this story and even the writing that confuses the writers once in a while (I've encountered two in two chapters so far). What really gets to me is the description of the character's color background. Usually, in novels where there are characters from different cultures etc. they introduce them in a 'subtle' way or use a word that will not offend readers....but what is up with this novel?

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"The left eye was pure dark like the other ordinary yellow people."

"The girl replied as she looked back at the negro bodyguard."

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Just this is enough to make me cringe while reading the first two chapters. I don't even want to add this to my dropped list. I admit that there are some novels that has an arc where the author can be a little racist according to some readers. Although some people might disagree that the author of this novel isn't a racist since they might be Chinese and also included descriptions of their own race, the use of terms makes me think otherwise. <<less
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HikikomoriGirl
HikikomoriGirl
9 Heavenly Thunder Manual
April 7, 2016
Status: c110
This is one of the very few novels that is set in the modern world that I enjoyed...mind that, it's in the past tense. But...there were many things that I found really ridiculous to the point that it wasn't even funny. The whole mixing with modern world thing was all nice and stuff, but there’s a limit to that. Once a certain word was included in the story, I had a feeling that it had something to do with the MC's identity. It was after that I started to come... more>> across many things I didn't like. <<less
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