After The prince sent an assassin to kill MC. What did MC do? he let the prince go, since MC doesn't want to have a conflict against the prince country. I call that BULLSH*T! MC just destroyed 5 freaking Kingdoms! and he was afraid with one kingdom. The hell was the author thinking, He could have just given the prince a beating before letting him go! To much! I have enough with this whimsical author!
To hell with MC disappointing the princess who waited for him for years just for MC to annul there marriage! The reason? MC is afraid since he has to many enemies! Still afraid after he can destroy kingdoms! and has the backing of a major Empire not to mention the two saint ruler who is MC's friend!
And how can I forgot to mention MC is beyond OP already! Still afraid? seriously! go jump on a cliff or something! after you killed lots of lots of people! Still afraid? Its not MC fault its the author way of writing!
The 36 Fire and Wind Girls betrayal and this girls was left untouched and was just discarded as if they never existed in the first place!
I believe that this girls is where MC spent Trillions of Money, Show them Tender Love and Care, and with out doubt the most chapter consuming characters was really actually trash and unnecessary, it left a bad taste to me. The agonizing part is after there betrayal the author sugar coat its words twisted it and say this girls never betrayed the mc. Still no matter what the author say.. this 36 girls spent more time reporting to the 4th prince than supporting MC, This girls even said the only reason they follow MC was because of the 4th prince order. If this is not betrayal then author has yet to feel being betrayed.At the end this girl was never been punish and was just ignored by MC.
The punishment of the 4th prince and his wife was actually a big insult to most readers as the author only shows 1 single chapter for it! Imagine the 4th prince has taken everything, Everything from the MC and yet the 4th prince punishment was just 1 chapter! I can only see a childish revenge from MC, at least author should let this person suffer more!
This clearly show the authors lack of comprehension towards revenge. And we can also see that in future development the author might make this kind of approach and well end just another waste of time to various readers.
MC little army of mystics, The Tree Man. The stone man. The nymph and so on.
MC little adventure every know and then (MC is still 10 yrs old)
OP MC is already common so its not really worth mentioning.
How the Enemies died brutally, but some things also quit disappointing how that annoying girl died so easily in 1 hit after all her plots and attempt to kill MC and His father
The MC encounter powerful people befriend them and then left MC side. Seriously what's the point? appearing before MC and then after they leave MC is then put into a life and death situation.(This has became a copy paste so expect a lot of scene with this sort of plot)
MC meet a girl same age but much stronger than MC and the girls father was the ruler of there place, and made MC her man servant. And what happen next? They got almost annihilated. The prostrating part MC got blamed? seriously who is in there right mind blamed a 10 yrs old kid? at this point I already feel like not reading at all. Imagine after all MC effort saving the little girl when he return he saw his father got beaten up and his mother almost dying(its not really surprising since like I said the copy paste plot this is not the first time MC sees his father and mother got beaten)
After This the girl and the mysterious old man went back, Surprisingly not a single reward for MC! They just gone left disappear!
MC is always get cornered and often almost died.The obvious Enemy has never been punish, The father of MC always insist not to take action although he already know who the mastermind is.
As a result they are cornered again.
They send MC to get help, I was like WTH!? mc is just happily traveling and encounter another random thugs and beat the crap out of mc?
You see it once, Twice and in the 3rd time it got annoying, Father and Mother got beaten badly, MC and family always got cornered. Plot please move on with the copy paste sitting!
The new scene where MC ask for help, I no longer look forward to it
Reading almost 100 chapters of this with the repetitive scene which is like copy paste. Can you blame me if I don't expect anything new?
MC was sent to another world got a certain legendary title (The Hero Tittle duh..) by accident.
Along the way he was force to choose between two paths (If anyone still remember the dream thing) It was to live a simple life in this new world or follow the path of a legendary hero in the past.
This is your average person we are talking about not some other MC who have some experience in novels,anime and etc. So we can't blame MC to be extra careful. Next is the coward part of the MC is a side effect when MC Mana is almost depleted which is normal in that world(when mana is near zero one well have negative emotions).
And while at it we must not forget that this Novel is called Slave Harem for a reason, and yet this can't be called a hentai novel which give to much details to sex. (People who over react on the sex part has just super wild imaginations.)
Another thing is its not that the plot is not moving, base on the latest chapter a lot already happen.(MC already joined a secret organization and got himself an ELF is already a big achievement in my part)
(when we talk about slave having an Elf is a must..)
MC got awaken into some amazing power and a very rare bloodline? what happen next? got kidnap? No force to submission by an unknown individual who force train MC so he can send MC to a suicide mission just to find some unknown item that he need.(seriously side characters where did you all go?)
I was like, Did the novel just turn into a monotone story focusing on MC being slave driven by an unknown enemy. Did all the side characters just disappear? It feel like all the characters the MC meet didn't exist in the first place (such a big disappointment). Why? since the MC is like Go to school after school MC train with that unknown character.
"As for the training from Sun Bo Fang, every day he had to go through the same thing over and over again. Sun Bo Fang would just summon an unknown type of monster from the Void world and let Xu Liao battle with it." - Chapter 23 (MC forever alone even the demon girl left him lol)
First where did the demon girl go? (suddenly drop and was forgotten?)
Second where did the OP Grandma guardian go?(also drop and forgotten?)
and Finally, what is the point of MC registering into that demon organization?
As if that demon organization doesn't exist in the first place?
MC was like serve in a silver plate to the unknown enemy that well send MC to a suicide mission? If this go on then well drop this novel if the following chapter still continue with this boring plot where every character MC meet was easily drop and forgotten!
MC is collecting undead beautiful girls at his special room (1 of MC skill where MC can choose a place as his room and inside MC is like a god)
The Worst part is MC is acting as a retired virgin who is" just look and no touch principle"
Under normal circumstance this should be good in typical harem or vanilla type novel but for crying out loud this is end of the world zombie type of novel
Who is sane enough to see beautiful undead girl naked and well just nod and say "o look they are beautiful" I was like just have sex with them already!...
His Bias view of the world is ok in Kill the men and spare the woman but in the end MC just became another hypocrite because of this a living person died..
MC with his Friends Started Kill Stealing over and over again. Never ending training. The battle scene is like a huge recycle of the previous battle. To much similarity that only the names of enemies had change. It good at first but once you keep on reading the same thing it becomes annoying.
I mean most of there Enemies are famous this famous that. From some Major exaggerated Sect so on and so on, It took must words in every chapter explaining backgrounds how famous this characters and by the next chapter they Died in a few sentences.
Seriously disappointing and like I said it often happen a couple of times when random person appear came from some famous major sect then they want to Kill and steal from MC group and end up dying. If they are just gonna die at least save as a trouble of having to read there backgrounds. The story can move forward even if this random characters is not introduce.
MC and his group still inside devil abyss TRAINING. Yeah its so boring. A repeated Kill this Steal this train that kind of thing. The battle scene already lost its meaning
One major Disappointment was the MC and the girl he save Horun. In normal plot they should be together but yeah author love to troll MC and Horun well never be a pair.The girl just married to some random guy who randomly appear and ask for her help. Seriously at this point I feel like dropping the whole novel.
Another thing is the God’s. They can’t decide if MC should be guided or destroyed? seriously you gods brought someone by mistake at least take responsibility to the very end. What annoy me the most is how the MC easily believe others and has no sense of achievements. Its ok to be an adventure doing ODD jobs but at least try killing some random bosses like a certain MC together with his gorilla wife! And MC is scared of the nobles plotting against him? Seriously those noble was scared very much to the dragon he just accidentally killed!
Also one of the thing is the author love to destroy or cut plots. To hell with the introduction and the plot of the very start. Nothing that matters. It went fly away to another world lol.
“The sky. That was the first thing that the young man saw. The deep blue sky."
“Without a warning or any reason I, Watase Kousuke, was thrown into another world. I killed a dragon and saved the noble girl Horun who was sent there as a sacrifice” (seriously this girl should just die so useless waste of words to speak about this girl who just went somewhere and marry some random nobles).
After killing the dragon, his power greatly increased and he was granted the chance to live in a different world. (Another this he was not Granted a chance he was FORCE to live in a different world).
Together with Horun, they went to the home of the Witch Alice to ask about this world. After learning about the events leading to Kouske appearing in this world, they went to the city Berassen in order to test if he will be able to survive. (yup I hated that B*tch horun already lol and alice is like an old baba 80 yrs old witch, They forgot after a few chapter they left MC alone lol poor MC the girl he save just got NTR with another random noble guy)
This is his adventure.” (The last thing you wanna read in this novel is the MC start a REAL adventure!)
Chief's wife advice MC to handle or control his harem as soon as possible before they all turn yandere level and start stabbing each others back.
I can't help but agree since its already pass 100 chapters and MC has yet to show LOVE to other girls except for Novem.
MC's half hearten approach to his harem was really the only disappointing part on this novel as I read to much harem genre novel and most girls well get a satisfying love from the main characters which is severe lacking on this novel.
I wonder if the day well arrive when MC well embrace the girls or well it became like a certain shield hero which is ended ignoring majority of the girls lol.
But so far base on TL's novel I can see a harem type where the MC only ended in one girl.
Clearly the HAREM on TL's novel are just a Trap (in my own opinion) not I blame TL for that but it was actually fun where you feel seeing a harem plot while you are aware that it is only harem by name yet it is clearly not
Seriously all characters so far are useless The 2 decent character are really hopeless. That broadcaster girl is getting on my nerve. She is beyond useless can't even use her as a shield.All that died was not because of MC but rather of there own action
Killing Millions of People by destroying a kingdom (before MC got sent to his 2nd life) or Tricking and destroying an entire sect. Crippling the bad guys (show no mercy to them).
MC's action mostly so that he well destroy the root so no problems well cause in the future. I also love how MC extract revenge (It's very satisfying one way or another).
I hate how people say MC's action is Morally wrong! I mean this is fiction there is no Moral what so ever since this world our norm does not apply!
1st girl was the girl who help him after MC destroy a whole kingdom killing Millions of girls (currently a 10 yrs old girl since MC went back to time in a parallel world)
2nd girl was his aunt (not blood related)
3rd girl was his Fiancee (the Ice girl)
4th girl was the blue princes
5th girl was the fairy Ice(3rd girls Masters sister)
6th girl was the phoenix girl
No names since I don't wanna spoil (seriously to many names can't help but forget about them). Why I did not include his loli master? for crying out loud she has no body in the first place does only exist at MC's mercy.
I'm very satisfied with the romance its not to much and is shown with some spice. Since this is not a romance novel in the first place
MC just battle 11 powerfull opponent and still not won? seriously is that even a tournament!?
This is clearly bullying from the author as the current enemy was another love interest for MC!
And so many disgusting and annoying enemies in the shadow, for example the guy who cultivate using women who's targeting MC's first wife. This is the worst enemy an author can think. It never leave a good taste when someone see women just a tool to cultivate.